Start from Immortality and Become the Supreme Being in the Immortal World

If it really takes a thousand years to build the foundation and ten thousand years of golden elixir, what's the point? 🙄

There are basically more than 10 "buts" in each chapter, which makes the reading experience very poor.

Time can accumulate wisdom. But the protagonist gives people the feeling of a childish child, without much composure at all.

I have discovered that in any article about cultivating immortality and immortality, the protagonist must be a loser, with inferior qualifications. Otherwise, the author would not write it.

When I saw the protagonist running away without hesitation, I knew that this book could be followed

What's the point of immortality without a heroine? Not lonely? ? And without emotional coordination, it feels very boring.

After seeing the introduction, if you can't kill someone now, will you be able to kill someone else in ten thousand years? While others can live for thousands of years, you are just an ant in front of them.

Who will watch the useless protagonist now? Do you see it? If you like to watch the same thing, you will know the follow-up plot after watching the beginning, will you still be able to watch it? Readers must stand up. The reason why there are so many responses is because we have few choices, so we should be tougher and spray when we should.

It's too boring. The protagonist is the same as entering the factory. He only works on the assembly line and has no personal interests and hobbies. He doesn't even have the same emotions and desires. Being immortal is not about being an ascetic...

Let's talk about some logic in the introduction. The golden elixir has a lifespan of 500. If you form the elixir in ten thousand years, and others are still alive, will they become immortals? Have you been able to fight?

You said you are immune to all poisons, but are you afraid of erysipelas?

When I read about Chapter 50, some of the writing was too bland, and you don't even practice the magic of protecting the Tao. It's too far-fetched for the Foundation Establishment monks to hunt you down (in the Foundation Establishment stage) and use the light body technique of the Qi training stage to escape.

There is a problem with the introduction. It takes 100 years for others to practice, but it takes you 1,000 years. You can't defeat them now. Ten thousand years from now, as long as others don't die, their level will be even higher. How can you defeat them?

This book is a bit of a dog in the early stages, but in the middle, it is a bit inconsistent, forcing the protagonist to practice, which is not interesting. It is purely a flow of writing and only my personal opinion. If you don't believe me, read it for yourself!

A trashy novel that makes you unable to walk when you see a woman. The common sense in the world of cultivating immortals doesn't even know how to cultivate your mother's immortality? Is Elder Jindan's foundation-building pet reasonable? Junk novels

This is not being a dog, this is being a dog!

The first chapter assumes that the protagonist is invulnerable to all poisons. Later, various erysipelas enter the body. I don't know if there is an outline.

No matter what studio mass-produces novels, the beginning has not changed. Changing from martial arts to cultivating immortals is okay.

This kind of gossip says that watching your enemies die of old age and dancing on their graves is just self-deception. Your enemies are higher in cultivation than you and you dare not take revenge. They have been happy all their lives when they are rich and noble, and maybe they only suffer in the last period of time before they die. As for you, watching others enjoy themselves for hundreds of years, who is suffering? To put it nicely, be cautious and patient, and become an immortal and an ancestor. To be honest, isn't it just a long life that is suppressed? The longer you live, the more frustrated you are. This kind of reasoning can definitely suppress illness. It is impossible for people to live like this. It is unrealistic. In the end, you will either go crazy or lose your humanity.

I feel that things like immortality are really not good for protagonists. No matter how immortal you are, you will have already cultivated to a state that is not affected by time, such as transcendence, or even a random passerby can beat the novice village.

Practicing Qi and longevity is 150, building foundation and longevity is 300, and golden elixir is longevity is 500. The longevity of golden elixir is unreasonable. The higher you go, the harder it becomes. The longevity of golden elixir is only 500. The author of the snack. Cultivation of immortality and cultivation are included in everything. Shouyuan is also included in it.

For this type of book, you have to find Gou in the deep mountains and old forests, not in the downtown area.

Is there a female protagonist 🙂

I'm afraid the protagonist's qualifications are worse than those of a pig.

These words are not even rough enough to express

I didn't want to read this book when I saw the elixir of planting. The foundation-building elixir has a cycle of 20 spiritual stones and takes 10 years. So in this world of immortal cultivation, foundation-building is definitely not as good as a dog. There are golden elixirs all over the place, and even Nascent Soul is not a master. This is the fucking immortal world, not the immortal world.

Xiaobaiwen, the author is Xiaoheizi. It's okay to write this kind of joke once, but it's not interesting to write it all the time. The longevity stream has become the singles stream, which is not interesting.

A running account like reading a primary school composition

Eh... I can't stand it anymore. There is a problem with the writing. It lacks the sense of time brought by the immortality. The writing becomes very enjoyable.

It's a mess, and it's inexplicable. Selling coins without even smoothing out the chapters is crazy.