Cultivation of Immortality: Start with Waste Recycling!

Mortal style requires more logic and writing. The author's storytelling is mediocre and his writing is immature. The protagonist and supporting characters talk a lot during the fight. What I want to complain about is that it is reasonable for the supporting character to sneak attack on the protagonist. The protagonist attacks the supporting character unexpectedly without practicing martial ethics. 😂 How can I put it... If the story and writing are not equal, it will be difficult to improve... Even if the story is average and the writing is more sophisticated, there will still be readers. Mortal style writing must be concise. It can be explained clearly in one sentence, but it cannot be explained in three sentences... (￣▽￣) Come on... Take your time.