Cultivation of Immortality Begins with Thousands of Households in Jinyiwei

After reading the five chapters so far, the plot is quite coherent, the author's writing is relatively smooth, and there are no lags in reading. Overall it's pretty good, keep up the good work!

I always feel that the plot of this novel is very similar to that of a TV series, but the author's narrative skills are very good. He does not deliberately use gorgeous words to show off his writing style. Overall, it is easy to understand but not vernacular. This is very good. Add it to your bookshelf first! Come on

After reading a few chapters, I got a taste of the "playing with people" routine, but it's a pity that it makes Gou Zai enter the palace in the mysterious world!

After reading this book for the past few days, the biggest advantage of this book is that the author's writing style is very smooth. Although the plot is a bit old-fashioned (it seems to be a martial arts world view in the early stage), the author's narrative ability is very strong. There is no lag and discomfort at all during the whole reading. It is already amazing for a new author to do this. In addition, can there be more? Now that I see it, my sense of anticipation has increased a lot, keep up the good work!

What does the author mean? The role only has a male protagonist? How? Is it that our little fairy Xia Mo is not worthy? If we don't get it for our little princess Yaoyao, we will abandon the book 🤫

It can be seen that the author generally wants to develop this novel in a humorous direction. From the content point of view, it is different from traditional fairy tales. After browsing so far, the character image is quite full. However, it is recommended to change the chapter name of Chapter 4. I think no matter what type of novel it is, the chapter name should at least be relevant. However, the content of Chapter 4 has little to do with the chapter name. It really gives people a deliberate feeling. Of course, this is just my personal suggestion. The whole novel is quite good, keep up the good work

With the magic of immortality, you are willing to be a dog?

The historical background is imaginary, and please do not compare it with official history. Adorable newbie, please collect it, thank you!