Cultivate Immortality and Lead Your Family to the Top

It feels a bit nonsense. It is said that entering the spirit gathering array can increase the chance of detecting spiritual roots, and two people enter and both have spiritual roots. Isn't this nonsense? If this is the case, wouldn't it mean that most people can cultivate immortality? If even a village chief knows something, those families and sects will not know it.

Author, is your protagonist's family inherited in the form of a sect? Everything you call them is in the form of a sect!

What the hell is this conversation of yours?

I don't know how to use the punctuation marks in the dialogue, which makes us readers look confused...: Isn't it possible to type the symbol ""?

Are pig's feet livestock? There are so many people in the family, can you help here alone?

The more I look at it, the more it looks like a running account.

Bro, don't make so many long paragraphs. The information is skipped. I'm tired of reading it.

There isn't even an introduction. Is that what Qidian comes with? What new genre is this? 🤔

This is a novel written by a novice, and the sense of immersion is not strong.

The writing is very poor, and there is no sense of empathy at all.

It doesn't matter if my writing is poor, I can't even do the most basic punctuation marks.

Why don't we write out the names of generations together? If we don't write them down, what's the difference between generations without names? There are so many people in a family, do you know which generation is the generation?

Do mortals practice immortality? Come on

An ordinary novel, you can read it

I am very happy to receive a return on investment for the first time, come on, author!

I'm a little tired from watching. Come on.