Konoha: This Uchiha Is Very Stubborn

It's still rubbish, and finally it's back to the Naruto plot. Do you need to retell the Naruto plot? If you can retell the Naruto plot, you can watch many episodes of anime. The plot of Naruto is inherently rubbish. Most people who like Naruto just like the skills in it, including me. I found that most people who write Naruto fan fiction, no matter how they write, they have to return to the Naruto plot, and they have to return to the Naruto plot if they copy it mechanically. What's the point? It's better to watch anime than watch you retell the Naruto plot, and recall your skills and past memories. Naruto fan fiction, not Naruto! ! ! Naruto fan fiction should be another story. Based on the setting of the background rules of the Naruto world, you can borrow part of the plot to tell your story, instead of adding a person to the narration of the Naruto plot to make another story. What is the difference between this and Naruto. If you insist that writing like this is a Naruto fanfic, then I can only say that you are "perfunctory with readers". To describe it in one word, you are "exhausting your talents".

Let me start with the conclusion, I loved this book. I have read a lot of Naruto fanfics, including quite a few Uchiha fanfics. One reason I like this book is: there is no system and no obvious plug-ins. Everything in the world is of equal value. To get something, you have to pay something. Systematic writing breaks this law. The ease with which the protagonist achieves his achievements is disrespectful to the original character. All the struggles of the original character are like a joke. The setting of the Sharingan is to lose and then gain strength. Without pain and loss, the power of the Sharingan loses its beauty. The Uchiha setting coupled with the system can easily make this Uchiha setting lose its beauty. Writing fan fiction takes advantage of the charm of the original work. The existence of the system or serious cheating removes the charm of the original work. One advantage of system articles is that it greatly simplifies the logic of the author's plot conception. Many unreasonable things can be blamed on the system. In order to arouse the readers' emotions, the logic of cool articles gives way to simple "coolness". Some requirements for self-writing will reduce the use of such techniques. The author is such a person. Sima Qian commented on Confucius, "When I read Confucius's books, I wanted to see him as a person." Looking at the author's writing, I felt that the author was also a good person.

No chakra? No system? So what do you write about Naruto?

This introduction made me laugh. Naruto, the protagonist of Naruto, mentioned that he brings his own plug-ins at the beginning. Let's talk about a trivial matter. Xiao Li, who was criticized, has a total defeat.

After reading the free chapters, I will step on the traps for those who follow me. This author is completely describing the ninja world based on the logic of the real world. All the traps that can be stepped on in the early stage have been stepped on. I can't write the key points. There are too many descriptions before the age of 12 and it's too bloated. I put a lot of energy into writing about useless sidekicks. The first murder was written like shit. An ordinary person can have a good fight with someone who is specially trained by Uchiha according to the pillars of the future. For ordinary people who are ninjas, the school will subconsciously imply that they are ninjas for killing people, let alone a family like Uchiha that has been killing people for hundreds of years. The family will only explain killing more clearly. When I saw no results later, I ran to the front and said I could skip Chapter 30 and continue reading.

There is no point in trying hard. There are many people in Hokage who work harder than you and practice 15 hours a day. I can't even lose weight in the real world, so I'm just dawdling in the ninja world What I hate the most is the Yin Yin Jutsu, which transplants Hashirama cells. Among the hundreds of millions of people in the ninja world, only the most elite one or two can succeed. Why can you join this ranks? It's like an alien comes to the earth and wants to make some money. If he can solve Goldball's conjecture or the Riemann equation and get 1 million US dollars, can he get this money easily? This is a pearl that none of the 7 billion people on the planet have been able to pick! The most true thing is that a time traveler without plug-ins cannot be proficient in the Three Body Technique (after all, many of Naruto's genin do not know the Three Body Technique). If you want to learn C-level ninjutsu, you won't be able to learn it at all. Let's consider what in reality you can't find the secret to after practicing for a month, such as singing, ghost walking, parkour, cooking, etc. Remember this feeling, if you can't learn it, you just can't learn it, that feeling of powerlessness, and your efforts are useless. Finally, it is really difficult to fly the Thunder God. Only five people in the ninja world can do it, the second generation, fourth generation, and Genma team. The probability is one in a billion. A genius like the Sannin, even the ninjutsu doctor Sarutobi Hiruzen couldn't learn it. How can you learn without plug-ins? How difficult is it specifically? You can open the website and look at previous Olympic mathematics competitions. Those questions make you unable to find ideas and you can't think of them for a month. That's probably how it feels. The principle of Flying Thunder God is to find space coordinates and reverse channeling. This may involve quantum entanglement. It is the most cutting-edge science fiction technology on earth.

Forget it if you haven't failed, you dare to put it directly on the introduction. Author, I respect you for being a man.

The chapter review said it wanted new ideas, what new ideas can there be in Naruto novels now? Which direction has no one written? Ultraman Cthulhu, American comics, knights, magic, immortality, fantasy technology, system plug-ins that adapt to plot development, which direction has no one written? What can really make a book get good results is writing, articles rather than innovation. Without good articles, no matter how good the innovation is, it is empty talk. There are some Naruto novels that are not good enough. Good ideas are let down by junk articles. The author should focus on the quality of the article instead of innovation. 99% Of the so-called novels that think they are innovative are just plain writing Poison pen, the reading experience is extremely poor

It took me so many words to search for this, I'm impressed! The ones recommended every day are either rubbish or useless without 30 chapters. I have written so much about this book that it took me so long to discover it. Searching the entire library did not find this book. The starting point is that whoever pays more will recommend that book. Even the book with all typos will be recommended every day. If there is a good book, it will not be recommended without bribery. Really awesome

I don't know why there are no recommendations. I've been reading new Uchiha books. The platform is too bad, right? There are more than 80 chapters, but I just read them one by one. What do you recommend every day? What did big data collect?

There are a lot of complaints about unreliable issues, but in fact this is not a problem with this book at all. Otsutsuki's bloodline and Sharingan are the biggest drawbacks. The real poison lies in the author's literary youth and the setting of the protagonist's character The killing in the first mission is a typical example, so poisonous What's more, the character of the protagonist is a mess that cannot be helped The protagonist wants to escape from the beginning to the end, and does not want to bear the burden of Uchiha Responsibilities, lack of mental effort, and weak will are things that no matter how hard you describe, you can't cover up What's even more ridiculous is that he doesn't want to give anything, doesn't want to fight, and ends up wanting to open the Crystal Palace It's funny, with the character of the protagonist, even if it is opened, when a powerful enemy comes to knock on the door, subdue the protagonist, and humiliate the Crystal Palace in person, the protagonist may want to survive first, escape first, and escape far away

Konoha: This Uchiha is very useless

The writing is a bit too cruel. If all the Uchiha clan really went to the battlefield, they would have rebelled long ago. The Uchiha clan all goes to the battlefield. If the Sarutobi clan cannot go, the ninja school will not be empty. You know, Uchiha is the largest and most powerful family in Konoha. That is to say, his brain is not good, otherwise Sarutobi Hiruzen would really not be able to defeat them. And the author's point of view is a bit strange, saying that the coup cannot be successful, and he is afraid that others will follow his example. Which dynasty in the history of the world did not have a successful coup, and which dynasty did not have a government out of the barrel of a gun. As long as Uchiha is strong enough, if others want to imitate him, do they have that strength? To put it bluntly, if Madara returns to Konoha after Hashirama's death, he will become Hokage and rule the world. Will anyone dare to object at that time? In a word, if you don't accept it, you will die. There are many people in the world who are not afraid of death, but those who are afraid of death always make up the majority. No one can deny this. That is to say, he is unwilling to do that, otherwise it will not be simple to destroy Konoha. And I feel that although the author's protagonist is very real, he is too aggrieved. If I were the protagonist, it would be fine if I didn't have the strength. If I had the strength, the first one would force Fugaku, a weirdo, to abdicate, or break away from Uchiha, those are the two choices. As the leader of the first family in Konoha, he is too cowardly to survive. With the backing of Uchiha ninjas, he would reject those who should be rejected, and be tough on those who should be tough. With Sarutobi Hiruzen's courage, he did not dare to push too far. As for Danzo, it's easier. Hit him once and for all, and it's best to kill him. He's a shady guy to begin with, but with Mangekyo around, Hiruzen Sarutobi wouldn't dare to turn against him. Of course, before that, we need to clean up the second and fifth sons of the clan, use the war to consume those second and fifth sons as cannon fodder, and then throw the blame to Sarutobi Hiruzen, which can also help unite the clan members. And Uchiha has the right to autonomy. Do you know what autonomy is? You can refuse unreasonable tasks in the village.

After seeing 173 pictures, if I clear Obito, the Yondaime did not take good care of his disciples. I was really drunk. The teacher is not a nanny. He also has tasks to complete. The battlefield is ruthless and life and death depend on fate. You still expect someone to protect you when you go to the battlefield to perform meritorious service. You only think about the benefits and don't want to take risks. Another point is that Kakashi is a jounin, and the two chunin, including the medical ninja, can already perform tasks normally and independently. They are already qualified and are highly qualified.

It's not that you are too lazy to kill people. If the protagonist decides to become a ninja, he should be ready. It's like going to a factory to drive screws but can't stand sitting in one place for a long time.

In all novels and anime worlds, Naruto is the only one who has not died, so he can only be used as cannon fodder. First of all, the biggest problem with the Hokage system is that there is no bloodline, and there is almost no way to rise (it is almost impossible to synthesize the blood snare by oneself). Secondly, under the Hokage system, only Uchiha Madara achieved the only one in a thousand years, evolving the Samsara Eye by himself, but he had to sacrifice his own brother. I would like to ask, which awesome time traveler, without cheats, dares to compare himself to Uchiha Madara?

I want to say that the protagonist is not a loser. It took him so long to awaken the Sharingan despite his low talent. How can the protagonist compare with those losers in Naruto? Rely on the halo of the protagonist?

I was convinced, and I thought it was pretty good at first. When I got to the bandit dungeon, I actually lost more than 30 chapters. It was amazing. The protagonist started hunting before he even went to school. Now he said that he has never killed a chicken. It will still be like this later. There are a lot of literary youths, and the troubles come and go. I'd better get out of the trap as soon as possible.

It took more than ten chapters to kill a bandit, and it kept dragging on every little thing. How could it be so popular? Not many readers are willing to read such a long story.

He is simply mentally retarded. He invents things and doesn't even know how to save some profit for himself. He helps transport supplies. He is constantly being prostituted for free. He still has the fucking shame to cry about being poor. It's simply outrageous.

I haven't read the novel, but I support this theme. Anyway, it's better than the super disgusting system literature. Get out of the system literature.

I haven't read a chapter of the novel, but I read the comments for half an hour haha

After reading so many comments, I think you are right. Without cheats, you can play your mother's role as Naruto.

Why have plug-ins? Because in Naruto-themed movies, the protagonist basically has to be the strongest in the end. In the original setting, there is no way for ordinary people to become the strongest. Not cheating the protagonist will lead to bigger problems in the plot setting. The ancient Hokage fans have stepped on all the pitfalls that can be stepped on. The more classic ones are Uchiha and Senju who directly direct the reincarnation eye, and the plural Byakugan directly directs the reincarnation eye. In fact, they cannot be combined at all. It's been so long since Naruto ended, and so many years of fan writing. The less I like to use cheats, the more I like to mess around in other places, such as the eight gates of normality, absorbing natural energy, changing the Substitute Jutsu into time and space ninjutsu, etc. It's better to cheat directly and get less scolding.

Don't read, I've already checked out the bottom, there's nothing worse than this one

Naruto without cheats ended up hanging on a tree. How do you, an ordinary person without inheritance, develop? It's funny.

Author, can you bare my chicken neck?

Looking at this introduction, you can tell without even looking at it. It writes about chakra as internal spiritual power. I really don't understand. These authors who write like this can't think carefully before writing. In the comic and animated theatrical version, there is no scene of cultivating and accumulating chakra from beginning to end? If you were born without chakra, you definitely don't have chakra. Unless you become Orochimaru's test subject, you won't be able to cultivate it. Chakra is physical plus mental energy. If you don't exercise your body and mind, chakra will not increase. Even if you train your body and mind, you won't be able to refine chakra if you don't have the chakra fire in your belly.

If you traveled through Naruto without a plug-in, you would think nothing of it. If you travel through time without a system cheat, are you still thinking about traveling through time? Even if you are buried in the earth and you can't get out, are you still traveling across the world?

It's so watery. It's so watery. . .