Hogwarts Card System

I'm speechless. Can this bullshit plot end soon? Kill Fudge and Umbridge quickly, it's really a shame. The more I read, the more I get the impression that it sounds like a book by a strange author, my name is Paiyunzhang (the protagonist in it is basically invincible in the world of Dream of Red Mansions, but the result is that the protagonist is always living in the Jia Mansion and mixed in with flies and dogs, which is disgusting).

Rotten is really rotten, water is really water.

It feels like it's just introducing knowledge from another world through the medium of the protagonist. It's basically an alternative literary work. Obviously the combat effectiveness is suppressed, and the character design is very problematic. The early development was too fast but the plot was too timid. The first grade almost had the combat power of an ordinary graduate, but in the end it still followed the script. At the end of the first grade, he was able to outwit Voldemort. He just ignored the diary incident. He released a basilisk and killed several people. He started to take care of the diary's disappearance when he couldn't control it. Mixed but not refined, it's a bunch of flashy stuff. It's hard to say whether it's integrated into the system, and the atmosphere is completely ruined by jokes. A bunch of knowledge is forced in, and the result is whether it can be copied or not. There is no upgrading and transformation after absorption. It is hard to say whether there are bugs in each other. It all revolves around the system. It can be said that the protagonist himself has nothing to develop and research at all. It can be clearly foreseen that the system will finally explode the original world.

The book is very good, but updates are a bit slow. I hope I can write my own story and reduce the impact of the plot. After all, a reasonable and real world will not revolve around the protagonist.

I thought the pyramid plot would involve Yu-Gi-Oh!

Safe space teleportation should be to set up an anchor point and then spread out a sphere from this point. The caster can choose the place to teleport to within the scope of the sphere to avoid getting stuck in a tree or sinking in the soil after teleportation. The range of this sphere, which is the radius R, is affected by the caster's willpower, mental power, and magic power. Referring to Hermione's apparation and opening the door with Doctor Strange, they all teleported through their own memory images of the location. Considering that they are unlikely to quickly choose their favorite location and not pass through the mold or hit the wall after teleportation, it is most likely an independent choice of magic power. Only such a mysterious theory can explain it. It may also be a safe position subconsciously selected during teleportation, so as to move safely. Apparition in Harry Potter has the possibility of separate bodies. To safely teleport, Apparition requires a strong and firm belief. This is linked to the power of the mind. It is simply too friendly to the protagonist, a psychic. Although magic allowed them to avoid crowds and the risk of getting stuck in walls, when Hermione teleported Harry and Ron to the streets of London, they appeared directly on the road and were almost hit by a car. This shows that their security of space teleportation is still quite imperfect. The protagonist also needs to continuously learn the knowledge of the archmages and research a safe, stable and fast method of space transmission, which is a long way to go.

First of all, the abilities are too complicated, the summoning cards are too useless, the protagonist upgrades too quickly, the intelligence is too high, and he is omniscient and omnipotent! The first dungeon is basically played by the protagonist alone, and other characters have no role. How fast the protagonist upgrades. The first grade has the ability of an outstanding graduate. The second grade is not allowed to directly confront the professor. The third grade can defeat Voldemort. The fourth grade can start the author's own plot and open unlimited streaming. The modified characters lack the flavor of the original characters. Old Bat has become a daughter-in-law, Professor McGonagall has become a big vase, and Dumbledore doesn't know what to say. Moreover, many characters who have been magically modified cannot justify themselves and can only rely on the intersection of celestial bodies and world line changes to fool them. For example, why does Hagrid become friends with the protagonists? The new savior Neville has a family, and Hagrid has never hugged him. During school, Hagrid had little contact with basically all the parents of the protagonists. There were too many people in the Order of the Phoenix, and it was not obvious how friendly Hagrid, the twins, and Patsy were. The levels designed by the first grade are too supermodel for other protagonist characters, but too simple for the protagonist. Not only is it not stressful and fun, but it's also a bit like playing house. I read it and subscribed to it until now. I thought the author was a newbie and would get better and better in the future. Who knew that the second chapter of my subscription made me so addicted that I felt like I was reading a novel about cultivating immortals. The advantage of this novel is that the author's writing is smooth, humorous and dense with jokes. But the hodgepodge was a routine that was popular ten years ago. Nowadays, few people watch mixed martial arts. In fact, this kind of rotten stew is not only unsatisfactory, but also puts the cart before the horse and robs the unique charm of Harry's Wizarding World. Among these fan novels, this is considered a masterpiece, but it is actually more difficult to write a fan novel well than an original novel. If you want to get out of the circle, it is not enough. The loss of readers in fan fiction is very serious in the middle and later stages. If you want to retain readers, you still need to think more about it in the subsequent plot.

The protagonist is clearly designed to be a white devil who cares about his classmates, but in the end he allows the basilisk to kill people. In the original work, the basilisk didn't kill people purely because of various coincidences. How dare you bet that the world line has changed? Or is the protagonist so selfish that he values ​​experience more than the lives of his classmates? Mrs. Norris, whom the protagonist likes to masturbate, is petrified and has no fluctuations in her heart. The classmate only escaped death because of his glasses but continues to hang up. Yes, you can say that the protagonist is unwilling to do so because of his lack of ability, but are you sure that the person who continues to drag her to death is not a friend in a small group like Neville and Hermione? It's true that the protagonist can't defeat the basilisk, but what's so difficult about solving the basilisk? The diary can be solved by just summoning Dumbledore to start school. For fear of exposing his identity, there aren't many ways to submit anonymous letters and report? In the final analysis, the author cannot write without the original work. He only copies the original work and fills it with a bunch of bad jokes.

Four beautiful pictures of Hermione

Chapter 440, what kind of mentally retarded patch settings were applied at the end of this chapter? It seems to mean that the protagonist obtains the knowledge of the other world through the golden finger. As long as the protagonist obtains it, the world will be obtained automatically, and then it will randomly appear in a certain place, waiting for the lucky person to discover and use it? It's really just adding a mindless and enhanced villain to suppress the protagonist. Disgusting readers are really good at this.

I have written several books, and now this one obviously has no outline or detailed outline. After the author's imagination when opening the book was exhausted, he started to have all kinds of lapses in the plot, and he had to use knowledge from other worlds to fill the number of chapters. But this has also led to the growing confusion of the protagonist group's growth path.

To sum up, the protagonist uses plug-ins, knows the plot, has Dumbledore, the developed Snape, and the no longer decadent Grindelwald as allies, ruins the boss's affairs, and kills a lot of people before finally killing Voldemort.

I don't understand it a bit. The main character doesn't want to change the setting of the plot. It's too weird. Not to mention that the savior has been changed, and Harry's gender has been changed. The original plot has been distorted to the point where I don't know. It's okay if you want to keep a low profile, but Voldemort's Horcrux notebook is in front of you and you won't solve it. Instead, you will let the basilisk wreak havoc. Why is this the way you value friendship? Aren't you afraid that the basilisk will cause the death of your friend? If you pretend to be a pig for too long, you will really turn into a pig.

Before the content was put on the shelves, I said that it was an old habit of crashing again. Now that I have come back and looked at it, I can only say that it is a prophecy.

This is Harley

In the later period, I felt like I was being dragged along by Golden Finger, and an auxiliary system ability slowly took over the main plot. The protagonist is more like a puppet of the system. In the middle and later stages of each novel, I feel like I can't grasp the rhythm, and all kinds of useless things are piled up randomly.

At seven years old, you enter primary school. On the day you enter school, you are bullied by a fifth-grade child. You can't beat me, so I swore bitterly in my heart, thirty years to the east of the river, thirty years to the west of the river. At thirteen years old, you are at the peak of your sixth grade. After years of martial arts training, you have the air of a naughty kid every time you breathe in and out. Like those fifth-grade kids, even three of them are no match for you. At this time, you meet the strong people in the junior high school level. Even the weakest junior high school strong people, their strength is by no means comparable to yours. And in this realm, you have enough financial resources to buy two packs of spicy strips! It's so scary. So you make up your mind to enter junior high school. At the age of sixteen, you have reached the state of junior high school, through years of study and hard work. You already look down on your classmates who are at the same level. The usually elusive high school realm is the direction that a strong person should move forward. At the age of eighteen, you discovered the reason why there are so few strong people in high school. It turns out that due to the restrictions of the laws of heaven and earth, only a few people in each generation can pass the test of the college entrance examination. Those who pass will completely lose their mortal bodies and enter the university realm. Received blessings from higher education institutions. Those who fail to pass will lose this opportunity and become adults. In ancient times, some of them could also become the most powerful and attain the Great Way. But in the current world trend, where the vitality of heaven and earth is so thin, it is almost difficult. If you go with it, you will be ordinary, if you go against it, you will become an immortal. You must seize this opportunity. After graduating from college, you suddenly find that the people around you are all college students. At this time, your girlfriend of four years actually belongs to a huge family power. In their eyes, you without financial resources are like an ant. The family promised their girlfriend to a young master of a large family business. You were forced to leave your girlfriend temporarily. You just remember that Lihua Daiyu's girlfriend made a three-year contract with you. You recall the shame, the powerlessness, and the pain you experienced that day in elementary school. My heart is roaring and roaring. The veins on your hands are popping up. When I come back, I will dye the sky with demon blood. In order to become stronger in a short time, you chose the Internet. From then on, you enter a big company and get the guidance of a big boss. Even the time spent sitting on the toilet is used to study. As he continued to grow stronger, he discovered a shocking secret. From then on, he started his own business. I have encountered despair and encountered danger. From Beijing to Shanghai to Shenzhen, I have seen strong people working hard in the adult realm, gained life experience from the guidance of mysterious old men, and talked with geniuses who died young after graduating from university. They all become your strength to move forward. Three years later, everything was calm and peaceful at the woman's home. Do you think he will come? Hearing this sentence, my girlfriend felt a little bitter in her heart. In the past three years, she has refused many blind dates arranged by her family. Now it's almost reaching its limit. The sun is almost setting. Is it just a disappointment after all? At this time, a huge and trembling breath came to my girlfriend's home. The mother-in-law's expression changed slightly at the sound of the mount. Their family had been in business for many years, but in the final analysis it was just a small branch of the family. She had seen Bentley, the patriarch of the big family, from afar, and she would never forget that voice in her life. But this sound is real, but this sound is different. The father-in-law suddenly thought of something, his face suddenly turned pale and he started to tremble, this was impossible. How can you do it. No matter how hard I try for half my life, I can't overcome it. Father-in-law and mother-in-law, you are well. A man's voice sounded. Sure enough, a golden dragon Rolls-Royce came down from the doorstep. Suddenly there was silence in the house, and the mother-in-law asked cautiously where the mansion was. A: In the magical city of Taiyi Xianfu (urban area), the mother-in-law lowered her head in shame to prepare for the wedding, and the young couple needless to say. Another year passed, and on this day a man named Ma wearing glasses rode a penguin to visit. -After some pleasantries, you are invited to enter the new map of the Righteous Alliance (Internet Conference). As soon as you enter, you find that there are about dozens of people present, and their strength is unfathomable. Among them, you can hear that I have no interest in money and I have not received a salary for a month. Set a small goal and earn 100 million first. I am face blind and don't know whether it is beautiful or not. Things like that. You can't help but be stunned for a while. Recalling what I saw and heard along the way, it feels like a lifetime ago.

Harry Potter

Looking back, the protagonist is indeed a bit of a nanny, but that's okay, but it's a bit wrong to keep following the original plot. As for this basilisk plot, I told Dumbledore that it was over long ago, and the protagonist has to fight the basilisk once. It's a bit deliberately putting himself in danger, which is a bit stupid.

Big Crow

Director, if you don't publish a new book again, and the next book is a bit unfinished like this, and there are so many holes left unfilled, be careful we readers will treat you to dinner

Curator, why are the new books removed from the shelves? I'm chasing it.

According to the unreliable statement made by the leader of the Devil Party, the new book will be released in June. Book friends, please stay tuned!

Stand up! Code words! I mean the new book. It feels like a new book has been published. Speaking of which genre should I write my new book? Are you interested in writing an unlimited stream? Just go around the worlds of various movies/animations/novels/mythical stories and leave behind various legends about the protagonists.

As the title says, come up with an idiom solitaire and let the post replies fly! "The dragon is strong and the tiger is fierce"!

Although I don't subscribe much, it's still okay to vote for two monthly votes.

How can I say, can I give you semen?

First of all, let's talk about the better parts. The overall plot and imagination are excellent, the integration of various magic knowledge is very good, and the overall look and feel of the protagonist is also very good (there are still many good things, but I don't know how to praise it) Let's talk about the things that I personally feel are not good. The subsequent selection of knowledge is no longer pure magic knowledge, but mixed with scientific and technological knowledge, and they are all in the direction of the supporting facilities of Utopia. Pure theory The setting up of Homesickness is very good. If the overall length of the article can reach 700 chapters or more, then the length of Utopia can be said to be very good. However, if you have less than 500 chapters, it seems that Utopia is too complicated. It is obvious that the author does not know how to write the follow-up. He just fails in the competition. It loses the favor and the reader's patience. Basically, I skip the subscription after the competition and have no patience to continue reading.

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The new book is off the shelves again. Why don't you stop writing about entertainment and write about something else?