Starting at the Cybernetics Shop

Here is a picture of a colleague for you to take a look at. Of course I am just asking for it, because if you don't read it, it must be because my writing is not good and the plot is too bland. But the author has just started to engage in this industry, and his writing style is a bit lacking. I still hope everyone will give me some room for tolerance, and I will grow! Above

The writing of this book will gradually reveal a strong personal style... If you feel uncomfortable, please feel free to comment.

You can sew the characters from Ghost in the Shell Cyberpunk slightly and sew them inside Ghost in the Shell Story

To be honest, after reading dozens of chapters, I felt it was quite boring. I was saving money to open a shop and practice my skills. The boss died and the shop was gone. Then I was saving money to open a shop and practice my skills. Then the boss died again and the shop was gone... It was a lot of matryoshka. The whole story frame was too monotonous. It was not so much a seggar punk as it was an urban leisure with a bit of technology.

Under this background, it is very dangerous to go out of the city, and the male protagonist would not survive a day under normal circumstances. Cyber ​​is not cyber, urban is not urban, it's like a hodgepodge

Why are you so stupid when you join the company? And if the company has the guts to arrest a prosthetic doctor, who gave it the courage? The prosthetic doctor can be said to be the doctor of the entire dark world. How can you repair the prosthetic body and cure diseases if you capture others? Going to buy a second-hand prosthesis that is reliable and reliable? Isn't this seeking death? How many mercenaries can your company have in the Wilderness and Dark World? Why don't people praise your company for beating up your branch every day? It's ridiculous. They can fail countless times and how many times can your branch fail?

Why is the protagonist always being plotted, joining a gang, joining a company, joining an evolution club, paying no attention to anything, believing what others say, and just running away?

That's too much, brother. Where are the villains, conflicts of interest, and enemies? What's your world view? Why don't you kill people? I would like to recommend a few animation movies to you. You can refer to them for their elements, plots and villain creations Hunter (Chimera Ants, Sky Arena, Greed Island) John Wick, Resident Evil, Underworld The text alone is quite smooth and vivid, Platinum Capital

Cyberspace is close to technology, punk is close to rebellion, and wasteland is close to survival. Almost everything but a little bit of everything

There is something to investigate. There is probably no emotional line between humans in this book, but that doesn't mean the protagonist has to be a eunuch. Do you want to see the main character who is a eunuch, a non-eunuch, or a promiscuous one... This is honestly a bit important, and I may use this to push the plot in the future. 🥱