Blood Source: Blood of Strangers

The writing is not good enough. Since the update is slow, I will write slowly and slowly change it. The current text still doesn't work. It has no taste and no feeling I can't think of anything to write. You have to treat a book as a magic trick and perform it for the audience This is not a small magic, that is, this is not a short article What you perform is a magic show Even you only need to think about 5 words I became a hunter Put yourself in Just think about how I can become a hunter

It's much better today, but still not enough. To make the transition smooth, it's like drawing a circle. It's good if it's not sharp and sharp. It's good if it's not black and white. There must be gray. With gray, black and white, you can feel like one. It won't be abrupt.

What do I feel? Why do I do this? What should I let readers notice? What information can readers get from my writing? When you memorize the manuscript you wrote and when you write the manuscript but don't memorize it There are two behaviors when you go on stage Do you know why Because when we talk, we can blurt out our own words That is, it is our own thing. Although the things you write on the paper are yours, but you have not memorized them, others who are not you will sound stuck and will feel strange But if you memorize it, you will not make it clear when you memorize it. The less exciting parts will be changed, and the writing will have ups and downs, and there will be setbacks Now let's go deeper Why do some authors give up on their own writing Because he doesn't like the words he writes If he thinks that the writing is not good this time, he will write another one As everyone knows, when he gives up once, he will give up the next time Is there anyone who writes better after giving up Yes, but they are a minority If you regard your book as a tool Then the book is just a tool If you as the author don't want to know what the next text will be The readers won't want to know either That is to say, the words you write are not so exciting that the author wants to know how the next text will develop. How can the readers want to know Similarly, if you as the author want to know then the readers will want to know even more This is the core You must be able to see these problems and find your own way to solve them, so that you will not let you down. I won't let down your time I won't let down the words you wrote Don't end up with no one reading. Writing is so tiring that I don't want to write anymore Think about it

The writing is very detailed, and you can see some thoughts between the lines, but there is no hook. There is no clue to hook the reader to continue reading. The protagonist has no motive, and the writing cannot tell the purpose.