Konoha: Sign in at the Beginning of Hashirama Cell

I wrote a lot about the harem, and I wrote about Sakura who was about to get married and then ntr, she was brainwashed and disappeared, and she continued ntr after being rescued, a flying thunder god was caught, poisoned to death, and Ino Hinata was a tool man and her combat power collapsed.

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. Everything else is fine, but the emotional part is really rubbish.

I just want to say that this emotional scene made me think I was watching Qiong Yao

Hinata is true love, Sakura go away

It feels like I've seen this emotional line somewhere before. I guess Ino was covering for Sakura and then stalking Naruto.

Stop writing about Naruto. Go ahead and write about romance. This bloody plot is so boring.

Sakura can play flying thunder gods and clones? She can play wood escape. Taima is a genius in medical and physical arts and you let her play ninjutsu. It's not like you to be ingenious. I'll save it and look at the catalog. .

I really can't stand it anymore. Why write so much about Sakura? Heroine? As for Hinata's role, it doesn't matter. It gives the impression that Hinata is a tool, and it's enough to give her money and coax her. And Sakura? As for ninjutsu, can he learn Flying Thunder God? Isn't the setting of Flying Thunder God something that Sakura can learn? How many geniuses are there in the Naruto world? Even three generations of ninjutsu doctors couldn't learn it, and even a genius like Kakashi couldn't learn it. It's okay for the protagonist to cheat, but Sakura also cheated? Can't stand it anymore

It poisoned me. The latest chapter is about Sakura being raped by another god. I no longer want to read it. Nothing, just a note. Actually, what attracts me to this article is that Sakura in this article is different from other articles, no matter what the reason is. Whether it's just for the harem or for other reasons.

Using other people's works to write novels to make money, and then randomly changing the settings, what's the point? It sounds better: Second setting It doesn't sound good: Going to someone else's house to eat and smashing someone else's pot

I feel that there are always some people who use their own inherent prejudices to evaluate other people's works. These are fan works and not original works. I have read more than 30 of them so far and I don't feel anything bad about them? I feel like those people are just like racists. They always like to bring their own prejudices to see other things. Really, if you don't like it, you can leave but you have to be disgusting.

This is the first time for everyone, so why should we accommodate you? Sakura is indeed a portrayal of a real child from an ordinary family. It's understandable to be a confused nymphomaniac and have low self-esteem, but understanding doesn't mean you have to be accommodating. This protagonist is too unruly.

A time-traveler behaved like a native and inexplicably let Sakura live in his home... And then started giving him all kinds of ninjutsu...

There is nothing wrong with Sakura herself, but since there is such a thing as cherry powder, Sakura has become a bit hateful. There is no Hokage complete without Iruka.

Isn't this the plot of Shield Ninja? !

It's Yi Xiaochuan again. When he knows that someone else likes him, he obviously has the ability to have a harem but doesn't want one. He only wants one.

I think it would be more appropriate to change the title of the book to: "I Fall in Love in Naruto". Is this a romance novel? The amount of love plots is a bit outrageous. Besides, a flat-chested girl like Sakura, who has trouble with Naruto and has trouble with Sasuke, can also be the heroine.

Anyone who has seen the same routine will definitely push Sakura higher. I really don't like bitchy people

I'm so confused. When I read chapter 30, did I write the protagonist as 🐶?

How did these 100 monthly votes come from? It must not have been earned through brushing. I firmly believe this. I can only say that some people still like NC articles. I really want to see what these people look like. What kind of g8 things are there in reality? They actually like such purely mindless articles.

I don't like Sakura either, but is it necessary to criticize her so much? Sakura never said she liked Naruto from the beginning, or maybe she liked Naruto a little later. As a civilian ninja girl, it is normal for her to be nymphomaniac and cowardly in the early stage. Sasuke grew up after cutting his hair after defecting. The blast is also very useful in the fourth battle. Those who say Sakura is a bitch are really disgusting. That's a bitch. It's not because you saw the girl you like after taking the role of Naruto and you don't like her, so you call her a bitch. In the early days, the nymphomaniac and violent woman was very annoying, but calling her a bitch is really disgusting.

This Naruto is really disgusting, Qiong Yao is a dog licker

Excluding the real world, the reason why Hinata became the leader of Hokage is because there was a big financial backer after Hinata. Many of the original works were forcibly put together, and the logic does not make sense. For example, what happened between Ino and Sakai, there is no extra story, and Choji and Samoy don't know how they got together.

Were you the happy guy who wrote Shield Ninja?

This novel is disgusting (ー_ー)!!

I can't stand it anymore. . . . Low emotional intelligence is rare. . . He is obviously a straight man who has been single for ten thousand years, but he insists on writing these delicate emotional lines. . . He was so embarrassed that he didn't even say anything, and he even lured Sakura back. . . Who the hell can stand this? Putting Sakura and Hinata together, everyone knows how to choose, right?

I really don't want to say anything, but I'm still pretending to be illiterate and naive in my new life. Even if I'm reborn in another world, I should know the good and evil of the world, the warmth and coldness of human beings! But not here! I really don't know how the author conceived the characters. Could it be a novel written by a junior high school student or a high school student for fun! Moreover, it was really a forced intelligence reduction at the beginning. After being reborn, he actually had the IQ of a child. I was speechless.

Reading this book made me realize how harmful stereotypes are. The social system in your last life is not applicable to this life. He abruptly blocked such a woman's thoughts. Among the first-level time travellers, they belong to the type that is despised and isolated.

What the hell are you writing? It's not like Naruto is the original Naruto who traveled through time and yet he is beaten by Sakura every day.

It's disgusting. No matter how outrageous the fandom is, it still has to meet the conditions. Sakura bitch somehow learned to fly the thunder god. The third generation didn't stop her. She can give it to anyone in the future. The stupid protagonist has no idea what he is playing.