One Person: Junior Master Uncle on Longhu Mountain

Author, you are writing nonsense. The company is extremely polite when facing big forces, just because it is afraid that its reputation in the alien world is too bad. Many tasks require the cooperation of the ten guys. Wang Bing injured a classmate, and Wang Ai directly dealt with the whole family of the other party. The company did not care. When it comes to you, the company dares to deal with the direct disciples of the biggest ten guys, right? Just let the protagonist work for nothing without paying. If you mess up like this, this book may not survive to be on the shelves.

In fact, whether you Zhang Lingyu is strong or not makes no difference to the other ten forces, and there is no need to test. Because the overall power of Longhu Mountain is too strong. No matter if you are strong or not, no one else can offend you.

The writing is a bit rubbish. Zhang Lingyu is so crazy that he has been so powerful that he has traveled through time and is still crazy. His talent is not up to par. Why did you write about Zhang Lingyu when Master Tian was young? He was the first person of the younger generation when he was around 20 years old. He was invincible when he was 30 to 40 years old. Moreover, Master Tian would never say that what Zhang Huaiyi said was too rubbish. In the eyes of Master Tianshi and his master, Zhang Huaiyi is just a rat. What a thief. Just hide it when you learn something. What is your identity and status? The disciple of the Celestial Master, the next generation successor to the Celestial Master. The dog is so sneaky. Why are you hiding it? You have to show it. What is the identity of the Celestial Master? The leader of the Taoist sect hides like a dog. Moreover, the old Celestial Master was arrogant when he was young. His character has not changed much as he has aged. He just doesn't show it. How could he tell you Zhang Huaiyi's theory?

To be honest, Zhang Lingyu in the original work cannot be brought into the story at all. She became a bitch in Natsume's original work. Only an innocent little boy like Zhang Lingyu can accept her.

I don't understand why it's so early to practice Qi at the age of six or seven? Zhang Chulan learned Yang Wulei when he was 7 years old, right?

The writing of Zhang Lingyu is a bit weak, pretending to be a grandson and not being able to read it

Faster, faster, more, I want to see Xia He and Zhang Lingyu make love 😍😍

Although I have never read Under One Person, I thought it was pretty good at first until the so-called own character was added inexplicably at the end, and then the style changed. The gentle and comfortable article turned directly into a playboy article about the character of the protagonist. After reading this, I couldn't stand the next few paragraphs. The heroine was inexplicably forcibly combined and made a mess. This so-called own character is really bad enough! It's better to follow the previous writing style. With this setting, the writing style before and after is completely unexpected to be written by one person.

Okay, okay, I finally saw a book that replaced Zhang Lingyu. The original Zhang Lingyu felt aggrieved just by looking at it. She knew how to pay attention to her image every day. When she made friends with Xia He, Xia He was not fully sexual yet. After that, she left without helping Xia He solve the problem of his abilities. He didn't even ask his master, Tianshi. He resented himself and Yin Wulei every day, until Luo Tiandajiao Master only knew that Zhang Lingyu's lover was Xia He. In the end, he still hesitated and was expelled from the mountain. No matter how good his talent was, it could not change the impression that Zhang Lingyu was aggrieved. I read other novels where he was transformed into senior brother Zhang Lingyu or his junior brother intercepted Hu Xiahe. If you ask me to go around in such a big circle, it would be better to directly travel as Zhang Lingyu and start the invincible road again.

I quit after reading a few chapters of the birthday banquet. When I first saw the title of Birthday Banquet, I was looking forward to it. The author should also be well aware of the plot that readers are looking forward to. It is a simple reappearance of a single-name scene, passed down by two generations of Zhang Zhiwei and Zhang Lingyu. What is the result? I believe many people were persuaded to quit during these chapters. Not to mention, the plot could not meet their expectations and the writing was not good enough, so they left.

Is Zhang Lingyu's writing a bit weak?

Right now I feel like the pacing of this book is too poor. In order for Luo Tianda to settle on Ren Tianshi, the previous foreshadowing would be meaningless if it were not the male protagonist. If it were the male protagonist who made so many mistakes, it would be putting the cart before the horse. I have no desire to read any more. Prediction 1: Plot trend 1: Chu Lan is the master, the male protagonist runs away, and everyone in front pounces. Also pounced from behind. 2: According to the current situation, it is nothing more than Chu Lan's lack of strength and forcibly supporting the male protagonist. Luo Tian's foreshadowing is ruined, the plot is g. Now it seems that this book is a dead end.

I don't know what the author was thinking. The background of the protagonists in both books is so strong. Then anyone can figure it out.

The difficulty is forcibly increased. I have traveled through time and still don't understand the plot.

Xia He is really unappetizing, the food is like a dog, and he even has a nanny.

It's completely become a nanny article, it's boring…

Chapter 227: I have been feeling aggrieved for so long, and I feel aggrieved again. After setting up such a big trap, he could still run away. It's not the protagonist who feels aggrieved, it's me who feels aggrieved. It's the same person every time 🙄

Charming and natural

If you want to write, you should just follow the plot of the original work honestly and develop it. Is there anything you don't know about your writing style?

Seriously, can you authors who have cut the works have some conscience? Just cut the works and finish them. If you don't click the completion button, you won't even be able to make up the number of fully ordered works. No data can help.

The author could consider letting Xia He give birth to a baby for Zhang Lingyu, wouldn't that give the idea?