Rekindling the Path to Immortality

How disgusting to post something that's been passed down through generations online...

Actually, I really admire some readers who say that the protagonist's act of uploading his story to the internet at the beginning is completely idiotic and that he would have been better off learning on his own. Without any foundation in metaphysics, how dare you try to learn Qigong techniques on your own? Are you tired of living?

It was fine if it was posted online; after reading novels for so long, I have a certain tolerance for such things. But posting it online triggered a clichéd murder and robbery plot. 🙂

Is your "online IQ" label a bit...?

Recommendation: Upon first glance at the introduction, I sensed something different; it was full of literary embellishment and the charm of Xianxia (fantasy martial arts). A careful reading of the article reveals that it is not unfounded, but rather demonstrates genuine talent and knowledge, with insightful and meaningful language, and a thorough understanding of classical allusions.

Why does this story seem a bit awkward?

I don't mind it being posted online, what bothers me is that people who know its value actually practice it... That's impressive. It makes it seem like the real thing is easy to understand just by looking at it. Practicing it means you're a master, someone at the top level who can understand it. If someone who isn't a master can still practice it, that's impressive. That's something I really dislike, I don't even want to look at it.

Having read up to chapter 19, it's quite toxic. The plot completely demotes the villains to elevate the protagonist, and the inconsistencies are glaring. Earlier, two assassins lied about the protagonist possessing a magical artifact, and the villain dared to chase after him alone, only to be killed in seven days with a single blow. But what about the other characters?

🟢️What's the writing style like? To paraphrase a line from the text: 'My name is Chu Yi, life is tough, I make a living by setting up a stall, and then I drifted away and lost contact…' A gentle breeze, free and easy, shines through the pages. The writing style is excellent; as one reader put it: half classical, half vernacular, discussing classical allusions. How's the writing technique?

Dear author, the slow-burn style is great; you just need to keep writing. It's quite interesting and fun.