Starting from Marvel, Sword of Heaven

The author has not updated it for a long time. It seems that he is planning to become a eunuch... My feeling is that the copies of this book are becoming more and more biased. At the beginning, Marvel was okay, at least it was a relatively popular copy. The writing is pretty good too. But the ones at the back become more and more biased. For special cartoons like "The Adventures of Jackie Chan", which are meant for children, I have only heard the names. Also, despite the fact that many people keep shouting that there is no heroine all day long, one-man shows are really boring. No matter what kind of work, if there is no emotional integration, it will be very boring. People still know how to make up a story when selling something...

Too little. At least ten updates a day.

I rescued Captain America in an alley at the beginning and gave him the SSS serum? Isn't this mission too simple? The difficulty of the mission and the reward are so different. Why don't you give me the six-jewel Infinity Gauntlet?

To be honest, don't write about the main god's space. There are too many and the imitations are so boring.

He is so talkative that he talks about everything...

To be honest, in a secret service organization. Unidentified, also contacted Dr. Erkins. Do you think all the spies from World War II are fools?

Regarding the so-called kendo, without extraordinary power, kendo is the use of sword techniques and fighting skills. With extraordinary power, kendo is just a weapon that releases power with the sword. It is the same with knives, guns, sticks, and other weapons. They all come with extraordinary power to fight against others. Even in the later stage, at most they only come with laws and rules or Dao to fight against others.

The most important thing about fanfiction is to understand that the protagonist you write is the protagonist, and all the plot content revolves around the protagonist. The original plot characters cannot overshadow your protagonist. What is even more taboo is to let the protagonist be soy sauce and then write the original plot. Therefore, the Adventures of Jackie Chan, after reading a few chapters in the early stage, I don't want to read it. It depends on the author when you end this period and open a new copy. I think the transition to this world is more interesting than this.

It's taken from the story of Captain America again, and it's almost terrible.

Sometimes English and sometimes Chinese, which affects the perception.

What's going on in this episode of Jackie Chan's Adventures? Why is it that the plot is forced and the protagonist is just too good to be true?

The content is quite good, but it's really confusing to go back and forth. If you can't grasp it, don't write like this. Wouldn't it be better to finish writing a world and then go back and forth? If you don't have the writing power, don't get involved.

He's said to be a swordsman, but he can't tell.

Not bad! Didn't feel too great. I've seen a lot of Marvel fan fiction, but this one can only be said to be average, and it's okay to pass the time.

Just make do with it! It's just that this character is a chatterbox and talks about everything (ﾟoﾟ; I don't have much desire to read more!

I thought it was a one-shot, but I didn't expect it to be a wireless horror type, and I lost sight of it instantly.

It's boring, it has no women, it's deliberately unconventional, it's a real sword.