
Naruto: Life in Konoha Begins with a Time Loop
火影:时间循环开始的木叶生活
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- Completed
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- 1.3M Words
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- Light Novel
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- ACG Fanfiction
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- 2y ago
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- Qidian
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This is a sadistic article, with almost no fun points. There is only a bitter and resentful person who tries to save him over and over again in reincarnations, and is played and applauded by high-end players. Well, actually speaking of it, as a college student who has never watched Naruto, it seems that he can achieve this level. However, these days, there probably aren't many people who like to read sad stories about two creators who don't know the plot, especially watching the protagonist being treated like a monkey by Danzo Sarutobi, being cursed by Uchiha Madara, and finally getting Hinata to recommend White Fang as Hokage, but White Fang withdrew from a group of supporters because he was afraid that the Third Generation would be unhappy. The key is that there is actually a third-generation conspiracy behind this matter. White Fang went to report early that someone recommended me to be the Hokage. Haha, as for the vulgar thing about falling in love with a girl from a rival family, not being able to fall in love, being turned over and over, and being worried and sleepless are not considered poisonous.
Would Kushina still like Minato without a hero to save her? In the original work, he hated Minato before graduation, but after graduation he became desperate because he excluded Kushina. I was desperate, and then Hero Minato saved the beauty, and Kushina was with Minato. Why do you like Minato here? Unlike the original work, the second design must also conform to common sense. Why was Naruto in the same situation as Kushina, desperate first? How to successfully brainwash Naruto with sunshine?
The timeline written by the author feels wrong. First of all, it feels wrong that Nagato was born before the Uzumaki clan was destroyed, and he was still studying in the Uzumaki ninja school. Let's put it this way, if Nagato knew chakra before meeting Jiraiya, the plot should not have developed to Jiraiya accepting a disciple. In fact, Nagato could still endure being born before the Uzumaki clan was destroyed. At most, it was the transfer before the destruction that the author said. But it is impossible to learn Chakra. The prerequisites for Jiraiya to accept a disciple are not enough. The three people Sannin met were children who were not threatening at all.
It feels like the male protagonist is playing a one-man show so far. One person faces Danzo, and the other takes care of the family. The clan members are just tools to promote the plot and know nothing. Moreover, the male protagonist is a bit idealistic in his behavior. He knows that Danzo is one of the enemies who wiped out the clan and yet he despises his enemies. The Uchiha here seem to be brainless and arrogant. No wonder they were exterminated in the end. I don't want the male protagonist to end up with an Uchiha. With his IQ and temper, I feel that the male protagonist is like a wronged creature and will affect the next generation! However, the male protagonist is a child. I don't know if the plot is good enough. The key is to improve his strength. Personally, if I can't find a shortcut, just study the whirlpool sealing technique. It feels like there is a lot to do!
There is a problem. The premise of Minato's training is that he and the Jinchuriki are lovers, and he is used to tie the Jinchuriki. I seriously doubt that the Minato hero saving the beauty in the original work is fake. He must be a powerful character to steal the Jinchuriki, at least a Jonin. Whether the three parallel imports can escape is a question. Minato was able to defeat three jounin after graduation, and the three of them in the original book were like trash, one sword at a time. The civilian ninja had no bloodline, no resources, and no training. He was stronger than Sasuke who had opened the Sharingan and had family education for a period of time. It was so fake.
Is this protagonist used to being abused? That Uchiha woman treated him so well and he still fell in love with her, could she be less cruel? Women in reality are indeed stingy, but look at Sakura, Ino, Hinata and Tenten in Naruto, which one is not hundreds of times better than this Uchiha woman? Even Sakura, who was scolded all day long, was much better than this heroine.
I just want to say that the author has never watched Naruto
I thought I was going to reopen it, but it turned out that I just finished the abuse and then suppressed it.
The concept is very good, but please be more accurate in the time of the historical events of Naruto... (The more I read, the more...) 😒
I read it and the author's writing is good. It's a pity that online articles are too voluminous now. Come on.