After Rebirth, They Also Came

The writing is very good, but I feel that the male protagonist in the author's novel did not take the female protagonist to heart. He just wanted to return to the original world and kept a distance from the female protagonist. Maybe I didn't read it carefully or something. I felt that it was a bit uncomfortable to watch.

What a scumbag pua master, it's better to change the subject and let another person write the book, and then the six female protagonists hear their voices and know that the male protagonist is just using them to increase his favorability, and then they are rejected and disappointed by the male protagonist step by step. In the end, the six female protagonists follow another person, and the male protagonist regrets it for the rest of his life.

The author writes well, and the character descriptions are spot on, but there is one point that can be considered a poisonous point: This type of novel is about the heroine trained by the protagonist coming to his door. The author lets the protagonist realize from the beginning that the heroine is reborn, which is cool, but the protagonist has a limited lifespan. And the lifespan must be cultivated behind the scenes to gain behind-the-scenes points, which results in the protagonist having to hang up the heroine This gives people a feeling that "the protagonist has to be the king of the sea to hang her up because of the lifespan", making the pleasure of meeting in the heart stuck in the middle, feeling helpless and aggrieved.

Zong Xiaodie, I love you so much😁😃

Let me give you a suggestion. Try to finish the book as writing experience. If you don't have the experience to finish the book, the next one will be easy for eunuchs to write.

Did I miss that? Since the male protagonist said that he was not reborn, why did the male protagonist later say the name of the event in the game Dark Turmoil? In that case, wouldn't the female protagonist know that the male protagonist was reborn? Or is it by default that everyone knows about the dark turmoil from the beginning of the game? In that case, wouldn't the background plot be clever?

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