Dragon Lord

To evaluate it objectively, the psychological descriptions and narrations in the forty chapters of this book are very deliberate and cannot be described as poisonous. First of all, let's compare the author's other two works. The advantage of Peerless is that the protagonist has delicate emotions and is very gentle. This is shown in Xia Xin's every move, conversation and behavior, which is very immersive. In these three books, there are fewer poisonous points in front of Peerless, and the daily lives of several heroines are particularly vivid, especially Shu Yuewu, the author's portrayal at that time fully demonstrated her strengths and weaknesses. The two parts of this book that I like most are the voice of brother that stabs Xia Xin's second personality after the summer night turns dark, and Shu Yuewu's poetic and dazzling poignancy in the American dance competition. This kind of description of other heroines in the peerless first 800 chapters is also very easy to reflect. In addition, I feel that the description of emotions in the city is not as delicate as Juezi and has many poisonous points in the early stage, but his outstanding points are the setting of the fight and the theme. The theme of this book describes the helplessness between the good and evil races of human beings and the protagonist's response to a kind of world giant. The author's description of the natural environment contrasts with the psychological description, giving it a natural feeling. The Lion King train and the poor college girl who sacrificed herself to the village (forgot her name) are two very wonderful paragraphs in my opinion. From now on, the writing style of this book has deteriorated a lot. The author especially wanted to show the theme of the city, which was too hasty. The text was written to give people a literary and awkward feeling, and the daily prose style that the author is good at is reflected in this book. However, because there is too little description, it has the literary style mentioned above. The combination of forced narration and deliberate psychological and linguistic description makes this book very awkward to read, unlike the previous two books. Naturally, it was done overnight, and the Peerless Extra not only has the advantages of Peerless and Urban (emotions and themes), but the writing style also maintains the past style, but the setting and some plots are uncomfortable. I thought at the time that this book would be similar to the Extra and the writing style would not change. However, when I read it, I had the same mood as when I first read Metropolis. There are more poisonous points and less sense of substitution. However, it is only forty chapters and I can't comment too much. If it turns out to be as profound and delicate as the previous two, it's hard to say. Generally speaking, the first forty chapters completely failed to meet expectations, with both embarrassment and poison. As a long-time reader, I certainly hope that Coke will be able to show his original style better and better in the future, and that his specialty of foreshadowing in daily writing can be reflected again 😭 I also hope that these forty chapters will be the slow burn I expected.

Coca-Cola's quality is actually very high, and its niche themes always make people's eyes shine. It's a pity that I didn't work hard enough, at least I read so many books. I feel like my imagination and ideas are at the level of a master. I hope this book won't be too eunuch.

It's good for those who like Xiaobai's writing and those who like previous writing methods. If you really take it with your brain, I can only say that I'm very disappointed. I've been reading more than 20 chapters, and the copper plate feels awkward. It has a sense of déjà vu like Xiaobai's writing five or six years ago.

Coca-Cola's Peerless has accompanied me through middle school, high school, and even college. The writing style and world view always give me a huge surprise, but this time I was really disappointed. I deliberately saved myself from reading this book for nearly a year because I didn't want to wait. I wanted to read it several times but thought it might not be updated enough and I would be disappointed. I opened it today and I haven't read 12 chapters yet. I'm completely disappointed. There is no doubt that it's unfinished. Looking at the comments, it turns out that it's unfinished. Is Coke still worth the trust of readers and fans? City Hunter doesn't want to generate electricity for love, I understand this, but why is this one also unfinished? Although it showed the end, I didn't have the intention to read the remaining 12 chapters, but I remembered all the plots when I looked at the table of contents. There were so many holes left unfilled, how could Chapter 12 be concluded? Really disappointed

For Xiaoxuan's sake, use your recommendation vote on him!

Why do I get 4 recommendation votes every day and can only vote for one 😭

I think the writing is quite good and I like it very much. Hope you can continue to update. You may not write well in many places, but the emotional expressions you write are very good. I was really healed by the stories in it for a while. I really hope you can continue writing. If you really don't want to continue writing, forget about this book. You must finish it next time you want to write a book.

Now that it's over, I'll share my thoughts. In Coke's first book, the overall world view is not that big. There are certain preparations in the early stage. This is because there are not many fantasy settings in his first 1,000 chapters. It can still hold up during the later outbreak of Chapter 1200. The direction of the characters is planned. But when it comes to this book, the outline is very problematic. As the protagonist, Li Chenguang went back to two thousand years ago and after a period of time, he came to the next 1000 years. It was as if he had completely forgotten his goal. The direction of all the characters is suddenly unclear. In fact, it may be a matter of thinking and writing. He completely forgot, how will the characters who appeared before develop? I just remember Si Si and the two heroines of this book. The particularly powerful girl who appeared before suddenly disappeared. I saved about 30 of them. I originally wanted to read it together in the next 1000 years chapter. The result is that it is not good to read. Finished reading once. (／_＼) Great resentment. When you read these, you will find that the situation of Shui characters becomes a sentence with three hyphenated characters. Even the motivations of the characters and the design of the plot are slightly flawed. The biggest problem is not thinking clearly about development. In Chapter 360, Li Chenguang suddenly started traveling again in search of immortality. Do you think this is funny? He suddenly became a puppet created by the author. It's missing a bit of soul. In terms of setting, Coke's design is very novel. There was a lot of back and forth, but this development somewhat overturned Coca-Cola's advantage in character creation. There is no focus. When I think of this, I feel terrible. In Peerless Warriors, I play League of Legends in the early stage to build momentum for the later stage, and it seems to be well written later. Characters appear. From the climax to the ending, it felt like a breath of fresh air. I thought it was really good when I was in high school. The protagonist of this book does not have any pursuit of force. He didn't know how to increase his force value. Everything seemed like a coincidence. I suddenly had no expectations for his force value. Because if the protagonist can't beat him, Coke can just make up a bomb. But now that there is not even a basic contradiction, what can he use to explode? Finally, the ending was written for Coke. I'm really speechless. I don't know what to think. I thought he would come over for a while to review the plot, sort out his thoughts, and take care of his health. Bah✔

After Peerless Unparalleled, I finally have a book to follow (๑>؂<๑)

Let's all write down the name of the female character you like. A beautiful and nice name like Yisha will do. You don't have to follow the surname rules. Just be nice and pretty. It will be used in the book.

Only by holding Coke in your heart can Coke hear your heartbeat.                                                                                                                                                                                                because

Xiaoxuan's party gathered quickly😭😭😭😭

Everyone should read this treasure novel by a treasure author. The leader of Coke who has been a loyal fan for five years is now a third-year college student. It may be a bit naive to say it, but the previous book of this author has been throughout my youth. Although I have not read this new book, I still strongly recommend it. Pay attention to the author and not get lost. He is a really gentle and good author.

Can I really read this book? I just read more than 20 chapters and it almost poisoned me to death. Isn't it more exciting? This is the first one I have seen that can be so frustrating to write on a daily basis. Extremely poisonous

What the author wrote is really interesting. The plot is very attractive to me. But why is the protagonist's character like this? The portrayal of the protagonist is so bad. I described how good he is at observing people and how good he is at solving crimes. He is such a perverted person in a certain aspect. How can he have such a low EQ and IQ and be so poor in two worlds? It's outrageous. And he is in another world. He is considered to be the top fighting force in the world. He is still so timid in doing things. He thinks that others are NPCs. How can he endure so much anger? His ability to solve crimes is so strong. I never thought that the rich second generation would take revenge. There are also some strange things that really make me happy. He has a sense of multiple personalities. He is very smart and extremely stupid. Besides, what is he afraid of causing trouble? There are several people in another world who can kill him with the sun fire (the ones who offend him). I really can't stand this. He has such a powerful force. I've experienced it in another world and it's still so bad. How can I survive? There's no need to deliberately torture the protagonist. It's too dramatic. Why don't you just write that he is weak even though he is obviously very powerful. Damn, I really can't help but complain. But I really like the plot.

I'm so disappointed. The comment was not supported by Jueshi or the city. Why is it a eunuch again? The future timeline is really not very well written. But in the past timeline, the description of daily life is still remarkable, especially the visit with Gardenia, eating noodles with Ruosheng, and Bailan's waiting. But readers looked over and it was suddenly over. You've obviously done it badly, but now you don't even show it off anymore. You could obviously say that you were in a bad state recently and take a rest, but you didn't even bother to lie and just ended it immediately. This reminds me of when Xiaoxin participated in the sports meeting. You just ran a little bit and then you said you weren't going to run anymore, and then you started to mess up. How did you write about Xue Tong at that time? Do you still know the disappointed look in Xue Tong's eyes? The current one is not as good as the Xiaoxin back then! But what is the difference between the reader's mood and Xuetong's mood? Do we really want to have no expectations and no disappointments? "You really let me down"——Xue Tong "You really let us down"——Reader

The writing is not as good as City Hunter. Either write it as low as possible or don't write it. It's disgusting if it's not above or below. Brothers, don't send money for the extra episodes. If you send too much, you won't even write the main text.

If "City Hunter" had taken off right from the start, it wouldn't have been a eunuch, ugh...🤔

From Peerless to City, to Dragon Lord, City and Dragon Lord, they never leave each other one chapter at a time. From City Eunuch to Dragon Lord, they continue to be eunuchs. This is how you give back to us. You were born pure and pure.

My evaluation is that it is better to give the protagonist a break and then write a daily funny love story with peace of mind and start a harem. When daily life changes to the apocalypse, the change is very abrupt. The male protagonist must be portrayed as really troubled as Naruto, madly torturing the protagonist, and a lot of messy foreshadowing arrangements. After torturing the protagonist, he is ready to make a big fire. As a result, the author does not know how to write battles at all, especially the crushing battle after the blackening, which makes it less enjoyable. , The male protagonist is acting more and more like a clown, and the separation between the front and the back is too serious.,, It's a pity. Looking at the daily life and settings in the front, I thought it was a good novel, but the macro world design and battle design in the back are simply unbearable. It's really better to write less or not write about the doomsday style and battles. The author is not good at writing because he is not strong enough. Is this an attempt by an urban daily author to turn to a dark style?

If it continues like this, the eunuch will be just around the corner. The eunuch of City Hunter is still fresh in my mind. Maybe one day I will find that it is not making much money and just stop writing it. It's better to write a sequel to Peerless Unparalleled, which makes money Another book that consumes human resources and kills the goose to lay the eggs This book is recommended to be read with the mentality of leaving it to pieces and lying flat. What has been done will be done again, and what has been done will be done again.

Anyway, I can't stand it. I'm mad at the protagonist. I'm jumping around and browsing, but I can't find it. I think it's satisfactory. Now I see the part where the protagonist's father stops the protagonist. It's better to let the protagonist kill everyone present, and then his father comes out again. His father comes out at this time and just embarrasses him. The reader's emotions can't be vented at all.

It's such a pity. The various settings in the early stages of this book were quite attractive to me, but the follow-up became more and more annoying. . . This author likes to write the protagonist as pure as possible, while most of the other passers-by are ridiculously bad and stupid. As a result, I still don't know how to write pretentious plots. Of course, I don't know whether it's because I don't want to write or because I don't know how to write, but if you don't want to write, why do you write the passers-by so stupid? Why do you also write that the protagonist is very smart? I don't know if there will be a reversal in the follow-up, but at least where I saw it, it is written that the protagonist thinks that the rules of time and space are to prevent In order to prevent the time and space paradox from happening, Gardenia was secretly put in danger, and in order to prevent Yin Ruosheng from moving, the protagonist secretly had to kill the three sons of the aristocratic family. If they co-authored the killings, the time and space paradox would not occur. It would only happen if your broken heroine moved, right? . . Regardless of whether it will come true in the follow-up, it gives me the feeling that various settings come up one after another. Logically speaking, the novel should have the plot happening in line with the various previous settings. This is the setting to match the plot. When I wrote Peerless Warriors in the past, although the normal plot was also a mess, at least the plot of the love line and the portrayal of the heroine were good. Although the criteria for judging the quality of the plot of the love line and the portrayal of the heroine vary from person to person, in my opinion, the two now are a mess compared to the main plot.

What can I say, among Coke's books, "Hunter" is the best in my opinion. In terms of this Dragon Lord, how should I put it, the skill has declined too seriously. To make a specific evaluation, first of all, the hunter's story gives readers a strong sense of atmosphere and a sense of immersion. They will spontaneously look forward to the subsequent plot and the interaction with the heroine. In addition, the world view is great. Royal Family has a unique writing style. He is good at writing about the unfairness of this class. His main plot is about people who change the world and make the world a better place. The heroine is very cute and will be attracted to his character. The opening and some plots in it are indeed a bit discouraging, but once you watch it, you can completely accept it. As for this "Lord of the Dragon", the story is not very atmospheric and the main line is a bit strange. Why do you say that? Because Coke is playing with the jokes of his old book, the first section is all about characterization rather than plot writing. Like "Hunter", the characters are always portrayed through plots, such as the incident of losing the mobile phone, the incident of finding the lost property, the plot of An Youyue, the incident of the killer, and the incident of finding magatama, one after another. As for "Lord of the Dragon", it puts the cart before the horse. Coca-Cola is just playing tricks and portraying the characters that appear. There are only a few contents that I can remember now, such as finding the lost money (same as finding the mobile phone), the exam (a routine), the werewolf incident is okay, there are strange foreshadowings (including characters and abilities), and the dinosaur invasion (although there are foreshadowings, but I don't know why it still feels abrupt), in short, it did not meet my expectations. Read it again later to see if there are any surprises. (The above are all my personal opinions, please don't comment if you don't like it)

Readers who have any sense of integrity should not read his extras. Giving him money is really disgusting. Three yuan for a chapter is too expensive.

I just recently finished reading Peerless Unparalleled, and I feel that it is the only one in my mind that can compete with Evil God. However, when I read the author's next few books, they were all eunuchs. Like 🔥Dog, the sky fell. The writing is obviously very good, but why don't you insist on it? How can a few eunuch books become platinum? . .

Can the author continue to update City Hunter? I will definitely order it. City Hunter is very good in terms of the character of the protagonist and the background of the world. I think it is very eye-catching. If you can't finish the new book, you can try to go back and update City Hunter. One more question, because I recently read City Hunter and fell in love with Coke's book. Does Coke have a book club?

I really hope to continue writing the main text instead of just writing extras for the rest of my life.

Alas, there is nothing to say. When I watched Peerless, I was still studying and going to school, and my living expenses were 20 yuan a week. I could only watch pirated versions. Now I support all subscriptions (although I haven't read a chapter of the main text yet, and I don't want to read it now, so the money will be used to supplement Peerless). I will support you and become a eunuch. If you really don't want to write a book, you should move Hunter to the starting point, and at least finish Hunter. It's really a waste of money to keep your level up.

I have waited until now to finish writing about the city in high school.