I Became a Superhuman After I Died

{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"} Book title: "I became Superman after I died" Author: Name is occupied Work status: Serialized Some wonderful new books. Let me briefly summarize the main plot of this article. After the accidental death ✝, the beautiful girl 👧 merges with Superman and transforms into light ☀️, bringing hope 🌈! Familiar concepts can be seen in many places in the book, such as containment, superhuman beings, and life force fields. However, the story itself is not within the world view of a certain work, and the author has created a world with a somewhat hodgepodge style. Coupled with some of the author's very middle-of-the-road descriptions, the work has a comic-like feel. In fact, it should be very attractive, with the introduction of various new concepts, wonderful settings, and descriptions that are far above the standard. However, the development of the plot actually feels a bit conventional and cliché. Some of it feels like you can guess the next step after just one step, and it lacks a sense of expectation. But if the author can add more new ideas, the quality of the article will be improved immediately. 👉👈The rhythm, writing style, and setting of this new book are all on par. It's worth looking forward to. Good luck to the author! (ง •̀_•́)ง

Let's make a complaint after seeing Chapter 40. As an agent of the Sky Eye Bureau, Xiao She's father didn't take care of his family after he disappeared for the organization? Not to mention being rich and wealthy, but you must at least ensure that you have enough food and clothing. Forget it if it is a small secret organization, but you are an official organization. This is true for agents who work for the organization. Who will work for you? Don't say that you have to hide your identity. As a national organization, it is not easy to secretly ensure that others have enough food and clothing without being discovered. Other than this, the logic seems to be quite smooth, and I am very happy to read it. I just read this chapter again and said, don't any of you think there is a problem with the logic here?

The setting of Goldfinger is too lame. The protagonist is an ordinary person and is dead. He only came back to life after sharing his life and abilities with the heroine of Superman. Moreover, if you stay far away from the heroine, you will die suddenly. This setting of Goldfinger dissuaded most of the people. No wonder they fell into the street.

When I read the introduction, I thought it was about turning into a superman or something, but it turns out that a person can become a superman by borrowing other people's abilities, and becomes a corpse without others, haha

I started watching Duel City. Personally, I think it's better to return to playing cards. It doesn't necessarily have to be a Yu-Gi-Oh World. You can completely create an imaginary world and feel the shock of tears in another world 😏

[Brief Review] The veteran author of LV5 has a sophisticated writing style, the plot unfolds at a very smooth pace, and the conflicts between superpowers are presented in a reasonable manner. The appearances of Superman, various superpowers and other characters are also arranged very reasonably. In particular, the setting of collecting hope (bank value) is extremely exciting and brings positive energy to readers. [Book title] I became Superman after I died [Author] Name is occupied [Work status] Serializing (240,000 words) [Recommendation index] 4 stars [Tag]Superpower, behind-the-scenes, interstellar [Reason for recommendation] This is a world where superpowers exist. However, the world of superpowers is separated from the world of ordinary people, and the existence of superpowers cannot be known to ordinary people. The protagonist Jiang Bei lived a normal life. After encountering a super person, he died unexpectedly. However, he was rescued by a mysterious little superman, making Jiang Bei a superman. Jiangbei, who became a superman, also started a life different from ordinary people. In order to extend his life, Jiangbei needed to collect people's hopes, which were quantified into a library value. Infinitely strong, as fast as lightning, flying in the air... Superman Jiang Bei used his superpowers to save many people in the supernatural world until he became the savior. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial"}

Personal opinion: The two protagonists have not yet fully realized their charisma as supermen, but they have formed an alliance within a dozen chapters. There is an old problem behind the scenes, the protagonist is too weak, the supporting characters are more solid, and this is Superman,,,

In fact, I had this feeling when I first started watching Invincible Flow. The early plot was quite funny and exciting, but later on the author couldn't continue writing. The plot routines were repetitive, the protagonist couldn't find room for improvement, and it was difficult for the author to maintain a long-term interesting routine and funny pretense. In other words, the author is not good at this aspect. I hope he can be better in the future.

The three golden chapters at the beginning focus on an inexplicable subject, which made me feel uncomfortable and moist. No wonder the fan value is set in the speech.

There is a serious sense of separation and contradiction. The world view setting of the novel says that there are Superman comics and animations in this world, but the author shows that there are no Superman comics and animations in this world. This sense of contradiction is very uncomfortable. Everyone in the novel is also in a superposition state of knowing Superman comics and not knowing Superman comics. Every time I see this kind of plot, I feel uncomfortable. If you know it, you know it, and if you don't have it, you don't have it. It is simply set as if there is no Superman comic in this world. It has to be written ambiguously. I personally think this is a very uncomfortable poison point.