Pirates: Starting from the Chocolate Minister

In the book, the main character wants to encourage everyone to go to work. But the system that has been set up seems to be eager to let everyone lie flat. Because the time spent entering the factory is the same as the time spent lying down. Four hours of work in the factory accounts for one-sixth of each person's time. If you leave it rotten for half a year and give it one month, its lifespan will be one-sixth. It seems similar. But the problem is if you choose to enter the factory, the time you are taken away from you will take up your waking time. Choose to lie flat and half the time you are taken away is sleeping. It means lying down and having more time for yourself. Compare and you will know which one has more loss. Moreover, commuting to and from the factory requires time, hard work, and friction in interpersonal relationships... Basically, most workers wish that their time at work would disappear. Not to mention that working in the factory is also a life span, because most workers are probably eager to go to the factory and rush to get off work immediately. This time in the factory is a negative asset. And a lot of work takes up spare time. In this case, there must be sufficient reasons and benefits for choosing to work in a factory. The reasons given in the book feel completely inadequate. For example, it was written before that "if you work in a factory, you can have money to buy what you like to eat, and you can only eat food approved by the public." "When you work in a factory, you can choose housing first." But immediately he was busy saying that it would not make a big difference even if he lay flat. For example, the big pot rice tastes good and the quality is guaranteed, and there are "famous chefs from all over the world". The design quality of the housing allocated to people lying flat is guaranteed. In this case, would any of you think of going to work at Wanguo? Most of them lie flat. Because it is completely inadequate. I suggest you add some benefits of going to work and limitations of not working. For example, all kinds of goods cost money. If you don't work, you can only eat and drink. But there is nothing to do for fun at this time. If I want to learn a hobby like violin or something, I don't have the money. In other words, individuals can switch between two tax payment modes. They can work to make money this year and choose to pay life expectancy next year. Then use the money to spend, for entertainment or to improve and enrich yourself.

Due to the characteristics of biscuits and fruits that soften when exposed to water, developing the hardness of chocolate is the stupidest and most laborious direction. With a boiling point of 38°, there is basically no stage in One Piece where dogs will not eat fruits. Instead, developing various characteristics of chocolate is the king. When chocolate is boiling, the oil in it will shed the skin instantly when poured on the human body. Dust-like chocolate can cause severe pain in the respiratory tract or even suffocation. Not to mention the adhesion of chocolate, it is better than developing the hardness!

Reading the introduction, I feel like I saw that movie, The Chocolate Factory. . The little green men in Lilliput are also paid chocolates. A trained squirrel can determine whether a fruit is bad by tapping it, and can peel the fruit in just one second. What flows in the river is chocolate, and the trees and grass are also candies.

It's quite good. I used Willy Wonka from Charlie's Chocolate Factory as my character, but I feel like it's better to just delete the system and get Willy Wonka's memory directly, which would be more interesting. Anyway, this system doesn't have a high sense of existence.

Post the future changes of the main characters in the pirate world written by Oda Beliefs and dreams are very important to a person! PS: Usopp has changed the least (Chaos thinks)

There are no garbage fruits, only garbage people! ! ! The worldview was shattered as soon as Nika came out! ! ! A chocolate fruit! Even in Niubi, you are restrained in various ways! ! The pinnacle of the fruit of garbage is the Crown Prince!

The steel wall is useless against the Charlotte family because they have superhuman awakening (assimilation), but the Whitebeard Pirates don't have any, nor do Kaido and the red-haired pirates. This shows how difficult Charlotte (Superman) is.

Very good Auntie Pirates. Come on Yonko Kaido has several books. The Auntie group must come up with an awesome three million words.

It feels like the author wrote the demon-slaying order as if friendly troops teleport over. The Demon-Slaying Order should not be arranged in advance to lead the army forward, rather than just arriving at the word.

Pirates are no longer in that era where the Rubber Fruit can make you invincible. It turns out that it's not Luffy who is strong, but the TM Sun God Fruit... So I don't dare to watch it. Can anyone kindly tell me if I can watch it?

It is recommended that the characters in the novel Flower Abroad should not use titles such as "old uncle", "brother-in-law", "Aunt Xia" and "grandfather", as well as the aboriginal characters interfering with each other's ethics in the plot, which would be very inconsistent... Having various special titles for relatives with various seniority rankings and the psychology and attention to seniority are our very local language and cultural characteristics. And ethics such as "You are my son" and "I am your uncle" are also native psychology. Other cultural backgrounds don't care much about this and would find it baffling... It's a bit inconsistent to have the indigenous people engage in this plot. In the Western or English context, when talking to elders, you directly call them by their names. You don't call them "Uncle xx" or "Aunt xx" at all. For example, the word "uncle" refers to the brother of the parents. There is no distinction between cousins, cousins, relatives, or second uncles. This word refers specifically to the brothers of the parents. If you describe a person who has a good relationship with children, you would say "the children regard him as their uncle." For example, Jimmy is uncle to all the kids who like to go boating with him. Children who like to go boating with Jimmy regard him as uncle. But when you call Jimmy, you still say "Jimmy,..." Instead of "uncle,..." The world of One Piece is mostly a Japanese-style Western fantasy, so you don't have to follow Western habits. For example, the protagonist can also say "Uncle Edward" or "Uncle Kaido" in Japanese, or just call him "Edward" or "Kaido" directly without maintaining peace. But "old uncle", "brother-in-law" and "grandfather" are very, very protective, because it is a very local culture. If you want to play, you can arrange to go to the Kingdom of Flowers...

The fruit is too juicy. . Then all the good fruits are given to the brothers and sisters, a nanny story wrapped in family affection.

It made me uncomfortable at first. The protagonist is a person who loves his family very much. He longs for family affection and is too kind to his brothers and sisters. So why is it that when he destroys other people's families (those hundreds of soldiers and civilians, especially civilians) it's like he's crushing a cockroach? How many innocent people died in his hands during one invasion, and these people were all other people's brothers and sisters! So what is the protagonist doing? If he didn't have normal empathy, the protagonist would be a complete monster who could love no one. If he had normal empathy, why would he do such a thing?

Write more, and one update a day will be enough for everyone to read, so that the foreigners next door will think we are looking down upon them!

Chaos went home early during the May Day holiday! I searched through my old bookcase and found two hundred books about Mr. Willy Wonka! "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory", "Charlie and the Big Glass Elevator" Stayed up late last night and was stuck in traffic again. The charm of Mr. Wonka is really unmatched! ! ! The dreamy chocolate workshop; The quirky Oopa-Lumpa people; The large glass elevator that travels in space; The terrifying and cruel sky worm Knid; Wonka Wonka who restores twenty years of time (I misremembered it when I wrote it, and it was changed to twelve years, and it has been changed); There is also Vita Wonka who can age fifty-five years with four drops. Negative zone, three meals of chewing gum, chocolate TV... It was a dream journey! By the way, three astronauts appeared in "Charlie and the Glass Elevator": Shakworth, Shorer and... Shanks! 🤪

Aunt's children

Using AI to run the main character, Chocolate Fruit

Before the war in this latest chapter, I couldn't think of a reason why Crane was still alive Judging from the latest information, the Golden Lion's base camp of Wilmeiu is far away from End The point is some distance away, otherwise the golden lion would not be indifferent when receiving the call from his subordinates, and no one would be sent The navy can go directly to the island because of the life card, and it is impossible for everyone to have one, so there must be a few ships coming to the scene Except for Kizaru arriving first, the Warring States Period You can come here through Kizaru's life card, and Zefa also has a life card, but the two of them should not be able to reach Vermeio in one day. The new world is too big, and the weather is very messy. I don't think this place will be very close to Mariejoia Rayly seems to be bringing it in Calm alone It takes several hours to go to Nine Snake Island and the Trial Island, let alone Zefa holding a boat... And I don't think Rayleigh can swim slower than Zefa, so if Zephyr can accurately attack the New World Pirates' base camp from Mary Joa in one day, Garp can also do it, and the navy's machine The power is too strong In this case, it is enough to leave one or two people at the Navy Headquarters, and the others can come back after receiving the call. They drag a few away and a large force comes to attack. That requires a large force to be stationed in the base like now So I can't think of a reason for Crane to be alive when the war begins.

It's neither good nor bad, it's watchable but not very good. The setting and plot don't have much of a highlight, but as a new author it's still possible to gain popularity and experience.

After reading it, I opened up a lot but the writing is quite good. The distribution of fruits is very novel in One Piece. Although the ending is a little rushed, it is very reasonable and everything that needs to be explained is explained. It is not a bad ending. In short, it is worth recommending if you are short of food.

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I'm so surprised that I was able to watch it and it was finished. My expectations were not in vain.

Then change the status to completed? Isn't it written about the Kendo Tournament?

Recommend a pirate fan novel: "Pirates: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" [Decisive Killing + Dominance + Great Swordsman + Pirate Group + Age of Rocks + World Domination] Return to the era of Rocks, join the Rocks Pirates and become a cadre, grab the gold from the sky, massacre the Celestial Dragons during the Battle of the Valley of Gods, and form a pirate group after Rocks' death to dominate one side. During the second celebration of the Celestial Dragons, all the pirate groups in the new world of the Alliance once again launched the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, snatching the Celestial Dragons' treasures and devil fruits, massacring the Celestial Dragons again, killing Lord Garin, Army General, and CP0 Chief... Hawkeye Homick: The world's greatest swordsman? No, no, no, this is not me, but Li Yuan. Ever since I started learning swordsmanship, I have been pursuing his path of swordsmanship. Whitebeard: The strongest man in the world is not me, but Li Yuan. That guy is so outrageous that even my ability to awaken the Shock Fruit cannot defeat him! Five Old Stars: Obviously I am immortal and can passively teleport to save my life. Why am I still being killed?

What kind of devil fruits are there to collect? Are you waiting to give gifts to others?