Tokyo's Martial Sage Wins People Over with Virtue

It's too bland, the author. You set the protagonist to be invincible, but the pressure of invincibility was not shown. In fact, I could accept the very bland monster fighting at the beginning, but the psionic power around chapter 60 should be considered a small climax, but I still didn't feel the pressure of the protagonist's invincibility. I thought it was a problem with your writing that you couldn't write the battles well, but I have to admit that your writing was pretty good. Also, I thought at first that you wanted to learn a punch routine that is powerful but not known to everyone, but every time the protagonist fights monsters, someone sees him and leaves his name, but even so, the protagonist's powerful reputation is still not obvious.

Overthrow the small Japanese town government and establish himself as king

Saiyan physique, right?

Qiuzhui

To be honest, there was no need to add drama to Shuten. I really wanted him to die as a character. I expected the male protagonist to confront him and kill him at the martial arts festival. It's understandable that he didn't die. Now you kill him and leave him a descendant. Isn't that disgusting? When I think about the mistake of the protagonist group, they let go of a scourge that can cause more trouble than a drunkard. Isn't this lowering the ability of the protagonist group?

This book is good. The protagonist has a clear understanding of his own invincible strength. There is no bad point in this book. The biggest poisonous point of this book is that the author does not have a clear understanding of his own position. In the book, the current sister is a tsundere, a sickly fake man (with an oversized built-in), the queen will probably have friends and besties drop by the sky to give women free of charge, etc. I just want to say to the author, you are thinking shit. Code properly in the small dark room, don't think too much. It's impossible for you to say this, so don't be obscene, code with peace of mind, and put away the habit of collecting books that read many times in your books. I can smell that smell (*•̀ᴗ•́*)و ̑̑So we bear these things for you, please rest in peace⁽˙³˙⁾◟(๑•́ ₃ •̀๑)◞⁽˙³˙⁾

About Saitama in Chapter 2 Choosing Saitama as your opponent is a very bad choice. Apart from superhuman strength, Saitama has nothing to learn. Strength cannot be taught or learned. According to the setting of One Punch Man, Saitama is invincible. The meaning of being an opponent, if you don't follow the settings and turn Saitama into a stronger person, it will be even more meaningless. Saitama has no skills and relies solely on strength. Without the invincibility setting, there is no meaning at all as an opponent. It is better to choose a hungry wolf as an opponent.

I really don't understand the protagonist's plug-in, and the setting of the simulated battle in the head is really difficult to explain in words - there are too many loopholes, so it is better to just use a plug-in to create the projection of the strong man from all over the world. Everything else is pretty good, I hope there will be more descriptions of how to make sweets every day.

A small suggestion, heroine, please don't go too many, just a few is enough.

Wherever there is invincibility, there is me