After Being Reborn, He Was Pestered by His National Girlfriend

It's so disgusting that I gave up the book after reading Chapter 10. If the male protagonist has a problem with his character, does the male protagonist have to be immoral if others are immoral? If others die, do you want to die too? This whole book has been brought down.

The relationship progressed too fast, and the heroine could read songs from the hero. This was a bit unclear. In the end, the heroine posted two new songs, but the hero didn't realize that they were songs from the original world, and he didn't investigate. Haha

Similar to the setting of Big Devil, it is just an internal entertainment and a daily entertainment

At first glance, I thought she was my girlfriend from the Republic of China

Come on, although the front is not round enough. You can write a completely touching plot later, otherwise it will feel like it is not sincere enough? Also, can you put down the title of the song? 🤭

This should be the template for unemployment at the beginning, right?

The beginning sent me away, the male protagonist said that he had lost his memory, and then he met the female protagonist and sang directly, and then the female protagonist was fascinated.

Come on author, there is a lot of room for improvement

The writing style is light and classic, and the plot is pretty good so far. The protagonist's character is a bit resigned, and the supporting characters like Amamiya are also well described. Kazusa is too proactive, which makes the protagonist feel a bit twisted. Ryokusa, the heroine is well portrayed. . . Reality, whether it is a little snobbishness at the beginning or the initiative after accepting her feelings, it all reflects the character of Hesha

I have a classmate whose nickname is also called Literary Man. Isn't it funny? (●°U°●)​​​

This book is not very good, so I won't talk about it The male protagonist is quite disgusting

I just caught up with the latest 56 chapters. The progress is too fast and the rhythm is obviously wrong. I need more control to make it more enjoyable. I don't know whether the author plans to have a harem with multiple female protagonists or a single female protagonist. I am very confused when reading. The harem novel will have multiple chapters. One heroine is a long story. It is not enough to write multiple female protagonists together. If there is not enough accumulation, it will become a stomachache novel, which will reduce the reader's sense of the male protagonist. I will try my best to write a sweet novel with a single female protagonist, although it is difficult to write a long story. , But you can write more career lines, or turn it into travel articles, and follow the route of collecting stories. This kind of free-for-all plot is useful for reality, but useless for novels. When reading a book, you must always consider the accumulation of readers' emotions. If readers do not accumulate enough, they will abandon the book. The same goes for stomachache articles. I have lost the follow-up subscription. I have no sense of expectation now. The heroine has a good family, and she just started giving away for free without considering other things such as family and career. It has lost more than a little style. , The characters are becoming more and more flat, their thoughts have no depth, and they have no characteristics. I can't even remember what they are called when I type. The interaction with the male protagonist can be said to be too dry. The description of the character's unique personality is seriously insufficient. There are also few psychological activities and descriptions of the environment. I wanted to post it before. The plot of the male protagonist's relocation can be described in one sentence, including moving things, the original owner's belongings, the female protagonist's single help plot, and the interaction between each other. Absolutely not, it's a waste, and it also makes people feel that the plot is skippy. Instead, there is only the rough-looking producer and the cartoonist who likes to play mahjong to drag drafts. These two passers-by can write well and just a few plots can leave an impression on people. If you are a eldest lady, you have more style, taste, lots of cosmetics, good knowledge of various things, and respect from others. A eldest lady who has no knowledge and only money is just a nouveau riche. I look forward to the day when the author's writing will make a breakthrough. This book is well written and the male protagonist is understandable, but it is too bland or too thin and the characters are not yet established. I have been reading books for 8 years. I can read it and read it.

Come on author, I really enjoyed reading it, I hope you can stick with it.

No one sees the high quality

One chapter a day, and it's short. What if I don't keep it?

The data seems to be quite poor, but it is actually understandable. The author's writing style might have been quite popular before the epidemic, but after the epidemic, it changed from the golden three chapters to the golden chapter, and the creative ecology gradually changed. The number of people who read this slow pace became much less acceptable.

At first I thought I was overthinking why the heroine had an inexplicable crush on the hero, and why she was getting married so early and had an ambiguous harem. Unexpectedly, the heroine actually gave the female lead money to the male lead so that he could go to the female ticket and come back (laughs).

Not bad, but love comes too quickly and marriage comes too soon

Has anyone counted the number of songs that have appeared so far🧐

It's so beautiful! It's so beautiful! It's just that the emotional line was obviously not handled well, and Shirobako's side was obviously gone at the back. The career later doesn't mean much, it's just the daily life of the man and woman after marriage... It's still the acg happiness at the beginning