Cultivation to Immortality, My Tripod Can Copy

There is this kind of treasure that can be copied without any cost. How about not being a hamster? There are not too many copies of the Formation Compass. Prepare 100,000 intermediate spiritual stones.

The acting is very good, but the main character is not good. It makes my scalp numb from the embarrassment.

If you have good exercises, why not practice them again? Anyway, there is no shortage of resources to repair it quickly.

It's a good write-up. Don't write it again. Just move bricks.

The things written by the author in this book for the foundation building stage are not harmful to the early stage of foundation building. They might as well describe that they can only be used for the Qi training stage.

It's outrageous that a small realm can create coercion. Is the coercion more powerful than magic? Then why practice magic?

Give the protagonist a hook, but he still has the temperament of a beggar!

Your sister, why are you always exposed? You weakling.

After reading Chapter 9, I feel that the author is not writing a novel. Novel needs a lot of description to advance the story. Most of this book is narrative, The author needs to expand the narrative into description. For example, what you see, hear, smell, touch, the character's psychological activities, the character's expression changes, body changes, language tone, character actions, as well as the main contradictions, secondary contradictions, and what golden fingers have solved. The advancement of the plot requires reasonable events, and promoting it by reducing intelligence will make people disgusted. The character design of the protagonist also needs to be reasonable. For example, if you have this copied golden finger, you should follow the rules and develop quietly. You clearly feel that there is something wrong with An Ranran, but if you follow him out of the city, aren't you putting yourself in danger?

Either don't write the bloody plot, or write it to the end. If you don't catch the chicken feathers for a long time, you will get a lot of poison. . .

With such a strong relationship, the crisis awareness is not strong.

How can we not have an anti-monopoly system with this treasure? The world of cultivating immortals is monopolized by the big clans, and all kinds of exercises, skills, and 996 are all interrupted. It's a lot of fun to have access to.