We Were in Hogwarts, and We Were Blocked by a Werewolf at the Beginning.

It's very good. It's a rare setting among Harry Potter fans that the magic power is spell strength. In other aspects, it basically respects the settings of the original work. There are also many secondary design creations that are very imaginative and seem reasonable. This is the first time I have seen them, and they are not the kind of novels that just copy the routines.

Eleven-year-old first-grade children fight against adult eight-eyed spiders... A twelve-year-old child who is 1.76 Meters tall has ever considered the feelings of the children around him who are 1.34 Meters tall... The protagonist discovers that the Small World Box worth 300 Galleons actually wants to copy it and make a summoning card instead of buying one... Newt's box is actually only worth 300 Galleons... Romanian dragon trainers each have a Newt box... There are only five questions in the final exam written test... There is a "T" in the exam score. It's a spoof of the Weasley brothers, okay... The protagonist gives Fudge and Pink Toad a sleeping spell every day, and even considers whether to kill them two directly. Where did this evil element come from? The reason why I didn't kill him directly later was that the price/performance ratio was too low... In fact, this book was quite good at the beginning, but it started to fall apart after opening up the game vision and functions. I completely let myself go, and I no longer need the three views...

There are details that should be investigated, such as where the protagonist's money goes as a member of a magical family, and details that should not be paid attention to, such as changing the noun from prefect to supervising student, and the appearance of some people. This kind of content is not beneficial to the development of the story. A lot of ink has been written. In the end, he was directly dissuaded from the Weasley family's inference. According to the author's analysis, Arthur Weasley spent money indiscriminately that led to his poverty. In other words, as a father, he would rather his children use second-hand books, live in poverty and be embarrassed in school, than do some economic planning. What is there to respect about such a father?

It has passed the internal investment, welcome to invest and follow up!

......... I don't know what to say. With so many people objecting, the author still had to find a wife, and she was also the mother of his classmate.

Hope heroine Umbridge. 🐶

The protagonist gradually evolves into a dog ready to mate.

Let me give you a suggestion, every good HP fanfic starts with picking up Hermione and Black Ron...

The Empress of the Palace: Cassandra (senpai from Snake Academy, poisonous tongue, arrogant queen, super genius)

Let alone an adult dwarf having an ambiguous relationship with an underage girl, there is nothing wrong with an adult dwarf having an affair with a widow. The former is a moral problem, what is the problem with the latter? What do you mean by taking a moral stand? You guys are standing in the XP position, so let's play J.

Is there any serious problem with choosing New World? Why

Goodfellas, Hogwarts, Diagon Alley and other places are resurrection points. Everything in Gringotts can be accessed with just a thought. The level of the Killing Curse can be easily abused by Quirrell. Killing ants can upgrade the spell. This is the fan with the highest HP configuration I have ever seen. He is invincible upon entering the first year.

The choice of New World is disgusting. Let's wait until this paragraph is finished before reading it (if I remember this book)

So what, I heard that the heroine is Malfoy's mother, is that true?

I listened to others' advice and had enough to eat. My advantage is that I listened to others' advice and slipped away. I guess it's a poisonous weed.

Go ahead and write on your own, and see how many people will read it later.

The previous one was pretty good, but since I traveled through the first different world, everything I wrote was messy. A confusing setting from a movie that few people have seen was crammed into Hogwarts. Who cares about this different world?

Perhaps the author has his own arrangement. The author split the protagonist's golden finger into a non-exclusive chat group-type writing style plan.       ， Then it becomes a group chat. So why not put this part in Chapter 1 from the beginning? Gods are OK. Goldfinger is not unique to OK. It's okay to travel through time with only one non-protagonist. How many more Laoba's secret burgers can be stuffed?

Extremely toxic, poor writing, bad plot, subscribe with caution

The stuff is good, but if you don't write emotional scenes, why don't you write it? So embarrassing

What a piece of shit. The protagonist actually fell in love with a fat old woman. The author is so mean-spirited that he only dares to find an old woman as a wife. It's really embarrassing.

Wife? I haven't seen a married heroine in Harry Potter. I'll have to check it out. Is there any Penelope?

How can I put it, we found a little plot in a lot of papers

It's a novel that I don't quite understand. I just can't read it smoothly at the beginning.

Your novel was not as difficult for me to handle when I was reading. It bothered me even when I was sleeping. I really couldn't stand listening to it. The more I listened to it, the more energetic I became. Your novel made me feel uncomfortable. If you had to change the way you wrote it, I wouldn't advise you to screw it.

It becomes more and more boring as it goes on. There are always so many characters to perform in stage plays, and I feel tired.

Harry Potter's power system is quite innovative, but the main character is disgusting.

It's really not fluent, and the speech is very convoluted.

It feels like it was written while sleeping. Did the author type it by voice? There are no punctuation marks, and the transitions are very abrupt. I listened to it through an audiobook, and every now and then I had to turn on my phone to see what was being said, so I abandoned the book.