Hollywood

It was a bit frustrating to read. This kind of refreshing novel is so depressing and it's hard to have the desire to read it.

Can it be written more fiercely? Shouldn't the protagonist be a gangster who whitewashes himself into an entertainment boss? Why have you become a licking dog of all kinds?

A small suggestion, break the situation as soon as possible, either speed up the plot, or update this section at once. The reading data of new books is very important. Although this kind of writing now has an audience, there is no need to drive other readers away because of early abuse. In my opinion, there is no problem with the author's writing style, and the plot design is also ingenious. But this is the current rule. If there is no data in the early stage, there will be no resources, and it will be difficult to get up later. It may interfere with the rhythm of writing, but I believe that with the author's level, he will adjust later. It is a very good writing method to set up some obstacles for the protagonist in the early stage, and then rely on the protagonist's skills and talents to break these obstacles. It can make the protagonist's personality more realistic and increase the sense of reality. However, I personally feel that this kind of plot should not be delayed and needs to get to the point as soon as possible. The author should have done some research on what are the ingredients of entertainment articles. Anyway, as far as I am concerned, the protagonist cannot be silly and sweet, and the supporting characters or female characters should not be written as silly and sweet, and there should be no fan complex. The writing is a little more sophisticated. In fact, the author meets all of the above. At the current pace, I can accept it and I can continue to pursue it. However, it is obvious that some people cannot continue to pursue it. In order for me to continue reading this book in the future, I suggest that the author compromise a little and speed up the early pace. There is no need to change the outline. Just break the situation a little faster in the early stage and it should be fine. After all, the author's protagonist's character design is more in line with entertainment preferences.

Ghost Story is so disgusting, it would be a bad movie among bad movies without the hype. If you don't spend millions of dollars and have connections, you're losing money.

Why are you getting involved with the gang again?

I feel that the author's ideas are better than the previous novels, and there is no unnecessary hanging on the scope of the operation. The previous novels felt like they were directly stuck on the face.

Has the author completely entered the palace? ? ?

Ping An is such a dog! Such a good novel says eunuchs are just eunuchs,

This author is not an ordinary eunuch, he is the eunuch in charge of the ceremony! That's so willful!

The writing is okay and the plot is smooth. The question is whether the box office of Ghost Story is 10 million or 100 million. The two numbers before and after should be 10 million. After all, the distributor has changed. It should be that the box office numbers have changed in the front but not in the back. The only flaw is Li Bingbing's line. It is a bit inexplicable. Even if I value the Chinese market and her, it doesn't matter.

I don't know if the author has this feeling. It's a bit like a script. The transitions are abrupt and basically rely on hard switching. You can compare it with works like Chicago. The fluency is much worse. Originally, because of the Western writing and the name problem, it was relatively more difficult to read. It's not that I can't understand the plot, it's just that the reading experience is a bit poor. Personal opinion, for reference only.

I haven't read the previous book Eunuch. It's the most uncomfortable thing if you have a bad character.

It would be interesting if Chinese people were doing great things abroad and would return to China from time to time to do it... That would be interesting. You know in China, foreign directors are generally treated like gods.

Author, I would like to give you a suggestion. If you want the protagonist to do something that is obviously stupid, but is actually very advantageous for the protagonist, I suggest you write it directly through mental activities, and do not make twists later, because readers will abandon the book and leave before they can wait for the end. After reading more than 30 chapters, it is only enjoyable at the beginning, and the protagonist is being plotted later. Even if the writing is good and there are twists, most people can't bear it and leave. Novel is a fast-food consumer product. If you let people who are tired after working all day slowly savor it, no one will have the leisure.

No wonder I didn't get any grades and my writing was procrastinating. I can only say that I deserved it 🤫

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