The Great God Lei Ze

There are a few things I have to say about the author. A god of thunder doesn't need thunder? And even if the name is changed to Shenxiao, what about the most famous Shenxiao Tianlei? Also, where is Leize? There are places where there are innate thunder and lightning everywhere. How many people would go there? Are you still worried about your nest being stolen every day?

Not bad. Nowadays, it's impossible to write prehistoric novels without a system. You are a breath of fresh air

Even if you choose a Taoist name, you have to report it to Tiandao. I'm really speechless!

The protagonist feels that his character is not good enough. Doesn't cultivating immortals mean that the world is unkind and treats all things like civets? To achieve this, the protagonist should not look down on Hongyun because of his future actions, nor should he look down upon the Sanqings because they will become saints in the future! Now the protagonist seems to be a little too flattering and a little less fairy-like!

It can be done under the prehistoric rule. But taking on a disciple is just a trap. The master can help the apprentice, but what can the apprentice do for the master? On the contrary, it is still a drag. Accepting a disciple who is careless will also ruin your own luck. Accepting a disciple will cause a lot of harm but no benefit at all!

Which chapters of Shouyang Mountain are very vicious, I will never see you again, and with this logical reasoning, I will fucking persuade you to quit.

There is also Lei Ze's body. He has the head of a human and the body of a dragon, and is called the Thunder Emperor. Alas, the author has completely lost his humanoid character.

The eunuch told the readers to show them at least a little respect!

The biggest poisonous point now is the treasure money. The ability is so abnormal that it is a bit hard to watch.

I feel like the protagonist is a little timid facing Taiqing. He has not yet become a saint. Are you so afraid?

Isn't there a purple electric hammer? Why are you still robbing Styx? When talking about Styx, it is considered Pangu's true sect. Pangu's blood essence takes form, so why should there be cause and effect? Talking about Yuantu Abi being someone's spiritual treasure for enlightenment, this setting is not very good!

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Why do novels always contain the word "harm"? This word "harm" must be written. If you don't write it, you won't be able to show your awesomeness.

The Kongtong Seal appeared just after the Dragon Khan Tribulation, and they talked about the cause and effect of the human race. I was speechless. As soon as the Dao of Heaven appeared, everything in the endless future was arranged. So what's the use of having a protagonist? Personally, I feel that the Kongtong Seal should have come into being after the emergence of the human race. The spiritual treasure of the collected treasure money is too rubbish. Wouldn't the prehistoric world be so big and create a few handsome and powerful spiritual treasures suitable for the protagonist? And to be honest in Honghuang Wen, Lingbao doesn't need too many to be enough. After all, it's mainly about cultivating the Dao. Becoming a slave of Lingbao is nothing interesting. This book has no innovation or sense of expectation. You can read it all at a glance.

After reading this, it means that you haven't read so many ancient novels, and you haven't read anything novel at all.

There are very few top-quality innate spiritual treasures in ancient times.

Daluo Jinxian accepted disciples as soon as he was young... Is this because he was afraid that he would burp in the middle and break the orthodoxy?😰

I read it on QQ, so I came here to comment... We are also old readers, and our requirements are not that high. There are some flaws in this book: 1. The character of Yangmei is really redundant, and it is best not to appear again in the future 2. The character of the protagonist has not been established, and he repeatedly emphasizes that he does not want to be involved in the cause and effect but still causes trouble everywhere: Why did you accept Hongyun? This person is not liked by most readers; why did you deal with Styx, he was just looking for trouble; why did you deal with Taiqing and Two Golden Crows, these two plots are a bit inexplicable; why did you accept Dongwanggong? Hongyun annoyed the readers even if you don't see him, and he even hooked up with Dongwanggong. This character is 100% damnable in the readership circle. Don't rush to refute the above, I will give the answer later 3. Before the end of the war with the Lich, you still have to make profits first, because there will not be so many good things except luck and merit. Before the end of the war, you Lich, you have a hand in this, a foot in that... (One of the answers to point 2) 4. It is better to focus on the Lich Queen in the Honghuangliu, the abbreviation of Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors (Human Emperor and Dayu can be appropriately capitalized), the capitalization of Fengshen, and the capitalization or close-up of Journey to the West. You are Zhen Yuanzi, Hongyun, and Prince Dong. How do you arrange the plot in the Lich Queen? Originally, the plot of the Lich Queen gave many authors a headache, because there are very few places for the protagonist to appear (most authors think of ways from the perspective of the protagonist's disciples), but now it is so forced A few more powerful characters have been added, let me see how you arrange them later (one of the answers to point 2) 5. Regarding apprentices, your apprentices are really random, and there is not even one who will be famous in future generations... Then what will you do with Fengshen and Journey to the West! The scene that will be presented to readers at that time is that of a random person named A Mao and A Gou infiltrating into Fengshen and Journey to the West. This sense of humanity and immersion disappeared in a matter of minutes. And what is the biggest advantage of Honghuangliu is the sense of fandom and immersion? Isn't it self-castration if you do this...

The writing is good, keep it up