Starting from Selling Oneself to Raising an Immortal Mansion

Wherever I go, I eat and hold it in until I feel safe at all I don't want to change my practice even if I try to practice a technique with huge hidden dangers I am afraid of things, but I can't hide from it Goldfinger's Immortal Mansion is completely rubbish. The more times it is ripened, the more it will collapse It takes a long time to use it. The weapon spirit inside is still plotting against the owner The higher the cultivation level and alchemy skills, the more difficult it is to hold back While practicing Qi, I was involved in a bunch of golden elixir incidents It's not like I just met half a good person on the road The whole text is not interesting. I don't understand what I'm reading

The beginning is very interesting, and if you dig deeper, it might become a masterpiece, but unfortunately it becomes boring later. From the magic gate, it is the traditional way of cultivating immortals, and this track is so exciting. I can't understand why the author didn't write about the special features, but just joined the army of scroll kings and became a little shrimp.

This is the first time I have seen such a surprising novel, The Story of a Duck Cultivating Immortality, it's good, good, keep up the good work.

In fact, the Immortal Mansion has to have a talking Ding Ye. It's really not as good as just growing whatever you want in a piece of land with these spirit spirits in it. It's really boring to slowly explore and add all these messy things.

Not bad, not bad. This is my first time seeing the duck genre. I want to criticize it.

Is there still an old man in this immortal mansion? No interest at all.

In Shuangwen Xiuxian, the protagonist can accumulate resources and gradually grow stronger by having a portable space, but this portable space hinders the development of the protagonist. From the dozens of chapters, it seems that the protagonist's skills have hidden dangers, and there is a space that hinders his cultivation. There are actually fewer and fewer people watching.

Such a clichéd and silly plot, with the spirit coaxing and the voice of a child at the same time.

There is no skill or magic weapon, but the protagonist, an alchemist, always beats opponents at a higher level? Others are vegetarians

It's good to have space, but it's not good to have people in the space. Ding's dialogue is a bit toxic.

There is also the Immortal Mansion space. If you can't speed up, you won't plant medicine. Even if you can't speed up, you can still plant some medicine that is difficult to collect from the outside world. Just let these medicines grow slowly without speeding up. In case it affects the path, you can also use a little speed up.

Selling meat already doesn't have much dignity, and you have to go back to the Immortal Mansion to be Lord Ding's grandson.

I'm also surprised that the master of the Immortal Mansion's single-path inheritance does not have a single prescription, or a method of accompanying a single prescription based on the properties of the medicine. It's really too bad.

The male protagonist is really 🦆, the kind who is willing to

There is a problem with the positioning of this book You position yourself as the Demon Sect, Shuangxiu, and Hehuan, so you should write according to this. You see, what you wrote is biased toward grandma's house. It's not impossible to make elixirs, but why are you refining those serious elixirs? Why don't you refine some elixirs to improve your dual cultivation? Also, the Demon Gate, you are the Demon Gate, where is the Demon Gate manifested? Look at Fang Yuan, that's called the Demon Sect, trying to climb up by any means necessary. What you wrote is called the Demon Gate? This book basically collapsed

It's very well written. Come on, author, but the woman named Yu is so annoying that she's become a burden. When can I stop writing about her?

I feel that the author can write in depth using the duck style (let's call it that), but it still conflicts with the gold-finger style of writing that follows the crowd. In fact, the readers of Duck Stream don't bring in their own emotions very much, and the Golden Finger of Immortal Palace is a refreshing way of writing that is forced to bring in. From this aspect alone, the two are in conflict. Then why not just follow the duck's path and write it to black? As long as you are determined to live forever, duck streaming is also a good method, and the protagonist is not traveling through time, then simply write about the sect that has always existed in immortality novels such as the Hehuan Sect! ! It feels like there is a lot to write about, such as this method of gathering energy and nourishing the essence, you can write about the nourishing essence collected by the cauldron; you can also write about the complementary characteristics of dual cultivation; finally, you can also write about something high-level, a Taoist companion who is consistent with your own philosophy of seeking Taoism. This kind of non-strict method can be written as a true biography, a Taoist guardian elder or even the leader of a sect. There are three schools of thought just now. As for the characters, there are too many that can be written about, such as male and female, female and male, male and female, siblings, masters and disciples, evil cultivators of the Cauldron style, and high-level patterns of Taoist couple style. Just do some research and write about duck flow. It definitely has potential.

The writing is acceptable. I have read thousands of excellent works on cultivating immortals from Journey to Immortality to Mortals. Come on, author, get on the Immortal List soon.

I don't think you need to lock it so hard in foundation building. Now it's a bit slow to put it on the shelves in foundation building. It's not reasonable to be too locked in the early stage and encounter so many realms that exceed it. In fact, you can now just learn the mortal's late stage state lock. I remember that the old devil broke through when Yuan Ying was about to die when he transformed into a god.

Come on!

The plot and protagonist's character are pretty good. It's just that the improvement in strength is a bit slow. I'm afraid the golden elixir won't be available for more than 800 chapters.

Book recommendation "[Family Cultivation of Immortality: I Have a Palm Immortal Mansion]

🦆The founder of the Wangliu Kai sect is here, so this kid may have a chance to get started. Too...., Author. . . Cow b

The level of writing books now is so rubbish. Don't write novels at this level. It's a sin to create rubbish. It's a piece of shit.

I think you can write an outline, which includes the names and effects of spells and techniques, as well as magic weapons and maps.

In Chapter 64, I bought a house in the south of the city, but later bought a house in the north of the city. I bargained for a long time and even gave him a bottle of elixir. Then he moved to the south of the city. Didn't the author write articles without checking them? Chapter 65 is still south of the city. . .