Race Girl: Become a Legendary Trainer

Come on, author, Hat Gate is indeed powerful. The story of Oguri Hat is very exciting. Wada, a good opera rider, wanted to be a rider after reading the story of Oguri Hat. In a place like Neon where origin and pedigree are valued, it is very exciting to have a legendary Ma Niang Xiaoli Hat.

Other novels about racing girls are about the love between a trainer and a racing girl, but this one is about raising a racing girl as a daughter.

Oguri Hat

No, where did so many dumbfounding and wry smiles come from. You can just smile. One moment you can't laugh or cry, the other moment you smile bitterly. . .

The novel introduces too many twists and turns other than competition and cultivation. The visual experience is hugely different.

Original hat

Oguri Hat is going to be animated 😭😭

This is a novel that I rarely read from beginning to end. I have been reading fan fiction for many years. Nowadays, many fan fictions are difficult to read. But when I read this book, I regained the feeling I had when I first read the fan fiction. It was my interest in the subject matter and my curiosity about the plot. The writing cannot be an obstacle to my reading. I just persisted because of my love. Sometimes I put myself into the protagonist and guess how the author adapted it. This is my original intention in reading fan fiction. Old Biden, horse racing girl Modo Modo! !

How do you know that I have two full wells?

You write a lot of text descriptions before training and games, but omit a lot of content during the game, including the final battles and post-game interactions with the players. In this way, the rhythm is very bland and there is not much emotional fluctuation. To put it bluntly, if there is a lot of foreshadowing, the result will already be known.

So Tenzheng March and Shibasaki have been forgotten...

Long paragraphs of psychological description before asking questions consume patience. Whenever a character wants to do something or say something, there must be a long paragraph of psychological description to explain the behavioral logic of this action. However, it is actually very unnecessary, seriously affecting readability, and destroying the continuity and integrity of the story.

As long as the alarm clock launches an offensive, Uralala can sweep across Europe and be herself

The data collection mentioned in this chapter, the origin of writing, and the idea are to try to sort out a relatively complete world of horse racing girls. In addition to retaining the main characters of the original work, try to give the horse racing girls with strong stories some opportunities to appear, such as the popular Sunday Serenity, Golden Journey, Golden Master, Lady, Big Shock, etc. In the original work. For those stories that are not good enough to be included in the novel, I also try to arrange some background panels and passerby characters The main focus of my current personal arrangement. It's about Japan. I'm not very familiar with the international aspect. Raw meat is more troublesome, and the information is too niche and hard to find During this period, I'm slowly learning from two book friends, Lilith God's Chosen Lake Girl and Yunzang Haishan, and trying to sort it out before the overseas expedition begins I'll post a few screenshots of the relevant information. If book friends are interested, I will post it in the related section of the work Long picture warning

The front part is okay, but the back part is just boring to read and it would be a pity to discard it.

It was finished a bit too hastily, which is a pity. The audience is still too small. I look forward to the author's next work.

I feel like the recent content is really cool, including discussions within Eternal Life, discussions with the student council, and discussions among other majiangs. . . It was so difficult to get to the game, but Takarazuka had a lot of dialogue in the stands throughout the whole process, and it was over in a flash. Is it the impression that there was no main point of view of Tamamo? I know that Tamamo's strength is enough to beat Takarazuka now, but in this way, the content of the preparation period is bland, and the content of the running game is bland. We can't just live by watching team discussions and game commentary.

I really like the horse racing girl, but to be honest, after reading this novel for a while, I think animation is more suitable for me. The content of the novel is too dragging, and after reading the first part, I still feel that Oguri Hat is not there. My favorite horse racing girl is not there, and it feels a bit..."Visual fatigue", so I'll leave first.

I feel like Maruzen can take good care of Kitahara's life. Oguri Hat and the others are good as comrades, but it feels like the driver is more suitable as a companion. I hope they start well and end well.

If you spend a whole volume writing about a veteran driver and a horse girl, will the subsequent horse girls also write this long? Or is she the only heroine?

When I saw the middle, I saw the plan of the Summit Cup, and I was motivated to continue watching. For example, the Summit Cup will get some points, and they will be added up once a year, and there will be awards for the top ten, the top three, the most exciting competition, etc. As a result, you are finished, so who can provide me with the horse racing girl in the beautiful world that I lack? Although I read your final review, I still can't accept it! ! ! I'm going to read your new book, and I must catch up on the extras for the Peak Cup. I voted for you 11 times a month, so I must catch up! ! !

It takes some effort

Is the author not interested in the second season? We have seen more than 170 chapters, and the protagonist has hooked up with so many horse girls, but he has no interest in the most out-of-the-ring Emperor Bao. It is hard to believe that after watching the second season, Torena will not be interested in helping Emperor Bao win the Triple Crown. Although the Emperor and the protagonist group are not from the same generation, it is really unexpected that A Fuan, who is still in kindergarten, has recruited them, but has no interest in recruiting the Emperor at all.

I saw Chapter 127. The current quality of Xingwen Dictionary is very high. Support the author! Come on!

What about the emotional drama? Is this a love line? No way, bro

Hurry up and update 2000 words is not enough!

Write quickly, there are tickets here, I want to see the Christmas hat punch through the Arc de Triomphe

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Recommend a book that kills decisively and has more joy. "The old man picked up rags in time and lived by making bad movies" is hilarious...