Holy Girl, It Turns Out You Are Still Alive

There is a wave of support from y. Com I have finished reading it, but it is still quite small, maybe the plot has not yet unfolded, and the events feel like they are just fights in the nest, without any climax I think the writing style is okay, and this type of writing does not need to be too gorgeous, it is quite smooth, which is enough The character of the protagonist is a bit twisted (it feels a bit different from time to time), and the emotional line is a bit wasted (especially Tiko, because currently this is the only heroine who has described the development process of relationships) ), I feel that I can think more about the details and foreshadowing, which is also more conducive to the shaping of the character To be honest, the plot is a bit bland, or the progress is a bit fast and it seems like something has been said but nothing has been said. The turning point comes suddenly In general, for an author who writes a book for the first time, it is pretty good. Lightning protection is currently very good, but if you want to make it better, the details and plot foreshadowing may need to be thought about and polished.

Hello? Is there anyone else? Hello? It's so cold🥶

Solf

Blackening

Overall, it's pretty good. As a light novel, it's pretty good. Of course, the writing does have some flaws. It's a pity. If I were in Cat, maybe my results would be better.

Although the character of the protagonist was a bit awkward before, maybe I wanted to write the feeling of growing up, but now that Shura Field has started, it feels really good. I love watching this 😏

How to say it? It looks quite confusing.

As far as the advantages and disadvantages of this book are concerned: 1. The plot is not too old, it doesn't look so brainless, and the plot is not too poisonous as far as I am concerned. 2. Regarding the characters, the protagonist's image is not very well created. I feel that the personality and behavior are a bit strange. As a senior player, there are not many images and plots that show the protagonist's high play. This is not handled well. However, Solfu's character design is quite good and very typical. She has a yandere feeling, and is very confident in her behavior. I quite like this character, but Tiko's portrayal is not good enough, which ruins the wife's face given by the author. As far as I am concerned, the character creation is not good enough, but of course it is passable. As for the female warrior, I will not talk about it for the time being. After all, I haven't written anything yet. 3. The biggest shortcoming is that it is short, which is a common problem for new books 😅 However, it is better not to read books in the early stage, otherwise it will be very uncomfortable 🥵

Oh, I'm talking about whether the protagonist can play Heroes of Destiny

Questions: 1. Didn't Solfu look ordinary since he was a child? Why was the seal suddenly released? (Sealed since childhood?) 2. As mentioned at the end of Chapter 34, after all, the male protagonist is still reborn, so what does it have to do with the previous life if the male protagonist now has no memory? The heroine likes the hero from the previous life. Not only does the current hero have no memory, but his behavior and habits are also different from the previous life (as stated by the heroine)

Sometimes you think you have written it well, but this is the height of being a creator. Some of them are things you have made up in your own mind, but you have not written them out for the readers' opinions, just like the knowledge in a book. When you read the words, can you understand them?

To sum up, the author wants a yandere to like him in reality, but the author doesn't like yandere

It feels a bit like a light novel, and the paragraphs are not very connected. I feel like I have only read two-thirds of the content. Is this my imagination?

I found two pictures, they are beautiful.

I hate this kind of plot setting and arrangement, but it might as well be a good work. When can I face everything calmly?

What is the main storyline that we are looking forward to after the first wave? Is it saving the world or defeating the devil? Why reincarnation? The author has buried a lot of pitfalls, and I hope he can bury them later.

Why does the protagonist always seem to have no IQ? What is so weird about the "original brave group"? The protagonist's world has been restarted? So it's different? Or is it a world where the saint restarts? Is there something a little weird about the saint (two personalities or are they just different)? It's a bit different from the title of the book! It feels like the "just partners" treat the protagonist strangely, as if they are the protagonist's opponents...? A bit strange

200,000 Words is enough. Start scanning and I will post it for you after scanning.

The twist is too fast, the plot is too fast, and the characters are not detailed enough

The characters of several people are broken and the writing is average.

Author, it turns out you are still alive...

It seems that after reading the novel, I would like to say that the protagonist is a sage, but it feels a bit light-hearted, and then the Tyr is too easy to give for free, and some plots feel artificial. The king and the minister died too easily, and it felt like they died very easily, without any foreshadowing. You can even skip writing it. I think it would be more relaxed and enjoyable to just write about his daily adventures with the heroine What, I just wanted to read the western fantasy adventure point and came in. My evaluation is not as good as sf. Oh, by the way, there is also the way that the protagonist was obviously not very smart at first, but he suddenly understood his talent. He must have thought about it, and he didn't feel that sharp to me. After the god told him, did he feel a little bit secret in reality?