Fairy, Please Compose Yourself

Dear brothers who read this book, I sincerely request you to read it. There are too many great masters writing books now... The results of this book are not particularly satisfactory at the moment, and I am afraid that I will not recommend it! First of all, let's give a shout-out to the readers. In addition, this book is not about eunuchs. If you have a certain level, you will be able to read it! !

Let me start by saying: I am not a sp, but this author's writing is very palatable.

It is recommended to change the name. The name General Zuo Quan cannot be used casually. The Communist Party sacrificed its highest-ranking generals in the War of Resistance Against Japan. The name is really inappropriate for a villain

Writing is not easy. What I reported was really boring🙄️

I really hope that readers can leave if they don't want to read it, but don't report it. The author's writing is not easy, and it can be seen that he writes very seriously.

After reading 150 chapters in one night, I can only say that the protagonist's various unreasonable attempts to commit suicide made my blood pressure rise. Moreover, there were too many female protagonists, and some of them seemed very silly. At the same time, there are many inconsistencies in the plot. All plot conflicts are resolved by the halo of the protagonist, which directly leads to the blurring of the protagonist's character.

I've read Chapter 50. Let me tell you what you think. Personally, I feel that everything so far has been a bit superficial. Now that I have experienced two events, the Sword Asking Conference and the Tiger Demon, I feel that the author wants to write a semi-invincible Shura story (invincible among contemporaries), but this type is difficult to write well, just like the planet of Jicha. And when writing, the author likes to write some mysterious and mysterious content. Personally, I think that you don't need to be an author. What you need more is to tell a story well and tell it in our normal tone, rather than using unclear words (being the Riddler) I also feel that the description of the protagonist is a bit weak. For example, I didn't read the sword competition very carefully, but I must still have an impression of the plot after reading other books. In your case, I only remember that the clown pretended to be cool, and then was killed by the protagonist in two moves. The same goes for tiger monsters, hundreds of thousands of years of dragons. The protagonist changed her mind with just a few words. Don't you think it's a bit exaggerated. And there are obviously a lot of things that can be described in detail here, such as the dragon's guilt after controlling the flood, and the self-imprisonment (probably the meaning). It would be great to portray the character in this way. The protagonist asking passers-by for information can also make the character fuller. When you say that the protagonist's soul has experienced 500 years, but you won't inquire about such basic information (there is a dragon in the disciple you want to save, you don't care about the details of the tiger monster incident, you have to ask about the general background), there is a feeling of separation, which makes me feel like the game automatically finds the path, following the target and not caring about anything else. Finally, I hope the author will be less unreasonable (as for the Tiger Demon Caravan). Let's finish the plot first, and then output the big principles.

Hahahaha, luckily I had the foresight to delete it in advance. I accidentally searched it again today and it turned out to be a eunuch.

As the saying goes, a gentleman will not take away someone's love. If you don't like him, please leave. Click to report that you are not even worthy of a villain! Could it be that if you don't do it, you won't be able to see others?

Has the author changed? Is it an illusion? When I read about 100 chapters, it seemed like a mature writer in his twenties and thirties suddenly turned into a middle school student?