The Late Ming Dynasty: Gou Practiced Immortality in the Corpse-Burning Room

Everyone pointed out the author's bad habits and saw them all. Thank you for your generous advice! I'm very sorry if it stained everyone's eyes, I'm very sorry! In the following pages, there will be no scenes similar to eating shi and people's heart elixir. If it disgusts you, then I am really sorry. The previous article has been revised in the draft box, but it is very troublesome to replace it after it is published. I will start to revise it one by one in the next two days. Thank you again for wasting your time on my book. As long as someone attacks me personally, you can criticize me however you want. I will listen and will not delete it. As for the nonsense issue, I will also change it and replace it with more interesting life stories, such as strange stories and strange stories. As long as people don't like it, they can be scolded. Thank you all again!

Hey, the author's last few paragraphs in Chapter 15, why don't I delete them and just make a suggestion?

Tsk, when I first read the first chapter, I thought it was a weird Yakuza style, but then I looked back and found that it should be about the dynasty fighting for hegemony and rebuilding the world in the last years. The author also revealed that the Immortal Master is good, but there is a problem. The author seems to like to add some personal information. He used a full two pages to comment on the history, simply telling the history of this dynasty, without anything else, and still copying the real world. At first I thought it was the author's writing style, environment description, and background description, but as I looked at it, I felt something was not quite right. How can I put it this way? Each picture needs to describe the power relations of the lower class people or the royal family. You said that you occasionally adjust it to enhance the atmosphere, but why do you still write it so often? Of course these only represent my personal views