Doomsday: The King's Avatar
末世之全职高手
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 351k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Subgenre
- Apocalyptic Crisis
- Updated
- 3y ago
- English
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Synopsis
Stats
126Chapters
404Recommendations
27Fans
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So retro... Awakening failed, everyone mocked, a beautiful woman comforted him, and the system awakened.
Let's see if the old-fashioned system-based gameplay is still popular; it's a nostalgic reminder of our youth. One look, and I feel like I've seen this before! Ah yes, that's exactly it! Yeah, that's the taste, hahaha, I love it!
If you see that the awakening fails, you won't watch the old 20-year-old trope anymore.
Honestly, I don't understand it. Author, you've written over 10 million words. The first chapter uses the pronouns "he" and "I" to refer to Li Jinjue. Did you even read it yourself to see if it made sense? Next, it's said that the protagonist is reborn with a green hat right from the start, and after being reborn, he has no plans at all.
Career upgrade... Career advancement...??? Soldier... Special Agent... Gunner... Mechanic... Mech Pilot... Commander...??? This might be worth considering? Beast Tamer... Beast Slave (condenses natal treasures to seal the Beast Ranking... Pets on the Ranking cannot be leveled up and there is no limit to the number of pets)... Soul Beast Master (utilizes the souls of ranked beasts)... A mechanical magician...? Puppet master...? Puppeteer...?
Why not give the main character a Chinese rural dog 🐕?
Can you stop using panel data to pad the word count? If you keep padding like this, in the end you might not even have enough words for one chapter.
I feel like we could give the main character a pet with special abilities? Like… ... Silicon-based life-sustaining pets... Ultra-micro intelligent mechanical particles... Ultra-micro nanorobots...? 1. Functions... Intrusion…surveillance…reconnaissance…combat…defense…gathering…? 2. Functional buildings... Mechanized base... Automated defense tower... Mechanized manufacturing plant...
The author writes so well; if you keep going, it will definitely get better and better.
No matter how noble your goal may be, if the means to achieve it are despicable, then it is a mistake.