My Otherworldly Book Maiden

Starting by selling books, speechless, short-sighted, and highly toxic.

This is a bit much. It's one thing that other factions can't locate the protagonist through communication, but even the nation can't? And the protagonist bought so many things!

After reading the first few chapters, if there's an official presence, why does it feel like the protagonist is in a war-torn region without a unified government? Otherwise, why would unofficial personnel be indiscriminately killing people in the streets? Is there a regional lockdown? Is the government army's deterrent power insufficient?

It's so toxic, what a waste of such a great idea.

Wow, this book is interestingly pieced together. It starts as a bizarre spy thriller with a state organization having a certain degree of control, but after a few chapters it transforms into a cyberpunk story where a gang can wield absolute power. This book has a Schrödinger's cat-like setting.

Starting with a tragic and resentful premise is no longer popular. Even writing about parents dying young from illness would be better than this. I don't understand why authors nowadays all like this kind of tragic and resentful opening, as if they have no reason to develop the plot without it.

The Book of Revelation to Heaven 🐶

It's such an old-fashioned plot, and the factions are based on the old triad books. Although the premise is good, these elements are enough to scare most people away.

Summary of problematic aspects: A group of people hid under the bed and went unnoticed. Twenty groups of people hid in the basement and went unnoticed. Why can't I find other people with dogs? I was too afraid to go out, so where did all this fried dough sticks and steamed buns come from? And how was a bed delivered after I bought it? Aren't you worried about it being exposed?

The author must have known about the fatal flaw at the very beginning. It's a highly toxic element.