Immortal Cultivation Begins with Tai Chi

The protagonist clearly doesn't want to take this woman with him, but the author insists on forcing him to take her with him. Well

I barely read five chapters, but I really can't stand it anymore. Is the threshold for starting writers so low now?

It doesn't matter whether the link is strong or weak, as long as it is there. It doesn't matter if there are too many words or too few words, as long as it is logical. Overall, this book is okay. The style is mainly Taoist let nature take its course.

I can't even finish a chapter if I just beat him up. This writing skill is really good

There are a lot of poisons in the first chapter, and the Duke himself strikes the gong, which is outrageous

Cheng Guogong told the protagonist that other worshipers wanted to kill him, and he was still acting? It is divided and destroyed directly. The logical connection in the first few chapters is wrong and the connection between the upper and lower parts is not tight. Leave!

At present, the protagonist's only cheat is Tai Chi. As a result, Tai Chi has to be passed on to others, because only by passing it on to others can the next level of Tai Chi skills be unlocked.

It's well written and eloquently told, and it will get better and better from now on.

The only cheat the protagonist has is his skills. As a result, the skills must be passed on to others. Doesn't this mean there are no cheats?

It is recommended to change the way of adding points, because teaching people not only exposes their core skills, but also has no benefits and is not conducive to advancing the plot.

You have to ask someone else to add points! ! What kind of luck do you have to survive? ! It's really just the halo of pig's feet that's so stiff

The skills are not good, it is difficult to get started, and the cultivation level is slow to improve. The increased lifespan is not enough to offset it, but the healing effect is good, and the skills cannot be practiced at the same time, which is a flaw.

Does this Baihua Fairy have any kindness to the protagonist? Does the protagonist think this is not a hidden danger?

The setting is too rough, and the protagonist's performance is too ruthless. He is obviously very ruthless but cannot be written too poorly. This is another scumbag protagonist with the characteristics of Qidian.

The plot is well written, but the plug-in is too bad, and raising these people is too discouraging.

Why does the protagonist treat Wen Laifeng differently and just kill him? Do you have to reform her?