Pirates, Start by Overthrowing the Celestial Dragons

The writing is okay, but it's a pity that it's a self-created character crew 😅

It was made very clear from the beginning that the protagonist's dream is to take risks, sail a big ship, pick up big pony girls, and do big things. He is neither a pirate nor a navy. Generally speaking, his stance is more righteous. After all, they are all well-educated people who have traveled through the past. Simple and kind empathy can never be discarded. This is also the principle of the protagonist's behavior. Kill the scum pirates and the disgusting navy. When there is injustice on the road, draw your sword to help. As for why I kill pirates but not the navy, or I think the navy kills too few, I can only say that it's okay. In this world, the vast majority of pirates are murderers with blood on their hands. Although the navy is ultimately the dog of the Celestial Dragons, it also protects civilians. Some disgusting navy do exist, but they are only a minority. That's why the book says that the justice of the navy is incomplete justice. That's all. Readers please remember that this is fan fiction. You can regard it as a parallel world. The author is not a roundworm in everyone's stomach, and it is impossible to write out all the plot developments that everyone wants to see. If any reader feels that what he wants to see has not been written, please do not speak out with fierce words. You can also create your own to satisfy yourself. The stories written by the author are all stories of possibilities arising from his own fantasy galloping in the sea. You can just read it and enjoy it. If you really don't like it, you can also find something that suits you. In short, I would like to ask everyone to keep reading and support me. At present, the development of this book is just fine. As long as I can eat, I will finish the story. The development of the subsequent story is still very exciting. All readers can follow Baker. Morin to turn the sea upside down! ! !

The first point is that Luffy is an adventurer. I have read a lot of fan novels and they all have this sentence. Did you read the fan novels or did you write it after watching the anime? Why does it feel like I read a fan novel and then wrote it myself? If I have been following the anime until now, then pirates are garbage among garbage. As long as they are pirates, they are garbage. What about the navy? There is a lot of garbage at the middle and upper levels, but less garbage at the bottom, and most of it is good.

Three crew members have been recruited, including the four scheduled crew members of Nami. The combat is not noticeable, nor is Sesel's. The original characters have no highlights. The original characters are eight years earlier than the original work and do not have the characteristics of the original work. Coupled with the fact that the protagonist started to behave inexplicably as Brother Pig when he heard the name Baccarat, I didn't have any desire to read on.

In terms of subject matter, it is not about following a boat. It is much earlier than the timeline of Wang Lufei's departure to the sea. It is semi-invincible and has multiple female protagonists. It is worth mentioning that the female characters written by the author are not facialized. Personally, I think it's a lot of fun to do fandom that abuses the Celestial Dragons, but this is also something that most Pirates fandoms that start with the protagonist being enslaved by the Celestial Dragons will relate to. Let's talk about the fruit of the protagonist first - the secret fruit. In fact, this Pirates fanfic also follows the path of "I'm Not Interested in Devil Fruits" and "One Piece: The Infinity Gauntlet", which can master the abilities of multiple devil fruits. Of course, this book does not allow the protagonist to master the power of multiple devil fruits in one step. At present, he can only master two. Later, you can look forward to the Golden Lion's Floating Fruit and Becky's Castle Fruit, and then building a castle in the sky to arrange a harem is still very good.

The chapter about Baccarat was extremely discouraging. The protagonist was led around the whole process, and Baccarat looked like he was eating green tea. In the end, the protagonist had to "suffer some loss in order to get her on the boat." Even the so-called first kiss seemed to be calculated by the other party. All in all, I don't know why after hearing her name, she pulled her into the boat even if it offended the sand crocodile. The process was like Brother Chu being toyed with by Green Tea.

The story of "Food and Grass Pirates" is very detailed in its portrayal of the characters, and it is also very interesting in daily life. Especially the comic-like cover narrative at the beginning of some chapters is very creative I saw a chapter where the author solicited the protagonist's fruit ideas for the next book. Personally, I would recommend it to weapons or pets. It's a fruit, but it's quite interesting even if the protagonist has no abilities Painting a fruit feels like a drama. To put it bluntly, it's like materializing, so just make a materialized fruit. It's outrageous to think about the fast-paced battle where the protagonist is still painting No matter what the ability is, it must be It is necessary to set the strength limit of the ability. This book is secretly creative, but the ability is broken. You can steal if you want. There is no time limit for stealing, and you can also steal moves. It lacks a certain logic It can be seen that the author is good at writing about daily life, and his emotions are also very flavorful. If he can write, he can write more, and then Add a bit of astringency, like the Tom Cat Pirates daily novel, which became popular. Later, Fairy Tail was also very interesting. There are too many pirate novels. Instead of popularizing it, it is better to go in the opposite direction and write at a slow pace, which just plays to its own strengths You can also quote the creativity of the One Piece Code - realism. This is the only realistic pirate novel I have read so far. Reading this book is like reading the original A Song of Ice and Fire. It has an epic flavor and is completely different from the comic style. It was considered popular at the time, but unfortunately it suddenly became a eunuch

You can tell what the level of this kind of review is when you look at all the pictures.

Nicole Robin, the famous picture on Douyin

You act and stand up, you lick the navy like this, you can just become a navy.

Torrebol was just a slug in the original work, but in your work, Rainman Karate's sea water hit him without any loss of strength, and Armed Haki's hit only caused blood! How did you write this!

Why is it that the first chapter is all about logic, right? The Tianlong bodyguards were so domineering that they fainted, but the people who eat melons are still fine? What is the average constitution of a Draco human per capita?

Lollia

I can't handle the start of the game The protagonist is saving money to buy a boat. Regardless of whether he saves money to buy it, this behavior is not consistent with the world of One Piece Just saying that you have done so many pirates and have no feelings. The pirates don't have a boat Usually being a pirate is just a matter of swimming.

It's not interesting, it's just retracing the path that the protagonist Luffy took.

No group, no side story to write a woolly harem

Make wallpaper

If you open a novel about the world of Naruto in the future, can you cut off the girl's Uzumaki Kushina and the girl's Uchiha Mikoto? It will easily attract the interest of reading the novel.

Fortunately, there is only one problem, water. This novel really makes you feel like water when you read it. It feels like writing essays in elementary school just to make up the word count.

I have harvested so many fruits in Dressrosa, how are I going to use them?

Will there be any extras for all orders 🥺

Can it be taken directly by force? The power of Devil Fruit does not need to be eaten directly.

Dude, I just want to ask, have you proofread what you have written? Didn't you correct any typos?

We've already defeated the boss, but it's not over yet? I still have to continue writing extras!

Is it over now or something?