Miss Hinata of Konoha

I suggest you delete and rewrite it starting from chapter seventy-eight. The previous ones are still good. I don't know what I'm writing at the end, but he usurped the throne and became Hokage out of nowhere. Even if I forcefully explain it, it's nonsense. They also mass-produced the Eight Gate Dunjia Ninja...

Let's complain... Stealing an Uchiha is a bit far-fetched, especially stealing the clan leader's son who didn't open his eyes is even more nonsense! Especially Uchiha doesn't have such a thing as a caged bird. I don't believe that other ninja villages haven't gotten it on the battlefield. Just look at Kakashi and you will know how big the burden is! Especially Kakashi is a genius!

See the latest chapter, what do these mean? Various time travelers Hyuga Hinata compete with each other, and after losing, they are erased. What the hell is this plot? What is the author writing about?

So, you forced Hanabi out just to have a "caged bird" of your own? ? ? What pen

It's okay to have a lily, but if you get married, it will be awesome. Write down all the psychological process of getting married, from resisting to slowly accepting 😍😍😍 to having children, and gradually feminizing ~ Then you can read the four evil books

It's weird, really weird. It feels like it's no longer a Naruto fanfic. It's an alternative and cool novel about a proud urban lady wearing Naruto's skin.

After a long time, I saw the protagonist Hinata again. I was deeply impressed by Hinata Otsutsuki in a book I read before. She grew up step by step and finally turned into a replica of Kaguya Otsutsuki. She defeated everyone who refused to accept it. It felt quite cool 😂

... The author lets the Hyuga clan run away for a trip to avoid Kumogakure's conspiracy. How do you describe this operation? Do you take it for granted? You, the Hyuga Clan, are in the Konoha Village. People are careful to deal with you. If you don't run out by yourself, then don't blame them for being dirty. They put on the mask and plucked your eyes out. I don't know who Kumogakure is. Didn't you lose the watermelon and pick up the sesame seeds?

You can tell the author's level just by this word

Marry a single person? The author won't reply? Want to eat both sides?

I saw this book recommended and thought it seemed good. But opening the author's personal information seems a bit dangerous. . . . . How many copies have been cut?

As soon as the competition came out, I immediately lost the desire to read it. There were too many competitions to watch, and they were all water gods. One by one, it all depends on how the author performs.

This relaxing style is very nice to read. I feel much calmer after reading it. I hope to continue to work hard in the future. Then after entering the main line, it is a question. Whether this book can be fully ordered depends on whether the content after the main line is good or not.

After reading the latest chapter, Chapter 78, I felt that the overall writing style began to drift. The protagonist transformed into God, opened his mouth and all races defected, and opened eight gates in the village with one finger. Now I can no longer read about the love and hatred among various ethnic groups, the pride of a genius who can see all the mountains, or the hard work of the crane's tailgate to catch up. I can only read the author's "taken for granted"!

The comment area is really cool 🙂

Your evaluation? We know that your protagonist's strength has improved too fast, and we also understand that there is basically nothing to write about in Naruto's world, but you can even enter StarCraft. This thing of starting a competition is really... You see, after leaving the planet, you can introduce the world view of other literary works, you can directly introduce super beast weapons into the parallel universe, you can introduce the Super Seminary into the inner universe and outer universe, and even directly introduce the M78 Nebula. It's not like Naruto doesn't have Gundam, right? But you started a competition? This thing is really cool and fishy. With the amount of updates you have, it seems like you haven't seen it before. Anyway, let me see how the plot of the novel develops. I'm scared.

Maybe you want to cut it off, but those of us who are silently reading still have a few words to say. It's still okay up to chapter 178. There are amazing places. For me, it's like the transformation, Hinata. These are all advantages. The most important thing is that it has reached the key node. I acted immediately without any hesitation. But the writing is a bit shallow and does not give a better feeling. The subsequent development is also okay. Although the development of the moon as an attraction is a bit confusing, it is still enough food. But the author, do you feel that there is less content to write now that Naruto has been written? You can take on Infinite World, Another World, Invasion of Otsutsuki... It's all fine, but you have to come up with something like an exposure article. Is that an element that you can enter midway? ! ! Think about it carefully. Being able to turn around and write a short story is better than you always holding the title of father-in-law!

Are there any other books in which Hinata is the main character? The eunuch ones are not included.

It's very interesting, but when I try to seize the Hokage, it's inexplicable. The main character's father becomes the Hokage after just one sentence. It's outrageous.

What the hell is this? Starting from Chapter 78, someone else will write it, right?

Are you a contemporary descendant of the Sunflower Book?

It feels a little uncomfortable to write until I open an eye on my forehead. Later you actually planned to write that you have eyes all over your body. . .

Hehe, if you keep it, you will die, I will really thank you!

Just because you don't want to talk doesn't mean you just write nonsense. We just accept it by default. A review article or some kind of editing article is basically a reservoir article. Even if you come up with a "Connect to Heaven and Infinite", it's at most an old routine. It depends on your writing style. You do this. If you want to die violently, don't pull the readers' hearts.

Hhh Seeing that everyone is talking about this list, I feel more like the interior of Naruto is basically completed. There is no plot anymore, so this review was made. As for why the author doesn't write about other worlds, it's most likely because this is a Naruto novel. If he writes too much about other things, he will discard the original and ignore it (face covering). Of course, it's also possible that the author has not read other worlds 🤭. ——Compile an explanation based on the answer

Someone who is good at writing outlines becomes a Hokage in the blink of an eye? Why don't you take all the development in one go and defeat Otsutsuki in a blink of an eye to unify the ninja world?

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

The introduction is all wrong. Bearing the brunt means being the first to receive the attack. Let's first learn the basic knowledge required for Chinese language for the college entrance examination.