Jade Bone Immortal

Well written and well written. The disadvantage is that the protagonist always relies on accidental rescue to survive. If this happens too much, it becomes the result of luck rather than the protagonist's own subjective initiative, and the overall taste and grade will be greatly reduced.

The advantages are fluent writing and exciting fighting. The main drawback is that the level is too strong. After 100 chapters, it is still the third level of Qi training. The means of fighting enemies now rely entirely on jade charms/formations, lacking the means to make a final decision. No matter who you fight, it feels full of danger, but you can win 50-50. At first glance, a large number of magic weapons, elixirs, and spiritual stone resources are seized each time, but they are of no use. The magic weapons appear very rarely. Once they appear, most of their functions are consumables. The wealth and magic land required for practice seem to be unimportant. Apart from being somewhat useful at the beginning, the forces under his command have not been seen to have any promotion or significance for the protagonist's practice in the next two years. Instead, the protagonist is now a nanny again and again. The level of spiritual cultivation is the fundamental thing. It's a bit putting the cart before the horse. If you want to write two hundred chapters, it's still three levels. The author is a god.

I've been here since 2024 and have updated it to chapter 800. The protagonist is still at the third level of Qi training, but he can already become a god in seconds.

I like this book very much. I have read several books with similar themes. Our logic is the most rigorous and there are no messy emotions. Fighting. It is a very clean book.

Not bad, good, IQ is online, and the story is very smooth.

With the author's writing style, as long as the plot does not collapse, even if the book is limited by the subject matter, it will eventually be brilliant after enough accumulation. The protagonist has a moderate level of progress and retreat, the supporting characters have normal IQs, the world is not complicated but natural, and the style is biased towards martial arts. It is suitable to add the part of immortal magic, and it is also more conducive to highlighting the excitement of fairy tales. I feel that this book can present the diversity and levels of the world as the realm improves. I hope the author can do a good job in the framework layout. The protagonist who does not know that he is the protagonist but still has the character and means to seek truth is the true immortal. Come on, author, good books will attract readers!

Great book! ! I hope the author will stick to it and not make it short

Full subscription + 2 monthly passes, I hope the author will keep writing. I feel that this book by the author is actually more like a fantasy martial arts than a fairy tale

I think it's pretty good-looking, and there's nothing wrong with the logic and writing. I have a few small objections. It just feels like there are no cultivators who have to fight and kill all the time, and the protagonist can kill and refining energy at level 3 and keep jumping through levels. Although the spiritual awareness is high, I think it is still unreasonable. I hope the author can improve the protagonist's cultivation and write some chapters about cultivation. It is also very important not to make the protagonist's enemies look silly, and I don't want the writing to sound like a cool novel.

I won't pay attention to whether the author is a eunuch or not.

This book looks good, keep up the good work, author! ✊

Fight to break the sky? Thirty years in Hedong Thirty years in Hexi

Everything is fine, but updates are a bit lacking 😆