I Just Want to Take Qingmei Away from the Plot

If you travel into the game and change the fate of the gentle Qingmei who lost her life to save you in the original plot, will you be immersed in her loving eyes during your daily interactions with that innocent girl as white as a gardenia? Book title: "I just want to take Qingmei away from the plot" Author: Bai Sheng Flying to the Sky Type: Light novel·Daily Love Tags: Daily Love, Single Female Protagonist, Overhead Neon Campus Number of words: 250,000 words Work status: serialized Recommendation index: ★★★☆☆ (3/5) "Introduction to the work" The novel tells the story of Lin Xiuchuan who traveled through the closed beta game "Abyss Hunter" and became the protagonist of the game as a neon high school student. He chose to lead Qingmei Mizutani's only love life away from the game plot. "Reason for Recommendation" The setting of "rejecting the official match from Tiansheng and choosing gentle Qingmei" is the biggest highlight of this novel. The author uses the daily love life of Lin Xiuchuan and Mizutani Yui to effectively refute the conclusion that "Qingmei has been defeated by Tiansheng since ancient times", which makes up for the readers' regret that Tiansheng series came from behind to defeat Qingmei series when reading various literary and film works. "Recommended Group" ❶Readers who like daily light novels about love; ❷Readers who like the plot of Qingmei defeating Tiansheng. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

Single heroine? If you use so much writing to write about two female protagonists, you will be scolded to death.

It was a bit boring, so I skipped through it. The first part was about Go, and I couldn't understand it because I had never been exposed to it. The second part was about the male protagonist losing control of his power. Why not ask Aoki for help? Is it necessary to stay away from the plot and not get involved at all? I've seen a similar story about Nigaru before. The male protagonist is so naive that he doesn't even grasp the power. When he encounters danger, he suddenly becomes possessed by the God of War. You don't write routines like this in your daily life, do you?

If you write something with such a good subject matter as Gou Shi, really, if you have a single female protagonist, don't give more roles to girls other than Xiao Wei, who don't have a clear affiliation. If you want to write more female protagonists, just change the first few chapters, okay? This is a novel, and what you wrote doesn't feel like a novel. Is it necessary to write such a long psychological description and write about the male protagonist's worries about that Aoki? This is a love story, and the theme seems to have deviated. Now it's all about pouring water into it. You can have power, but you can't control it. Now that you come into contact with that organization, it has completely become a poisonous point. When you say you don't want to come into contact, you express secretly that it's okay if the organization is close, and then you get closer, right? This is both legitimate and effective?

Is this everyday writing? Although I only read four chapters, the plot is too bad. In a dangerous world, the male protagonist actually wants to stay away from danger by escaping. Especially the protagonist inherits the male protagonist's body that created the problem. He would be embarrassed to be the protagonist unless he encounters danger.

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I specially opened a post to explain that this book has a single female protagonist. However, due to plot line design problems at the beginning of the book, the appearance of characters and the distribution of pen and ink were not handled well, which caused trouble to some book friends. I specifically mention it here and hope that all book friends can choose the books they like according to their needs Also Special thanks to Judah and book friend 20220726064249765 for mentioning this. I spent a few days consulting with the editor and several big guys to figure out this problem. Thank you all 🙏🙏🙏

Gan! There is a typo in the introduction! I shouldn't have changed the introduction after I was so sleepy that I was half dead after typing! I have to wait another week 💔 Additional: I announce that from now on my editor will be my boyfriend. This processing efficiency is too high, and other problems have also been helped with 😭 I am so touched by this cute little transparent person 😭 Work hard to code words ✊

Emmm, I skipped through more than 20 chapters. I don't quite understand why the background should have a combat-type fantasy world view if it's just about daily life. Normally with this setting, the protagonist will encounter some troubles, right? Even if there is no fighting, there will always be intelligence and the like from God's perspective. If you don't engage in any of it, you are far away from the original plot, and the plot will not come to you, then why do you have this background? It would be better to directly write about daily dog ​​food in a peaceful world than this unclear background, right? So strange. And after reading more than 20 chapters, I looked at the title at the end and was confused. I had read it before but didn't seem to have read it because the protagonist seemed to be in love and then did nothing. But this love doesn't feel like a comedy, it's boring and tasteless. To be honest, who would like a meticulous love story? It's really hard to read without some comedy elements. There is no conflict or contradiction. It's too boring.

After reading more than 80 chapters, I feel that there is no clear main line, the progress is very slow, and the writing is not focused. It seems that all the characters have been written a little, but there is no real use of large ink to shape a person, and the character's personality is not very prominent. In particular, some complaints take up most of a chapter, making them redundant and a bit embarrassing.

I scanned the beginning. Even with my college student's IQ, under normal circumstances, I shouldn't be unaware that the heroine is part of a special organization, right? So under normal circumstances, if a beautiful girl approaches for no reason, it is normal to be cautious, but the first reaction is to stay away in disgust, which I think is unreasonable.

The sea, you are all water. I understand your writing style and thoughts, but you are too hydrated. I don't know if you have read novels of similar genres, such as Hidden Killer. It is about a killer who travels back in time to change his destiny. But people, the greater the ability, the greater the ability to poke trouble. Although he always mentions The problem is solved in advance, but the problem is still getting bigger and bigger. Then the protagonist upgrades step by step, and the plot can go very smoothly. Tell me what you wrote. You keep saying that you are very capable but it doesn't show it at all. How is it possible? The existence of a strong person is itself an awl. If you put it in your bag, you will definitely show your edge.

…I didn't expect that if I revised the original text, the chapter comments would be swallowed up. I thought I had to delete and rewrite it, or change the arrangement of paragraphs before the chapter comments would be swallowed up... I have fixed the description problem mentioned by the next reader. If you still think there is something inappropriate, you can comment on sentences, paragraphs or in the forum.

There is nothing interesting 🙂, I don't see any general plot, and the daily writing is not very interesting.

I thought it was like a Japanese harem show where the male protagonist is smiling proudly on campus with his childhood sweetheart.

They say that when writing something, you should pay attention to the three golden chapters, but after reading three chapters, you don't have much desire to continue reading 😥

I didn't have time to watch it, so we'll discuss it after watching it.

The domestic football youth training system is very poor, but the high school and college teams are all young players who came from primary school football schools, especially the goalkeepers, who are very specialized, with little running and dribbling, and high set-piece requirements, so it is basically impossible to play wildly. Japan's youth training is the best in Asia, and its professionalism will only be higher than that in China. Why does the protagonist have to be a goalkeeper? Control, coordination and tricks are not better than goalkeepers in 1v1? The sports that require the most control are probably snooker and other billiards.