
Naruto IF: What If the First Hokage Were Uchiha Madara?
if线火影:如果初代是宇智波斑
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 140k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1d ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
65Chapters
152Votes
25Recs
3Fans
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Reader comments 6
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I personally think the first five chapters are poisonous
The Guard Training Ground can almost be said to belong to Uchiha himself, but your protagonist is not allowed to enter because it is relatively destructive. Don't Uchiha respect the strong? They are all called Enma, so they have some reputation. As mentioned earlier, the Hokage knows that there is a person like the protagonist. How about setting up an exclusive training ground, or having someone dedicated to maintain it? It's better to just go to the door and write that the protagonist and dogs are not allowed in because of the character of the protagonist.
Since you're writing about nuclear bombs, why don't you at least focus on Shadow? And if you can't write a harem with so many Narutos, just find 2 or 3, Hikaru Uchiha or something.
It's a bit poisonous, the protagonist is very inconsistent, and his IQ is worrying. The fire escape strengthened by the kaleidoscope core escape has burned hundreds of square meters of the ground into glass, and the scorpions in the front are still alive.
I don't want to read it just by looking at the introduction
Is Danzo worthy of being Hokage? It doesn't matter if he has high ambitions but low intentions. The most unpopular thing is that what he says and what he does are never the same thing. When he sacrifices others, it is for the sake of the overall situation. It doesn't matter if I feel a little wronged. When he is reduced to himself, he is a guard of the Hokage but evades responsibility when the Senju Tobirama rolls his name...
No, buddy, what do you mean by sucking the radiation back?
How can these words form a sentence?
The main character's sister-in-law died at the beginning. It was a pity that the main character had just found out that something was wrong. The Jinchuriki's sister-in-law had a difficult delivery. The second tail was broken. It was a pity that the way of death was difficult. It was not satisfactory at all.