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I couldn't stand it anymore after seeing more than 20 chapters. I set it myself and couldn't remember it. Then the timeline was confusing. In the first place, it was said that he was a strongman, and later he became a martial artist. Then the monthly salary of eight taels of silver changed to forty taels. Huaiting Township became Beiting. People were fighting zombies in Huaiting Township. Wang Xiaowei had dinner with Poshan Martial Arts School to arrange personnel.

Don't hire a ghostwriter this time, just write it by yourself.

The protagonist is reborn as Tang San. At the beginning, he refuses to worship the master, marries Qian Renxue, makes Xiao Wu a licking dog, joins the Wuhun Palace, supports the Wuhun Palace to unify the two empires, and takes his wife Xueer to meet his father Tang Hao. A different protagonist Tang San, who does not join Shrek, marries Qian Renxue, and violently abuses Yu Xiaogang and Dai Mubai. Come and take a look. Just click in to watch. Douluo: I, Tang San, will marry Qian Renxue in this life

Isn't this author the god of sun who was taken away? When I first wrote about the Taoist priests of the Northern Song Dynasty, I promoted my own incense, talismans and so on in the chapters. The practice system in the book was also based on the actual practice of contemplation and spiritual preservation. What is important and what are taboos are explained one by one. At that time, it was said that the author was either a Taoist priest at home or a practitioner. After writing about the gods of the Six Dynasties, his writing style began to decline greatly, but it was just that the protagonist was disgusting, and the story could at least be told clearly. As a result, now, I can't even tell the story. I just look like a ghost who has been taken away by a lonely ghost. The original owner is long gone 😅

This author is also a fairy, and the more he writes, the worse he gets. Back then, the Northern Song Dynasty Gods and the Six Dynasties Gods were better than the other, especially the Six Dynasties Gods. Lao Liu's character can be said to be the most comfortable character in this author's works. If there is another book based on Lao Liu's work that is better than Lao Liu, he will probably sign a contract with the great gods. What is the result? There is a swarm of licking dogs to reduce intelligence, and even the author level cannot be preserved 😅

There are so many people with inexplicable names Kuaidao King Hu only came out after his death …………

This author has always been inconsistent with what he says before and after all these years, he is still like this

Why are you so good? I used to pursue Ta Xue Zhenren and your book together. Now Ta Xue is a great master. Your level back then is no worse than his.

Why can't the author write such magical books as "The Immortals in the Broken Temple" anymore?

This author's book has a lot of typos. As I read, sometimes the protagonist's name is wrong, and the realm is sometimes reversed. The previous chapter has 5 levels, the next chapter has 3 levels, the previous chapter can form a pill, and the next chapter can build a foundation. Can you really read it? Does the author use machine software to write books? Every time the title and introduction of the book are well written, the actual content...

Eating is outrageous! As mentioned in the previous article, the protagonist has a monthly salary of eighty taels, plus the accountant, but the protagonist and a few colleagues had a celebration dinner and ate more than one hundred taels, which is a year's salary! Are you eating dragon meat? As mentioned in the previous article, the protagonist only took one tael of medicinal chicken and he barely ate it. So the question is, what did these pig friends and dog friends eat? Are you embarrassed to eat someone else's salary for a year?

In the late Northern Song Dynasty, there were gods and immortals in ruined temples, which were my favorites. I lost track of them after chasing them 😓

He always makes meaningless things, such as sect competitions. For example, this time, the official sect can provide it, but he still uses the internal scenes to do the official examination for the sake of official slaying? What's the matter, is there nothing written with a specific word count? Do you always engage in these useless and disgusting plots? How can I put it this way? This book is good-looking, but it is useless and meaningless. There are too many things that make people speechless. The previous plot of a book determines its popularity, and the author did not grasp it well at all. It can be said that the plot before entering the sect can be simplified or directly crossed out. I almost couldn't help but give up the book before. It felt like I was looking for a representative. The quality sometimes varied greatly, and it didn't look like it was written by one person. This time, the interior of the garbage was the same as that of Zongmen Da. It felt like it was written by one garbage. Other times when the quality was good, it looked like it was written by another person.

This author's books are not as good as each other

He writes the program using a computer, or hires someone to write for him, and he often gets the wrong answer.

The melting pot of myths and the Immortal among Witches felt like the author's level had plummeted. Is there a change of writing? It feels like a studio flow. This book is one of the few books in recent times that is decently written. I don't know if it's because of my improved writing skills or something else.

There are people who criticize this book for not being able to read it, and they criticize it to death. No, the author himself has completed one book after another, more than ten books. Some people in this book say that the author has sold out. Since the author first completed the book "Being a God in the Last Years of the Beizong", an atmosphere has basically been formed. Some people say something about the studio, my wife is a ghostwriter, and my account has been sold. The first and last books were so good in the past, but now they are no longer good or something, and they are trying to persuade me to quit... After eight books and ten new books, Heizi has this trick. I pondered, each of these books would really change hands, more than ten times. The level has dropped to the center of the earth! What kind of ghostwriter can write more than a thousand chapters and keep it on the shelves at a general level? Do you think that the author is really the original author of a popular Japanese comic and has so many ghostwriting resources for apprentices? Each book is written under the same framework, with fresh creativity from different angles, using character writing to write new ideas about the plot, world background, and even the level of system force. It really takes more than ten people to take turns to code. This unique writing style and the consistent worldview and values ​​of Taoism and the universe are definitely a treasure IP and a school. It is rare to be able to maintain the same style, update the book at the same pace and upload the same time. Every time someone formed a group to complain about something that was not as good as the original one, they were chasing people to be Shen Nong and beat up the guests. Then they finished a new one amidst the sound of gunfire, and another group came in with the same tone, repeating it over and over again, how much hatred and resentment. The most amazing thing is that many people have "revealed" that the reason for the quality problem is that it has been sold. It is not the old one who wrote a book and became a god. Well, one after another, as long as a new book is opened, the revelations will not stop and are filled with comments on every book. No. 1 Was sold to No. 2, So No. 2'S writing was not as good as that of No. 1, And the new book was rubbish. No. 2 Sold it to No. 3, And No. 3 Wrote worse than No. 2, Which is rubbish. No. 3 Was sold to No. 4. The writing of No. 4 Was not as good as that of No. 3. It was rubbish. No. 4 Sells No. 5. No. 5 Is not written as well as No. 4, Which is rubbish. No. 5 Was sold to No. 6, So the writing of No. 6 Was not as good as the previous number, which was rubbish. No. 6 Was sold to No. 7, And the writing on No. 7 Was not as good as the previous one, No. 6, Which was rubbish. It's No. 8'S turn to take over. Naturally, there's not enough for No. 7, Which is rubbish. No. 9 Pull. No. 10 Wasted. Eleven garbage. Twelve cultivations will lead to righteousness. No. 13 Is weird. Unknown date on the 14th. Hold the gold brick on the 15th. Achieve immortality on the 16th. The Seventeenth Emperor. Eighteen ranked in the immortal class. Nineteen hundred defeats lead to enlightenment. I was reincarnated at twenty. It turned out that I had never written a book, it was just an illusion. Twenty-one spiritual energy has revived. Twenty-Two World War has ended The author of Twenty-Three traveled back to 1999 to resolve the crisis Twenty-Four will not cultivate immortality in this life and change to the entertainment industry ...

This sect is chasing after the protagonist to feed him, and the protagonist still dislikes not having the initiative to eat. This kind of mentality should be thrown out and accepted by the society.

A portion of three taels of medicinal food seems expensive, but treating a few colleagues to a meal can cost nearly a year's salary of one hundred taels. I can only say that the protagonist is really generous.

This guy's ruined temple has immortals, it's okay, a Taoist priest in the steam age can barely see it, and the rest is just a bender.

Let me complain, the writing style is completely inconsistent, and you often include private information. Why haven't I seen you so good at "bringing information" in the books I wrote before? If you really feel like you can't make it through, why don't you feel moist? Did you sell your account or hire a studio to write for you?

Can I read this book? I have only read Six Dynasties and The Broken Temple, this author's novels, and they were okay.

I think it's okay. I'll ask if there's a female lead. If not, I'll leave first.

Why create a golden finger? I am a golden finger myself.

This ending feels a bit sloppy

I think the writing is pretty good. Except for a few typos, it's not too bad. The look and feel is quite smooth.

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This introduction is very similar to the fog outside the country.

I hope to cut it off soon and start a new book.