Pirates: the Whole Group Will Be at the Level of General

I couldn't stand it until I reached chapter 17. There were not big problems with the plot, but a bunch of language errors made me give up the idea of ​​continuing to watch.

I am speechless while cursing pirates and hanging the pirate flag, hahahaha

It is always mystifying, half-talking, digging holes and leaving suspense, which is a test of writing skills. The writing style is not good, the writing is full of poisonous points, half-covered and half-covered to keep people's appetite, the rhythm is not well grasped, there is no desire to read at all, and the setting is not good.

Well, let's talk about it. First of all, regarding the camp issue, I may have been a bit confused earlier, but the protagonist is taking the emperor's route. As for hanging the pirate flag, the original book makes it very clear. For example, even the navy invaded Fish-Man Island, so only the Whitebeard flag was hung up so that no one would bother them. So some comments insist on this camp issue. I I'm speechless. Im sank an island with one blow. Blackbeard kidnapped Kirby and had to negotiate with the World Government to make them recognize Blackbeard's national legitimacy. This is enough to show that unless you run around, Im can get you at any time. And so far, the fatalistic lineage of this anime has been determined. Why not write about Im as the big boss? Then the question comes. There are many things that you can't do unless you are a pirate. Another issue is the Holy Mother. If you don't kill the navy, will you become a Holy Mother? Spoiler alert, the following content is the era of the undercover. The protagonist grabs it from the navy. It is also written in the book. Without all support, the World Government is just a pure big robber, so I wrote undercover in the introduction. I have written many settings based on the original work. Cloud Pirates, please don't compete with me. For example, in the latest episode, Garp's strength is directly exploded, and the Overlord color is also really hammered. 😁

Is it a tycoon style? I have imagined this book to be similar to this before. Discover and cultivate talents from all walks of life, such as Robin Arkin, Abel Supernova Black Group and other potential stocks. Secretly communicate with Hancock and other Shichibukai, marry Charlotte and incorporate them, and defeat or kill Kaido. You can recruit Ace's adopted son to build karma, and support yourself to build up your reputation. Wano nobles hang street lamps. Then master the four ancient weapons Uta and White Star. It's almost one-on-one with the government. If Gou Guo is not extinguished by Yim, he can finally make a three-pronged attack with the Straw Hats and the revolutionary military to harvest the fruits of victory. FYI hehe. It's just that the narrative needs to be improved, please work on it.

It is not recommended to sensationalize the first chapter. You start to sensationalize the story before the readers have even taken it in. Are you writing it as a female video? In addition, the protagonist's appearance at the last moment is too tacky.

Momonosuke is the king? I'm really convinced. That's nonsense.

It is unrealistic for the entire group to be at the emperor level, and it would be useless to open a comment after seeing the name and not wanting to read it.

Why are the current pirate books, except for Tom's one, basically containing private goods? Pirates is just a hot-blooded anime. Why do you think so much?

Chapter 85 praises Red Dog. I really didn't expect it. What is Red Dog? He is just a thug of the World Government. He doesn't care about civilians at all. The World Government implements tyranny, and Akainu is a vested interest in maintaining tyranny. When you praise Red Dog, to put it bluntly, you think he looks like a soldier. You may not know what the responsibilities of a soldier are.

To sum up, this is a novel written by the author for himself. It contains too much personal information and tries to distort the readers' three views. It is not recommended for those who want to read pure pirate fan fiction.

Did Shen Nong test poison? 😏😏

I don't want to see it anymore. It's really disgusting to see a little Karami like Crow show up.

I like to sensationalize too much. It's so disgusting. What a holy mother.

Is there anyone...😁

In the beginning, the handsome boy with silver hair, blue eyes, and a tear mark? Could this be a combination that humans can have? The first two are fine, but this mole with tears? I dare not create this face in my mind. Are people's aesthetics so deformed nowadays?

Is it that bad? It's just that the protagonist doesn't have much plot, and it's all about the power game of pirates, which is why it's been criticized like this. I think the starting point is only equipped with scum and cool articles.

Look, the strength is big enough, and the pattern must be big enough, come on 😜

I also think Moji, to be honest, this style is more suitable for writing about Naruto. In the world of Pirates, force is paramount. If you are invincible, just push it horizontally. Undercover agents are arranged everywhere, making it seem like a strategist. And the protagonist is at the Yonko level at the beginning, and there are several emperors and lieutenants. It is already the beginning of the invincible style, but the famous one that I want to see most is not seen, and the battle scenes are not good to watch. After reading dozens of chapters, I see that every new character appearing in every few chapters is the protagonist's subordinate. The world's ZF, underground black market, and pirates are all undercover agents of the protagonist. I feel that if I continue reading, the content is that the revolution also has the protagonist's people, the navy also has people, the aunt also has them, and Kaido also has them. The protagonist's pirate group should be called Dragon King.

Is it just me who feels confused? Even inexplicably. Am I the only one who feels this way?

If you don't become a pirate in the navy, you can only build a country.

It's very dull, and I don't understand what the purpose of having so many undercovers is. They work together to gain territory and run a small world government. Isn't it good that an undercover pops up wherever they go? . . This style of strategizing and planning everything is really not suitable for One Piece

It's no use to all the Yonko. As long as they don't understand, they will end up like Ling Ling Kai.

After reading the first two chapters, the narrative is messy and filled with the mindless pretentious writing style of more than ten years ago.

It's a bit like a web drama, and the writing is so weird. It's the kind of feeling that you really want to watch but can't stand it. Tsk

Is that Guina serious? Those who want to die don't like it

I think it's pretty good. As for the poison, I don't feel it. Of course, maybe I don't have high requirements? Anyway, it's to my liking

What a fucking rubbish book. Very poisonous. Send 1,200 fairy beans a year to the enemy.

My sister, I thought she was a kingly and passionate person, but she actually conspired for this, a villain,

"One Piece: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" If you are short on books, you can read this book. It is a very interesting and novel pirate fanfic. This book stretches the timeline to before Rocks attacks the Valley of the Gods. The protagonist Li Yuan has his own domineering body-tempering secret "Sword God Body Tempering Art". Rise up in the Rocks Pirates, become a cadre, and plunder the property of the Celestial Dragons in the Valley of Gods. After the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, participate in the New World Hegemony and occupy Wano Country. Become the world's greatest swordsman and dominate the new world with Whitebeard and others. The protagonist has four children, Stephens-Gane, Wei Zhuang, Esdeath, and Chi Tong. They are all great swordsmen, competing with Hawkeye and Red Hair...