This Summoner Is Ridiculous

I can be considered an old reader who has followed the book Duel City. When I first read this book, I felt that it was pretty good. Many places were creative, and there were also shadows and jokes of Yu-Gi-Oh in it, but gradually the taste of this book started to change. The card battle, one of the core of the book, is obviously designed, but it is not designed well: How many cards are there in the deck? How many cards do you usually put? How many cards do you start with during the battle? Is there any way to replenish cards and recover them? Is there a one-time effect? Sustainable effect? What is the linkage between cards? These are not shown. The battle process is basically one party summoning special moves, using magic and traps, and the other party summoning special moves, using magic and traps. Although the shadows of various Yu-Gi-Oh decks can be seen, it does not have that flavor, and the expectations from the beginning gradually turned into disappointment. In comparison, Laoshu is much better at this point by relying on the huge number of decks and relatively complete rules accumulated by Yu-Gi-Oh for many years. Moreover, the decks used by many characters in Laoshu are not common mainstream decks, which is very interesting. In addition, the parts about trolling netizens and the protagonist changing the plot are quite exciting. These are the things I like about old books. Unfortunately, by this book, most of these advantages have disappeared. What a pity. Author, you really don't lack writing skills and flashes of ideas, but if you still want to write original articles, you must first design the foundation and write the core selling points well, at least not like this book. After finishing the book, I still don't know how the deck of the world is composed, how to fight, whether it is real-time or what it is... Really, it's so confusing

The author's first two books are considered fan fiction, and the world view is ready-made. However, for this original book, I hope the author will think about the world view carefully and not make it up later, which will be embarrassing. I support a wave of new books_(:з∠)_

Having followed it from the previous book, I feel that the supporting characters and plot are a bit silly. After all, readers who can follow anime like Yu-Gi-Oh should not be too young. Novels that fans can easily follow are called respecting originality. If originality uses this kind of plot and routine, it will be boring without the emotional bonus. Especially this novel is extremely silly among the original novels. I hope the author can add more elements and full-fledged characters. He really won't randomly add the seven deadly sins. The characters can overcome the past through seven virtues or the like. Of course it depends on the author whether to change it or not. No matter what, I will continue to follow it. Of course, if this plot is the same, I will probably click on it again for a long time.

I won't say too much, I just want to treat your cards well. There are very few protagonists and even villains in the history of Yu-Gi-Oh who use cards as tools, but you are just the opposite. Regardless of whether they are strong or weak, whether they are bound to you or not, they are just data to you. And the world you describe is not the real world we live in, but a world dominated by cards. How can a person like the protagonist you show be worthy of talking about destiny, drawing cards, and talking about the king? That's an insult to Kaiba, Yugi, and everyone who loves cards with all their heart. To be honest, people are the product of the environment, just like after you become a girl, your thinking will definitely turn to female thinking for a long time. In an alien environment like this book, the protagonist, who has got rid of the interference of the players in the previous book, still wants to play tricks without having a partner and has no love for the card. That is really funny.

I see that there is a problem now. The protagonist only has 2 epics in Chapter 65, and now everyone else is shocked. Is it too exaggerated? How to pretend to be cool in the later stage? I feel now that there are not many epics in the entire country. In the later stage, the supporting players should be more epic. Isn't the combat power collapsed? Is it necessary to integrate multiple dimensions and multiple planes in the later stage? Otherwise, I really don't know how to improve the combat power.

This kind?

I've finished reading it... Although this book is said to be a relaxing book, it's too easy, isn't it? The cost of plug-ins is basically zero, and everything can be learned instantly. Is it really just a matter of forcibly cutting off the IQ of the supporting characters? The card effects are all borrowed from Yu-Gi-Oh's... So why not write a Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic? Or just fuse several Yu-Gi-Oh worlds and write a semi-original one. Why use the gimmick of originality and then put on the skin of Yu-Gi-Oh? Other aspects... The characters who appear are basically used as stepping stones and shockers. So far, there are only a few characters that can be remembered in the entire book. But can a few characters support a book? (Ps: I have been following this book since the beginning. I have not commented before. It is because I feel that the author is in a transition period and needs transition time, which is understandable. However, from the opening of the book to the release, the whole book has a sense of being read by a fan, so is this an original work?)

Anyway, don't learn from the unscientific beast control next door, or you will leave. Really, the unscientific beast control is really speechless. I started this book, and the leader has a warm place. The beast control is too pretentious. Anyway, I quit after reading a few. I feel that this book is good in the early stage. Don't learn the chapter next door. There is nothing but pretense. Anyway, I can't stand it.

Does this book have a female protagonist?🤫

Although it's a little late to say it, you can actually learn how to write the Elf Master from Qingquan Ryuxiang and use an original world view, but still be a fan of Yu-Gi-Oh. This is actually better. This is a direct fan-to-original version, which is a bit embarrassing.