Fairy, I'm Really Not the Villain!

After raising Kai Zai for a long time, I was really stunned when I saw Chapter 110. There were some things I couldn't say and I wasn't happy. I can accept that the protagonist has always been the image of the Virgin, but in this section, the protagonist's Virgin suddenly starts to have double standards. She speaks harshly and fights against the emperor (another self) who has experienced misery. Although he has given him a lot of help, the protagonist still does not appreciate it. But for the swordsman who has done something wrong, the protagonist fights to save him and directly performs the plot of "Remarry My Love". It makes me wonder why the protagonist has such double standards. Is the protagonist's Asasi only for the opposite sex? The double standards are so serious, it's so inhuman to the opposite sex!

As of now, this book has 400,000 words, and many things have been revealed. The first thing I want to say is that if you don't like reading it, you can leave it. If you don't like it, you can attack the author, but please don't scold those who speak for me. Thank you. Three questions. First, why is it so similar to the one next door? Because the author wrote more than a dozen chapters and was rejected, so he couldn't sign the contract, so he learned the structure of other people's articles. If you read the book, you will find that the plot is different from the beginning of the first chapter, and the things you want to express are also different. I didn't even finish reading the first three chapters because I was afraid it would affect my creative thinking. The original title of this book was "The Villain Has No Wings" and "The Villain's Prince's Contract Game". However, the editor said it was too aggressive, so he asked me to start it again... Second, the protagonist, the Virgin. This is a matter of opinion, I won't make any excuses. In fact, the first chapter has been written. It is about a college student who plays games and travels back in time, only to find that the paper man's wife has become real and discovers another world... Under the premise that most people are quite friendly to him, if such a person is to kill decisively, it means that there is something wrong with his education. Third, this is not a villain article, are you trying to sell dog meat on sheep's head? Haha. In fact, when the author was writing, I didn't rely on it at all, because I felt that there were too many books like that, and there was no need for everyone to waste time reading the same thing. But in fact, the core of what the author wants to express is the title of the book, which will probably be announced at the beginning of the second volume. I always believe that a person's character is related to his experience. If the villain who destroyed the world was treated tenderly in his last days, would he still follow this path? Finally, why are you talking about this now? Because the author is afraid of being scolded, I rarely read the comments. Today I boldly read around and found that this book is still liked by some people, so I boldly said something. That's it.

To be honest, this book originally looked very good, but some details were really handled... For example, the protagonist saw an injured child in the cell and suddenly shed tears. The writing was too abrupt and there was no foreshadowing. There are also those remarks about the laws of historical development that the male protagonist said later. I suggest the author read related books. I personally feel that the handling is not very good.

It is a rare book that is filled with gold and shit. The good-looking parts are really good-looking, but the rubbish-written parts are really rubbish. The female protagonist is well portrayed, and the plot of the male protagonist's interactions with other members of the opposite sex is also well-written. Sugar is not industrial or natural at all. But the male protagonist is a bit too frustrated. He obviously relies on his awesome sister to defeat his father, but why is he still so useless in the plot? There is also a big poisonous point. A bunch of men wanted to have sex with the female protagonist, but the female protagonist killed them. Then the male protagonist singled out the fish that slipped through the net. After killing him, he said that he admired them? ? ? I have a whole🤔? ? ? ? ? ? It's been 24 years, I didn't expect this poisonous point? ? ?

Want to write about the male protagonist Asasi, a good student with a capital education? But the robbers and bandits want your life! Later, I felt sad about the deaths and injuries of the robbers! Yo-yo

The author's writing style is very good, but the handling of plot details feels not rounded enough, and the early world view is a bit vague. While reading, I can feel that the author wants to mix in some thoughts and deep truths. This kind of effort has made the book stand out from the conventional. I have read a lot of books, and this book kept me reading largely because the author does have his own thoughts and opinions, and does not make people feel like they are keeping a running account. Some readers always say that this book imitates this, and it does have something to draw from, but what they read is actually a different story, and the personality differences between the characters are actually very obvious. There are many elements in the book, between different timelines, game travel, spiritual realms, panels... The author should have read a lot of online articles. As a novice writer, it is not easy to write his own story using the settings of his predecessors. It is difficult to create some practical "tools" at the beginning of writing online articles. Many veterans of online articles are just reusing things that already exist. I firmly believe that the real core of a novel is the plot and characters. Coupled with beautiful writing and a certain amount of thinking, a good online novel can be created. This book is indeed unique, although the description of some plots is a bit green, and the author's grasp of the development of the story is not mature enough. In addition, the temperaments of some characters should be in line with the appetite of some readers. In my opinion, this book is a good book. The author has such a writing style, has his own thinking about the story, can write what he reads into his own book, and is also willing to communicate with readers. It can be said that the future is promising.

When you see the man who went to jail to be ecstatic and sad for a child, you don't need to look further. Neither relatives nor friends, with no emotional basis. Where can a time-traveler have so many emotional fluctuations? A person who was imprisoned by the Zhujiu clan because of family mistakes can make you sympathize. A stray bird has discovered the same kind. There are so many of your kind, and they are all in the prison.

Why is this book exactly the same as the one next door, "Fairy, Please Hear My Explanation". It feels like it has a different skin.

For this kind of book written by an author who may be in the growth stage, my suggestion is to read less reviews, as it will affect your perception. Just because you have read a book by a great master doesn't mean you are a great master. Maybe you can't even write a composition, so don't push yourself too hard. The platform has become very restrictive, giving some tolerance to authors in their growth stage. Can you please stop trolling when making suggestions? If not, write them for me to read?

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