Doomsday: The King's Avatar

So retro... Awakening failed, everyone ridiculed, beauty comforted, system awakened.

Take a look at whether the old-fashioned system flow is still popular. These are all memories of youth. When I looked at it, I felt like I had seen it before, ah, yes, that's it, um, that's the taste, hahahaha, that's what it tastes like

Once I saw the failure of awakening, I stopped watching the same old routine from twenty years ago.

To be honest, I can't understand it. You, the author, have coded more than 10 million words. The first chapter is about Li Jinjue's three pronouns: "he" and "I". Did you find it easy to read it yourself after writing it? Then it is said that the cuckold is reborn. After the rebirth, the protagonist has no plan at all. It's just collecting iron and striking iron without any foresight of a reborn person and no plan for life. There is no plan on how to awaken the extraordinary and how to improve the strength. The golden finger opened in Chapter 2 has nothing to do with rebirth. The main protagonist has no idea why he is reborn! It feels like rebirth is like loading a game. I don't want to be logically consistent at all. At the same time, there is no plot at all in the two chapters, and the protagonist is repeatedly talked about cuckolding. Wouldn't it be nice to have a little story progression and character growth? I won't break up with your cuckold girlfriend. She comes to destroy your blacksmith shop and that's the plot. Finally, modern blacksmith shops are equipped with many machines and require at least several people to work. Your blacksmith shop in the town will not be more powerful than the current blacksmith shop in the village, right? There will be no single worker?

Career upgrade... Career advancement...? ? ? Soldier... Agent... Gunner... Mechanic... Mecha... Commander...? ? ? ? Feel like it could be a reference? Beast Master... Slave Beast Master (condensing the natal treasures to seal the beast list... Pets on the list cannot be upgraded and there is no limit on the number of pets)... Soul Beast Master (use the beast souls on the list)... Mechanism Master...? Puppet Master...? Puppet Master…?

Get a Chinese pastoral dog for the protagonist🐕? ? ? ?

Can we eliminate word count without using panel data? If you continue like this, in the end, even one chapter may not be enough for you.

Do you think you can give the protagonist a pet with special abilities? ? ? Such as... ... Silicon life-like pets... Ultra-micron omni-mechanical particles... Ultra-micron nanorobots...? 1. Functions... Invasion... Monitoring... Detection... Combat... Defense... Collection...? ? 2. Functional buildings... Omnic base... Automatic defense tower... Omnic manufacturing factory... Energy generation station...? ? So the protagonist can form an army by himself? Can the robot receive system space...? ?

The author writes really well. If you keep at it, you will definitely get better and better.

No matter how great your goal is, but the means to achieve it are despicable, this is a mistake