I Am Cultivating Immortality in a Strange World

Cultivation is a high-end profession, but it has been turned into a refugee camp.

Wen Zi Jing (Anonymous) Come in a hurry, don't meddle, the road is solid, it is difficult to fight. When encountering injustice, think about self-reliance. When encountering difficulties, don't shut yourself away. If you have many friends, you will have nothing to hide from; if you have few friends, you will have few misfortunes. If the enemy is not established, he will be in danger. If you strike first, you need to raise the ashes. Look for a backer, lean on your thighs, don't be self-sufficient, don't feel inferior. Selfish desires are the root of disaster. Take care of your life first, and then cultivate your character. The road is ahead, go steadily, keep looking, misfortunes will never stop. Although the treasure is good, don't take it by force. The truth of the Tao is the result of correction. If you go astray, retreat before you advance; when you encounter an opportunity, you will gain something later. Xi Hong, a good old man, was finally punished, how miserable. There is a sorcerer who has many schemes and is knocked unconscious and put in an iron pot. God of water and fire, if provoked, the pillar of heaven will fall, and his life will be fruitless. Lao Xuan Turtle has a happy nature, does not know how to hide, and suffers misfortune. Kuafu died, Yi shot down the sun, all turned into ashes, and fell after the calamity. The old witch ancestors were extremely powerful, cautious and thoughtless, but sad. In the past, the demon emperor had no one to look at, and he could not escape from the cruel things. From ancient times to the present, there have been many strong people. How many of them are left to this day? The Dragon and Phoenix tribes are unjust, strive for luck, and end up lonely. After the lich divided the heaven and the earth, they were provoked and all fell. When people get up, they sing rituals and music, saints and wise men help them, and there are many immortals. In my generation, bad luck is hidden, the path to immortality is complete, and wealth is achieved. Live in peace and contentment, worry about disasters, do things steadily, and reject cause and effect. Those who show off will be punished, regardless of their merits, only their duties. Avoid natural disasters and make changes; avoid man-made disasters and leave no pot. Pay homage to the seniors, respect those who have gone before, respect the saints and the strong, and gather merit. Burn incense diligently, cultivate yourself diligently, and gain immortality. Don't be lazy. The road is endless, the heart is boundless, the road is steady, and there is no empty space. The more confused your thoughts become, the harder it will be to achieve perfection. Don't worry too much. Now that I have heard of the Tao, there are many difficulties. The Sutra of Stable Characters is kept by the side of my hand.

That's too much. To compare the hero's bravery, why not change it to the Virgin Mary?

First, you know that your magic power is special from when you treat people's injuries. If you don't try the elixir you have prepared yourself, you can try it to see how it is different from others, and how to hide yourself in the future. There is a lot to write about here. You can use it by yourself. Second, since you can live forever, how can you be so stubborn? Let's highlight it. Since immortality means that you can learn everything, try to make yourself comprehensive and know everything. Learn how other people write it. I feel that your writing is very bland.

What is the protagonist's personality like? , Are you cold or cold? You won't mind your own business, right? Is he a lone ranger? , I don't like too many women, it's best to just ignore them in one go

Come to Zhihu. At present, the biggest problem seems to be that the writing speed is too slow. Five thousand words a day is a passing level. You only have 50,000 words in more than a month, so seriously don't write online articles. Or you can write for a while and then save the manuscript, and then publish two chapters a day.

The writing style is deliberately so watery, it's really too much

It's useless, mainly to practice the third level of Qi, directly kill the fifth level, and follow the ninth level. Later, he crossed the border To be honest, no matter how you set it up, it was impossible to kill the fifth floor And you forced to kill the ninth floor. It makes it so that only you have the equipment and no one else does. The smaller the environment is, the more exaggerated it is. Not suitable for watching too much

An important piece of information for the monks of fantasy novels. Traveling through the Immortal Stream is generally a case of persecution and paranoia. Therefore, the Lime Martial Saint, poison, hidden weapons, traps, plate armor, light skills, avatars, and invisibility always hide in the shadows of others. They have a mediocre appearance and have no impression in a crowd. Occasionally, they like to go to romantic places, interact with people from all walks of life, and like to read all kinds of books, especially humanities and geography.

After reading about ten chapters, can the author tell you what's so exciting about your book? What attracts readers? Or are you deliberately setting up barriers to screen readers?

If possible, please post your critical comments on this book here so that I can adjust the subsequent plot and ideas. Thank you for your participation. Thank you very much.

Another crappy beginning, I don't want to read it.

It's beautiful, the dog inside is so cute

Will there be any plot about worshiping women?

Please update soon. Too little. Accurate

What can I say? There are many poisonous points in your novel from the beginning. You can read it once in a while, but I don't recommend it. But in chapters 34, 35, and 36, you can see for yourself what is written about the third or fourth level of Qi Refining. The protagonist kills the foundation building stage. This made me laugh. ! ! It's not fun and exciting. No one is reading it. Others will say that there are cheats and it's fine as long as you stay up. Why is it inconsistent with the title of the book? It's a typical example of selling a dog's meat with a sheep's head! ! ! So at present, there is only one way to write Gou Daoliu, which is to write the flow after breaking through the bottleneck. This way is more exciting, and it can also reflect the intelligence of the protagonist and the villain. For example, if the protagonist is at the peak of the 3rd level of the Qi Refining Layer, his qualifications are very poor and he has to take a small barrier-breaking pill to break through to the 4th level. At this time, you have to inquire and observe. , Here you can write about the protagonist being Lao Wang, hooking up with the wife of a Taoist friend who has the Little Barrier-breaking Pill, and persecuting him to take the Little Barrier-breaking Pill, or you can write about failing to seize the Little Barrier-breaking Pill and being seriously injured, then recovering from his injuries and then fighting the Little Barrier-breaking Pill. Nowadays, many novels state that the protagonist will succeed if he takes action, which is very annoying. I always feel that others are fools. I hate it very much. The longer I practice, the longer I practice. The more scheming you become, the more you become an old fox. Occasionally, it is acceptable to write that the protagonist fails and ends up seriously injured and escapes. As long as you are good at disguise, you can still change your identity and continue. Write an adventure from the 3rd to the 4th level of Qi Refining, once from the 6th to the 7th level, once from the 9th level to the foundation building, and so on. Only Gou Dao Liu who writes this way can read it. , Pay special attention to the fact that the golden elixir and thunder tribulation must find a place that no one knows about. Once the big forces break through, you will not be able to hold on anymore. In the human world, there are ants under the Nascent Soul, and the golden elixir still has to survive. Therefore, the thunder tribulation must find a place that no one knows about. 🪖🪖 I gave you the idea. Do you want to think about it?

The writing of Gou Dao is not meticulous enough. For example, if there is a crisis in the city, generally speaking, the protagonist of Gou Dao will run away, but you have not foreshadowed in the article how dangerous and difficult it is to go outside.

It is recommended that the author go to the non-heroine bar to attract readers, as long as there is no heroine, ambiguous female supporting character, OX behavior, flawed logic, and brainless intellect. They will want to come.

When I see someone say that they are in crisis, it is difficult to describe this. Personally, I feel that writing Gou Dao should reflect the subject matter, right. When people see names coming in, it is painful to see that they are all brainless and conspiracies. Personally, I feel that generally there is a crisis in the general direction, but I see a crisis in a small direction. I don't have a big crisis. I don't know if the author will accept it. Gou Dao writes more about daily writing.