Dragon Raja: I Won't Return, but I'm Starting Over on Hard Mode

I have read a lot of fanfics (for personal reasons, I only read Lu Mingfei's protagonist, no time travel, no harem, no teardown of the original CP, Lu Hui's novels, so there are some good fanfics that I haven't read), including Restarting Lu Mingfei (broken update), Lu Mingfei's Second Life (broken update), Lu Mingfei who was A-level at the beginning (broken update), Restarting Life (completed, read) The Head Is Not Enlightened), Lu Mingfei Returns from Sekiro (Completed), The Final Chapter of Dragon Rights (Completed, Free), Lu Mingfei and 17 Years Old (Serialized), Lu Mingfei Read Dragons Before Slaying the Dragon (Serialized), I won't write specific reviews of these books. In short, the ones listed above are all ones that I think are well written (selected from dozens of fan books). This book is still being serialized, but I can already rank it in the top five of these books. In terms of writing style, it can be in the top three (personal opinion), and the world view and plot supplements are also well done (except for the opening events, which are a bit confusing). To put it objectively and concisely, if you are a fan of Dragon Clan, it is definitely worth watching! ! ! ps: Don't be dissuaded by the title of the book. The early plot design is not good, but after reading chapters 2 and 30, it will feel smoother.

I only saw the Norton part. The author weakened the arrogance of the dragons. After all, the furious Norton cannot be gentle to creatures other than his own brother. This problem may be small, but it is too fatal for me. Norton's memory is too long. For the immortal creatures in the setting, the era is like white. The 20 years of Old Tang's experience are too short, and it makes people feel that these 20 years are very important. But in fact, these 20 years are just the ashes of Norton. It is just the readers' own senses that define these 20 years as "important". The separation is too strong for me.

Here is the author. After much thought, I decided to post it. The moral of this article is to develop a larger dragon world, which will connect many myths and gods from all over the world, and fill them with dragon identities. And it will epically strengthen the next generations, such as the crotchless Old Tang and Teacher Daye, giving them the oppressive feeling of the Dragon King they deserve. I have a wonderful idea about Long San, and I hope to be able to write it down by then. Although not many people will read it, I will probably finish it. At least now it is for myself back then, using another way to make up for the regrets of youth. Thank you to the readers who like this work. If you don't give up, I hope I can show a dragon world in my mind.

The content related to Old Tang is so well-written, but it may not be popular because there is too much irrelevant information written in the early stage; for example: 1. The sad story of two minor supporting characters 2. There is no foreshadowing of the battle with the blood of Loki. This group of villains just appeared inexplicably and has nothing to do with the original work, and it is still at the beginning. The lack of foreshadowing does not mean that it is simply foreshadowing, but that it is not linked to the original plot. For example, I didn't know that the plot line you wrote in the early stage was not Long Yi There is less about Lu Mingfei and it is not Chuzi Route. The early writings were personal creations that were not linked to the original works. Readers abandoned the book as soon as they saw it was different from what they thought. 3 There is less interaction with other characters. Everyone likes Chu Zihang, Fingel and even Nono, but there is too little written in the early stage, and there are only a few conversations with Zihang. Although they fought together and separated on the battlefield, the content is still about 50 chapters. (However, the description of the second-tier characters is very good, such as the principal, vice-principal, original characters, Old Tang, and the nanny group. At this point, all the Dragon Clan fans are not as good as yours)

The opening is well written and raises expectations. Then it was quite satisfactory. You thought he could score 90 points, but the result was 68 points. That's what it feels like.

I don't have any other ill intentions, I just take the liberty to ask. Is the harem still a single woman? If it's about stock trading, I won't read it.

Make a note, starting from today, cast three recommendation votes. If not, then I forgot.

I can't stand it anymore, tm Fenrir is an older brother, an older brother

I feel like this is one of the top among Dragon Clan fandoms. It's very interesting without following the original plot, so why isn't it popular? Is it because of the name?

It feels like the game is almost done after the Battle of the White King... It's exciting at the beginning but dull at the end. Let's not talk about the transition in the middle. After the second restart, the pace slows down. SOS, who wants to watch Raiders of Japan and Battle of the White King again? It's better to just drag out the Black King and play. The second reboot might be interesting if you open a new book... The story of Lu Mingfei, who grew up under the rule of the Dragon Clan, is quite interesting.