People in Marvel, Host of Venom

If you want to see the protagonist's fighting power crushed, you can stop at the Heir family The protagonist will be at a disadvantage against Gnar later. I can accept this, after all, Gnar's lineup is still very big The fight against Ultron again can only result in a tie? ! Even though this Ultron has the Mind Stone, it doesn't have any epic level enhancements. It's only to the extent of the original Vision. The protagonist can only draw with it in a head-on battle! Is it because the author can't think of a new plot and can only suppress the protagonist's combat power?

I just saw the fierce battle, and I just couldn't understand it. Even if you didn't write an invincible novel, you could have arranged for the protagonist to be defeated. Why did you arrange for a pure and innocent thing to easily threaten the protagonist's loved ones? The most important thing is that I don't understand what you are saying. I can't understand why readers would think that. Who in the average person doesn't want to protect his family? Is it difficult to understand that the safety of your family is more important than yourself? Do you really not consider the readers' feelings at all? Or do you really think it's easier for someone you care about to be hurt than for yourself to be hurt? Also, you arranged a high-IQ setting for the protagonist, but he behaved like this. He was stronger than others but was crushed by his pure IQ... I just want to ask you one thing, will it still be like this later?

The protagonist doesn't know the plot of Marvel, but the author does, so this setting is meaningless, unless the author doesn't know the plot and doesn't understand Marvel, so it's okay to write like this. The author knows the plot, but the protagonist who travels through time does not. To develop the plot like this is nonsense.

Once again, I saw the palladium poisoning. Many Marvel novels have it, but even the original novel did not grasp the key to the problem. Iron Man needs that to suck the missile fragments in the blood vessels. He can completely change the energy source to provide power for absorption, and then use an external energy source for the Iron suit. . . . . I don't understand why so many people don't think of this. Is it because it's not feasible?

I think the writing is very good. I really like this kind of novel that although it unfolds a bit slowly, is rich in details. Many novels now introduce a system immediately after time travel, and then the protagonist immediately understands the use of the system and starts to go around to fight against SHIELD. This kind of novel always makes me feel that the first three chapters are just an outline. There are really fewer and fewer such slow and gradual advancements.

World view setting: It is a brand-new parallel universe. The subsequent plot development will involve many characters and events in comic books, movies and animations. It is a comprehensive but brand-new parallel universe. Protagonist setting: After time travel, he only has the memory of his previous life, no memory of his new body, and no knowledge of the characters and plot. Character setting: single female protagonist It is written in front to clarify the type of book, so readers who do not like to read it with caution

Protagonist himself = assassination character Invisible form ≈ Spider-Man Muscle form = demolition machine

Kingpin sent people to kill you, but you just ignored him? Don't you want to investigate? It's like this place is out of gear. Instead, he went with Spider-Man to investigate Mysterio. Then Dr. Lizard came out without any foreshadowing (although everyone knew how it came about), and then briefly explained the relationship between the Green Goblin, Goblin, and Kingpin, then talked about daily life, and then briefly got to know Tony, and then Doctor Octopus came out ( This is the one I've seen so far) The overall feeling to me is that after revenge, the following chapters are all put together with the stories of some villains. There is no continuity at all. You can add whatever you want If it is my logic, it should be that Kingpin failed to send someone to kill you. When you go to investigate who it is, you come across someone Spider-Man is looking for to imitate him. As a result, there are conflicts due to different ways of handling crimes (this is written). Let's get to know each other briefly, and then go through the daily plot. Then Spider-Man finds you to solve the Mysterio, and then returns to your own home. The investigation deepened, and Kingpin began to run out of manpower. Because they knew that you were a superpower, and originally infiltrated Osborn for his genetic engineering, they increased their efforts to lure Osborn out of reluctance and started looking for trouble, and then took up the lizard man plot in comics or movies. This is enough for you to write a lot Last point, why don't you solve the mental problem? Just leave a bomb in your head?

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Doesn't it mean that Pig's Knuckle doesn't have its own plot? It feels like going everywhere to go to the show has nothing to do with you, regardless of whether it has anything to do with you. Are you a nanny?

Burglar Black Cat

How should I put it? In the past, revenge was indeed very interesting, but later on, taking the path of a superhero was a bit following the mainstream. Being decisive in killing was good, but being a vigilante was indeed a bit inappropriate 😂

Not bad, it's just that you, the protagonist, don't need to be written as a time traveler. I don't know what arrangements you will make. I guess it's just to get rid of the blame for the buffs later.

Venom

In the plot battles, the protagonist is basically replaced by Spider-Man, and there is no sense of violation.

It's hard to get popular, and a time traveler who doesn't know the plot is too defeated. No wonder not many people read it. Don't blame the author for a book that doesn't cater to the public's taste.

Some readers read it quickly and may not understand the setting of the protagonist very clearly. I will explain it in detail here. First of all, there is no amnesia in the setting of the protagonist. The memory about him written in Chapter 1 means that after he time travels, he only has the memory of his previous life, and there is no memory of the new world. In other words, there is no memory fusion. Secondly, it is not because the author cannot remember the plot of the character because of amnesia, but because his setting is like this. He saw the appearance of a relatively famous comic character like Spider-Man, so he only knew that he was in a world where comic characters existed, but he did not know the characters and the plot. He knew the character of Spider-Man because when he was taking care of the children in the orphanage, the children all liked Spider-Man, so he knew about Spider-Man and knew that this was a famous comic character. However, he only knew about Spider-Man and did not know that Peter Parker was Spider-Man. Finally, the world structure of this book is a brand new parallel universe. The subsequent plot development will involve many characters and events in comics, movies and animations. It is a comprehensive but brand new parallel universe. So when you see the character, you don't have to worry about which version it is. It's OK for everyone to bring in the version they like.

You can click on a paid chapter to comment, Relatives Sacrifice Heavenly Stream, I'm disgusted anyway

There are no major problems with the plot, nor are there any poisonous points. It's just that the writing is too plain and the template is quite serious. For example, the characters' speaking habits are very single, with only a few English mantras repeated over and over again, and the character creation is also relatively flat. But the author, please work hard and write slowly, it will be fine.

The name of pig's trotters is too weird, and I don't feel it makes sense.

Venom

Test the Poison: The author's plot is a bit too "classic". At the beginning, I spent so much time describing the "relatives" and the warm living environment. If I haven't written seven or eight chapters, I'll just sacrifice it to heaven. I can't stand it.

Subscription is only for 10 tickets. Some can't see it. Set up a top student. A gangster who writes to avenge his adoptive father is more of a spy than a spy? No interrogation was possible at any residence. Marvel Marvel. How do you write about adding mutants. Why would you die if you lose control of your abilities? Dark Phoenix has something to say. Build your own company and it will be useless.

I think it is one of the more exciting Marvel fan novels. The writing is also good, the characters are relatively appropriate, and there is no brainless design. Except for the sacrifice of relatives at the beginning, there is only this one poisonous point, and the rest is quite comfortable (now I have read Chapter 200) I feel that the performance of this book is a bit poor. You can read a few more chapters before leaving.

This heroine is not very popular. It would be better if she replaced her with a witch or Gwen.

The Venom written by the author has experienced Wade, but the chatty and funny character is not reflected, and instead he looks like Raaster? Laughing to death

The writing is quite good, but I still feel it would have been better without that female Felicia.

If you have anything you want to complain about, you can write it here. I will delete it regularly if you post it in other places or if you don't understand the settings clearly. After all, many readers who haven't seen it can easily be misled. I hope everyone can understand.

This eggplant-style water flavor is really too strong.

Can we not just do one-on-one combat? According to Marvel logic, Doctor Strange and Thor should be called upon to fight Gnar together. The Mind Scepter can also be developed and utilized.