Tai Taoist Master

So far, my personal impression is quite good, the three views are correct, and the writing is better. Excluding some of the more verbose early problems and the early criticism of the golden finger, the overall plot is reasonable, the clues and foreshadowing are appropriately buried for subsequent development, and the grand world view of the world of immortality has also been secretly expanded. The author must have written a good outline. From the beginning to the present, the rhythm of the literary and drama plot has gradually become better, and the rigor of the details is evident. The clues and foreshadowing can often form a closed loop with the subsequent development. Even if the development is traceable, the characters that appear are basically promoting or assisting the development of the plot, which means that the character description is more effective. The immortal fighting takes up slightly less space but is relatively subtle. The big scenes are well described and the abilities and skills used are generally followable. But I personally think there are also problems. If cheats are not mentioned, the author must have some ideas about how to deal with them. The current use of cheats is reasonable as long as patches are added.       ，，，，，， The second level of strength gives me a vague impression. There seems to be little difference between the levels of Nascent Soul and Golden Core in front of the protagonist. No matter how strong the mana manipulation ability is, the question is whether he should control his combat power reasonably to prevent excessive combat power from collapsing (although the protagonist has Ten Thousand Dharma Veins and has received gifts from various master uncles to be able to defeat the Nascent Soul for a while). I personally feel that it is inappropriate to fight at two levels. If there is a similar battle in the future, there should be a reasonable foreshadowing of the combat power improvement process. I feel that the questions I picked are a bit nitpicking. There may be other issues, but I personally feel that other parts are relatively complete. If you have different opinions, you can mention them and discuss them. Tell me what you like. The clues and foreshadowing are basically traceable. The development of the plot is driven by the clues and foreshadowing, and is driven by the intertwining of the bright lines of the protagonist's experiences and the changes in the world and the layout of the sect as the core. It will not appear abrupt and the storyline will appear more harmonious. The three views of the characters and the creation of their personalities are remarkable. They have a taste of flesh and blood. The descriptions of both good and evil at the beginning are okay. The descriptions of the characters' experiences have shaped the characters' images. For example, I met Yu Guanshi during the Qi training period, and the original enemy finally became a close friend; the master Yao Wudi who is currently in the foundation period, the two masters and apprentices, one is the master and the apprentice, the other is the apprentice and the teacher, the image is relatively full; and some recent descriptions of the wife's perseverance, I think it is very comfortable to use the vernacular. Although the plot development is a bit slow, it is still very appetizing to me. I hope the author will stay in good condition, be healthy and continue writing, and write slowly and not in a hurry.

After reading the whole book, I can feel that the author has a lot of references and "standards" (not in a derogatory sense). I have been following Douyin to anime for four days. It is hard to imagine that this is the author's first book. For me, the most important thing in reading a book is "space". There is an imaginable "space" that the author has done very well in the first few volumes. Very good, especially the part among the Mantao people. I think the rhythm is very good. It is very good for the world view and the overall description. It is a pity that the two incarnations of Chonghua and Kong Chanzi cannot be taken back. In the later period (the last few dozen chapters), there is a feeling: I put all the threads here and then I pulled hard. But it feels like I've pulled it off. Overall, I think it's pretty good. Come on, author, the future is promising.

It is now August 3, 2024. I have just finished reading Volume 8, Chapter 7, The Boundary Fetus. I would like to summarize this book 😁 I saw this book in the recommendation column of the starting point. After reading the introduction, I clicked on favorites until I got tired of other books and wanted to change my mind, so I opened the favorites and turned to this book. I was hooked as soon as I started reading it. Due to my busy work schedule, I could only read it in my spare time. I read it intermittently for a month or two, and finally saw the latest chapter. Although it is a traditional novel about cultivating immortals, the various plot developments in this book are unconventional, the layout is also good, and there are many fantastic ideas. I couldn't stop chasing the latest update, and I look forward to more exciting follow-up stories from the author. In addition, the character Jia Shiwu is not only logical, but also perfectly solves the reproduction problem faced by the protagonist, and also has universal characteristics, which can be called a classic and strange character in the Internet literature world 😁

Will the protagonist be changed to Wang Ba's son later?

Yes, a little suggestion: inbreeding can continuously purify excellent bloodlines, and then artificially remove bad mutations. The author's biological knowledge needs to be improved

The setting is very realistic. I have been thinking step by step since I was young and working hard to survive. The writing is very good. I hope to persevere and become a platinum writer as soon as possible😁

There is a man named Yutou in the East China Sea who loves books and raises many of them. If you can understand the meaning of book friends, book friends will also gain a public heart. Update his novels to satisfy the desires of book lovers. If you are short of money, you will be limited to update it. Afraid that the book friends would be disobedient to him, he first lied to him and said, "Is it enough if I don't update today but will update more the next day?" All the book friends got angry. O'er said: "With Ruoqi, more updates today and less updates the next day, is that enough?" All the book friends were delighted after reading it.

There is a female protagonist, entered 😃😃😃

Are you kidding me that this book has more than 100 chapters and is updated so slowly?

It looks good at the moment, but it will be hard to say in the future. It's not easy to control cheats. Don't make plots too frequent. Who at the bottom can cause trouble for you every day? Even in the world of cultivating immortals, there is no daily war! Don't run the map too frequently, it will become a stand-alone game with no interaction. My personal suggestion is that if you control it well, it will be a good book.

Change the title of the book: Immortality begins with Chicken You are so beautiful

If you have a Taoist companion too early, you are afraid that you will become a family cultivator later. The map can be changed, but the description of the exercises is too sparse and needs to be strengthened. There are too few descriptions of physical skills, eye skills, sword skills, bloodline, divine talents, auctions, treasure hunts, adventures, inner demons, strange people, rumors, culture of cultivating immortals, etc. I write my own opinions because I am very optimistic about it. I hope the author will write better and better.

Damn, it's awesome. For eighty chapters, the sect was destroyed by the enemy sect, and the protagonist still managed to join the enemy sect and continue to raise chickens. It's the first time I've seen something like this. It's awesome.

This book looks good, but why is it so poisonous after writing so many words? The main character actually still wants to look at the clone's face. The clone's cultivation is stronger than the main character. All the clones have independent personalities. I advise the author to stop writing about the clones and merge them as soon as possible.

To be precise, the pictures drawn by MJ have no copyright issues.

Of course, I very much hope that this is a place for everyone to discuss the plot instead of venting emotions. If you have questions, you can ask questions, you can express your opinions, and suggestions are better, but please be calm. Thank you very much!

To be honest, it was too slow and I felt a little uncomfortable. In the early days, I was quite comfortable in the Dongsheng Sect, but later on, especially when I was a left-behind monk in the Tianmen Sect, the evil cultivators looked really disgusting. It can write about the darkness of the world of immortality. , But you are really too slow. The protagonist is hesitant and incompetent. He wants to run away or not, and he wants to fight or not. I thought I was reading some kind of cult book. It's so disgusting. If you don't speed up the book, all the readers will run away. I feel like you will end up unfinished.

Is the following really well written? I can't bear it anymore after reading over one million words, and the protagonist is becoming more and more mentally retarded.

The first volume was okay, although it had its problems, they can be ignored. But there are too many poisonous points in the second volume, one after another, which makes me speechless. Reading friends say that the later part is better, so let's continue reading. In addition, emotional scenes often rely on life and death. In order to highlight this point, some illogical details are always designed, which makes people feel annoying instead of touching. It's okay to write about how we support each other in daily life 😥

To be honest, it was too deliberately suppressed, just hard pressed. If I hadn't been used to the official subscription, I would have watched it for free.

Why did you change the title of the book before? Is "Longevity, Starting from a Chicken-Raising Handler" not awesome enough?

The most amazing feeling of this book is in the early stages. The protagonist struggles step by step and becomes stronger bit by bit, which vividly reflects the difficulties of the monks at the bottom. However, the slight shortcoming is that the depression time is a bit too long. This is the case for two consecutive large maps, and there is almost no time to stand up in the middle. The writing method of going from suppressed to dull feels good, but it does not work well in succession. For me, I still really want to see the ending of this book where the protagonist can finally reach the top of the world. After all, the world view of this book is quite large. However, after reading it, I feel that it is a bit inappropriate to continue writing. After all, the method of contradiction is a bit single. The summary is that the enemy's realm is higher, and finally we work together to defeat it. According to this logic, continue The continuation is indeed a bit like a running story, and because of this writing method, the protagonist is invincible at the same level in the later stage, and then easily surpasses the level. In this way, the combat power will be a bit broken, and the fighting aspect will become boring. Overall, it is a good book, the plot is relatively innovative, the supporting characters are also vividly drawn, and the three views of the protagonist are consistent, which is very good

The protagonist's IQ is sometimes online and sometimes offline, and he does things abruptly!

I was still wondering, I hadn't read this book before, so why was it just the helmsman... But when I clicked in, I saw that it was actually this book.

It's really poisonous. The first one saved the head coach of Tianmen, but the second one, in full view of the Jindan team, disrupted the situation again.

Zhenwu's training logic is probably the biggest bug. It's too exaggerated to think that a mortal physical practitioner can defeat a god-transforming monk after decades of practice. It takes a lot of hard work for a monk to gain energy and blood, but a mortal can surpass a monk without any resources in a few decades. Is this logic?

All posts with serious suggestions have been deleted.

Actually... I really like this book. It started from Ling Linggen raising chickens and doing odd jobs, and now I'm flying around. I heard that it's coming to the end soon, and I'm a little reluctant to leave it. If I don't invest now, when can I wait? Thirty-three is all in.

I think Yutou is a bit irresponsible. There is no news about the new book so far. I should tell everyone if I am getting rich. There are many people looking forward to it

Is there any news about a new book? When will it be serialized?😰