I Became a Superhuman After I Died

#New Book Preview# Book Title: I Became Superman After I Died Author: Name already taken Status of the work: Ongoing A rather peculiar new book. Let me briefly summarize the main plot: After an unexpected death ✝, the protagonist merges with a superheroine 👧, transforming into light ☀️, bringing hope 🌈! Many familiar concepts appear in the book, such as containment, superheroes, and life fields.

Having read up to chapter 40, I have to say something. As a special agent of the Sky Eye Bureau, does Xiao She's father not take care of his family after disappearing for the organization? Let alone being rich and powerful, he should at least ensure that they have enough to eat and wear. If it were some clandestine organization, that would be one thing, but you're an official organization!

The plot device with the "golden finger" (superpower/cheat) is too weak. The protagonist is an ordinary person who even dies; he only comes back to life by sharing his life and abilities with the female lead, Superwoman. Furthermore, if he's even slightly away from her, he'll instantly die. This plot device deterred most viewers, no wonder it flopped.

The synopsis made me think it was a story about becoming a superhero or something, but it turns out it's about someone who can only become a superhero by borrowing other people's abilities; without them, they're just a corpse. Haha.

I started watching from Duel City, and personally, I feel it should just go back to card games. It doesn't necessarily have to be set in the Yu-Gi-Oh! World; it could be a completely fictional world, giving other worlds a truly moving experience. 😏

[Brief Review] A seasoned author at level 5, with skillful writing and a very smooth plot development, presenting the conflicts between superpowered individuals in a very reasonable way. The appearances of characters such as the superheroine, various superpowered individuals, and others were also arranged quite reasonably.

Personally, I think the two main characters' superhuman charm hasn't been fully showcased yet, and they've already formed an alliance after only a dozen chapters. It suffers from the old problem of behind-the-scenes stories: the main characters are too weakly developed, while the supporting characters are much more substantial, and besides, this is Superman...

I actually had this feeling when I first started reading. It's an invincible protagonist story, and the early plot was funny and exciting enough. However, the author seemed to run out of ideas later on. The plot became repetitive, the protagonist couldn't find room for growth, and the author struggled to maintain a long-term balance of interesting daily life and humorous swagger. Or perhaps the author is simply not good at this. I hope the next book will be better.

The first three chapters were completely nonsensical and made me incredibly uncomfortable to read. No wonder they set a fan value for comments.

The disconnect and incongruity are severe. The novel's world-building states that Superman comics and animations exist in this world, but the author portrays them as nonexistent. This incongruity is extremely jarring. The characters in the novel exist in a state of flux, some knowing about Superman comics and others not. Every time I encounter this, it's incredibly frustrating.