Lamp Repairer

Write some fictional dynasties, you write about Qin Dynasty, you write about Bai Qi, the sense of historical substitution is too strong, it feels like it affects the reading experience

The subject matter is good and the writing is okay, but the details need to be improved, and the worldview needs to be changed as soon as possible. The fact that you substitute history is a big contradiction between your book and how will readers read it? How to understand? Too much sense of division

What is the protagonist's personality like? , Are you cold or cold? You won't mind your own business, right? Is he a lone ranger? , I don't like too many women, it's best to just ignore them in one go

Too many jokes that are out of date and inconsistent with the world view ruin a good setting.

Normally growing rice requires water worth 53 Willing Power Beads, which can be planted on 1,800 acres, with a yield of 350 kilograms per mu, or a total of 630,000 kilograms. The protagonist's village has a yield of 900 kilograms per mu, which is more than other villages. The rice is sold for 12,000 kilograms and costs 1 Willing Power Bead. Where the protagonist is located, the food is not sufficient enough to be sold at a low price. At present, the only place selling rice openly is 100 kilograms of rice and 1 Willing Power Bead in the city This emmm

This book is not for normal people to read

Please remove the background or introduction of hell and the first 5 pages. It's too inconsistent. Are there living people, villages, and fields in hell? ? ? ? Why don't you explain this?

Like and collect, hehe

Like and collect, 🤭

This thing is just laid out above, it's just a small city, that's nonsense to me. The logic is unclear and the brain is unclear

If you come, read Chapter 12 first. If you don't want to run away from this book, you can continue reading it.

Even normal people can't stand this book.

It's nice to read. The subject matter is novel and not cliché. Good luck to the author! ! !

Forget it, I read weird things like world names, city names, etc.

The book's ideas are pretty good, but it still lacks a cause-and-effect relationship. In other words, responsibility, responsibility that should be given. For example, if you inherit the human lamp, is there a saying or a cause and effect? Need to bear. Such as being responsible for the luck of maintaining the race. Killing the pests of these races will also enjoy corresponding luck. Or incense. There are many aspects that do not have these causal relationships. There are only some organizational relationships.