Cultivating Immortality Starts at the Blacksmith's Shop

You say I'm nitpicking, I have nothing to say. Because it's two separate pieces of content, I was hooked. Something felt off, so I went back to chapter 38 to see what was wrong. Goodbye everyone.

There are invincible stories and slice-of-life stories. Yours doesn't qualify as a story that abuses the protagonist; it's more like a story about feeling frustrated.

A story about a protagonist who is abused; even though he could easily kill everyone, anyone can bully the protagonist.

This is so frustrating to write, tsk. The newbie village is currently the strongest; if you have the ability, either just storm in, or find the strongest organization to back you up so you don't have to deal with all the trivialities, or just move to another location, okay? Why do you have to write about trampling on every piece of garbage and then assassinating someone to get back?

It's really poisonous. The widowed matriarch cries at the drop of a hat; from an ordinary person to a fourth-level martial artist, she's still poisoned. You're already extraordinary, no longer an ordinary person. Can something poisonous to humans poison an elephant?

The plot and storyline are good, and the writing is also good, but the pacing is poor. There's a constant barrage of climaxes and villains, making you sound like a martial artist. And a master blacksmith at that? Do they really enjoy killing the goose that lays the golden eggs? They want to squeeze every last penny out of you? If you want to create conflict, at least make it believable.

You are a top talent needed by every faction, not a lowly fighter.

The protagonist's intelligence is forcibly reduced. Which power wouldn't want a master blacksmith to be treated like a VIP wherever he goes, with tons of money? Humanity's greatest invention for world domination is the concept of money; hiring people to directly annihilate the enemy.

Wealth, companionship, Dharma, and environment are the four essential elements of spiritual practice, yet the protagonist seems to have no concept of money. "To kill without searching the body is to be struck by lightning."

I couldn't continue reading after chapter 30. 1. Since the Lu family can dominate a region, their relationship with the government is intertwined; they wouldn't be so concerned about the government's interests. At the very least, many Lu family members must hold positions within the government. 2. The currency system is chaotic.