Konoha Uchiha Izayoi

It's extremely poisonous, not because of the plot, but because of the author's thoughts I've seen people who don't like Itachi, and I've seen people who like Itachi, but it's really funny to put all the blame for Itachi on Shisui and make Itachi look like a white lotus! I have to say, the author is really a talent! What about Shisui having to die? It's really funny. I suggest you hang out with Danzo. The three views are so consistent with Danzo's. What's the difference between this and throwing all the blame to Danzo to create a glorious and majestic image for the third generation?

The writing is really like Tang San'er

It's a baffling reply, but it's still a weasel.

This book is really frustrating. The key is what kind of person I am. I just want to save Uchiha. It's funny.

It's not like you're looking for an Uchiha to be transferred. The Uchiha clan has black hair and good looks. They may also have the Sharingan eye, and they have to avoid the perception of ninjas who may be in the delivery room I haven't read the novel, but I'll make a complaint after seeing the introduction.

Can Uchiha hang out under Danzo? Are you sure it's not experimental material?

You remind me of an old friend, yes, it's Tang San😒

Read the reviews: Does this book still boast about being a weasel? This is the poisonous point. This book is bullshit.

I really don't understand why the age should be set so low.

What the hell are you doing after writing 7 novels?

It's really strong that the author of so many bad reviews can still write it down.

With the water like this and no bright spots, who is investing?

What kind of garbage novels are these? What kind of thing is Naruto?

What kind of bullshit is written? The setting at the beginning is a bit interesting, but I don't know what it is doing after that.

I'm still scolding you in the comment section, I've already written six Naruto fanfics and this is the level of this 🤔🤔

The root organizations are all tool men who have no feelings, how can there be a couple? It is impossible for Danzo to let the tool man have the weakness of a child!

Look at what is written in the front, and then look at what is written in the back. This is how many people can be deceived into paying.

Doesn't anyone think it's ridiculous? I keep messing with that butterfly, but I don't want to fight. I also mess with the clan leader and those elders every day. I really don't have the desire to continue watching.

At a glance, the logic of the introduction does not make sense, and Itachi blows the history within the history.

I really like the author's private love line between Shisui and Kurenai. Recently, a new character named Uchiha Hikaru was released in the Naruto game. How about adding it to the book to give Uchiha some strength?

Let's go back to the basics. A five-year-old who can change the world is not suitable for the ninja world. Logical problem.

If it doesn't follow the original work, it will collapse if its combat power collapses. But it is very good to have your own innovation and write the story from the perspective of a living being who has been watching for a long time! Even the protagonist is so awesome that he makes people all over the world live forever, which is even more awesome! After catching up on the latest chapter, there are indeed poisonous points in the middle, but the impact is not big. It's definitely not as serious as other comments saying it depends on the defense. What is very interesting is the author's use of the Sharingan, especially the awakening of the three magatama. Marvelous! I believe that everyone has times when their emotions fluctuate violently, but there are so many people who have traveled through Uchiha, but no one has ever thought of this way of awakening. Write your own thoughts. As long as it can be updated, I will order it.

The most helpless person to write about Naruto fandom is the Ōtsutsukimoto family. It is true that I can write about the splendid lives of ordinary people. I will not care about the flood after I die. That must be wonderful. However, this is a world where it is possible to live forever. Let me ask you, an ordinary person with a normal short-lived species, if he comes to this world where it is possible to live forever, will he pursue immortality? No, that means you are just an ordinary person. Why would an ordinary person dare to interact with the characters in the plot? In a world with extraordinary beings, which extraordinary person would become a good friend with an ordinary person? In the process of pursuing immortality, is time something that can be squandered at will? That is absolutely impossible. Unless the time of travel is right after Hagoromo and Hamura sealed Kaguya. As a result, it would take nearly a thousand years for Otsutsuki to be encountered one after another. As long as you travel close to the time point of Naruto's main plot, how much time will you have to become stronger? Born at the same time as Nazuo, that's only 16 years. Born later, the time is shorter. In such a short ten years, what height can ordinary time travelers grow to? If it's earlier than Naru Sa, how much earlier would be an appropriate number? As mentioned before, a thousand years earlier? But no matter how early it is, in front of Otsutsuki who has the ability to travel through time, they can always go back to the past and crush you to death when you were still weak... It's an endless loop. Unless you are a time traveler with a system, you can affect the world through some actions and become stronger out of nowhere. In this way, the test is the author's writing style and story telling ability. How to balance the daily life of the protagonist and the progress of the world, so as not to get entangled in the daily drama of a few people, but also take into account the development of the entire world... If there is such a good work, please be sure to introduce it to me! And now the author's book is clearly the template for success after becoming an Uchiha! Immortal people will never be assimilated by the love between short-lived species! To put it bluntly, short-lived species are to long-lived species what ants are to ordinary people. It may not be appropriate to say ants, but it may be more appropriate to say cicadas or summer insects. Let me ask you whether ordinary people would develop friendship with cicadas. If we talk about morphological cognition, let's take a technique from another book: 8x growth. Will normal humans fall in love and make friends with humans who grow at 8 times the speed? You can ask yourself this question.

The setting at the beginning is quite good, but when I return to Uchiha, I get into chaos and fall into narcissism. Dozens of chapters are filled with interactions. This is a hot-blooded anime. There is no fighting. Everyone is being pushed around by a brat of a few years old. With soaring strength, you can get whatever you want.

Complain! I feel like the recent chapters are good😥. Feel free to express some personal opinions on the content of Naruto. There are many Naruto fanfics that like to treat basic avatar techniques as space ninjutsu, but this is a good thing. Otherwise, what is the use of flying thunder gods? Some Naruto fanfics like to set up the Rinnegan's Hungry Ghost Path skill to absorb Susana. That Eternal Madara beat the first generation with his head. The first generation's wood style ability to absorb chakra can compete with Madara's samsara eye. Didn't Susan give chakra to others? Therefore, it should not be absorbed. Otherwise, it would be easier for Madara and Kaguya to directly absorb Sasuke's Susanoo in the later stage. There should be some techniques that cannot be absorbed, especially those related to Yin Release, such as when Madara used the Yin Release Thunder Pai to hit Sasuke (Sasuke at that time had the Rinnegan). The Samsara Eye cannot absorb Amaterasu, otherwise Nagato would have absorbed it long ago, and Shinra Tenzheng cannot directly bounce it away. It should bounce off his own skin indirectly. The Ten-Tails has removed its outer skin, and Naruto has removed its chakra coat. Madara (Madara didn't have eyes at that time) and Kaguya (if he could absorb it, he wouldn't be afraid of Amaterasu) didn't know how to get rid of it. The Samsara Eye can absorb celestial magic and ninjutsu. You can directly absorb magic chakra, but you cannot directly absorb excessive amounts of natural energy. Many people can't figure it out 😥 Even the Single Rinnegan Jinchūriki Obito and the Single Rinnegan Outer Path Pain Obito can't use some of the Six Paths of Rinnegan's pupil techniques. The Ten-Tailed Jinchuuriki Madara with a single reincarnation eye can't use any other techniques except the exclusive eye technique in his own reincarnation eye. When Naruto threw the Rasengan, the one-eyed spot did not absorb or bounce away, so it could only be hit hard. In the early stages of the anime, it was analyzed that when Obito fought with the protagonist, it was necessary to use the Rinnegan to suppress the Tailed Beast without using the Six Paths Eye Technique. I don't know how some people interpreted it as a bug. Madara, the Ten-Tailed Jinchuuriki with both eyes, can break the limit, and he will use a lot of Earth Blast Stars later on. I typed a lot of words, but I don't know if the author can read them. It's too late. I have something to do tomorrow. I'll post some personal insights next time

It's very nice, very suitable for book lovers.

[Naruto World]: Can sacrificing Uchiha maintain peace in the ninja world? If my last name wasn't Uchiha, I almost would have believed it! You can call me traitor or executioner behind my back, but in front of me, you have to call me clan leader, or Hokage-sama! [Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba]: Mukai, I don't know what you regard life as, but I regard the blue Higan flower as a pickle! [Giant World]: It's not Jike or Allen who realizes his wish, but me! Titan power? Oh, Susanoo! [Inuyasha]: Kikyo, your biggest weakness is your kindness towards human beings. Now I want to forcefully kiss you. If you can, beat me to death! [Pirates]: Pirates are not allowed in the world of One Piece! This sea belongs only to navigators and adventurers! [God of Death], [Magic Forbidden], [Red Eyes], [Conan]...

Damn, damn, the Uchiha family is not that complicated. The Uchiha family is written too complicated. This is the worst thing about this fan fiction. Look at the situation of the Uchiha family written in other fan fiction. The situation is much better.

It feels like the author is a girl. This novel is full of all kinds of power struggles. Why does Naruto write so many of them? Especially the Uchiha family in the front, which is so dark and complex, with all kinds of struggles. It feels similar to female novels. With strong strength, how come there are so many struggles.