Cherish Flower Sword

I had the patience to read the Holy City chapter, and couldn't help but want to comment on it. In my opinion, this is a book with outstanding advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that the author's writing style is above average, and the fighting and various descriptions can give people a good sense of immersion, and it can be called a fascinating sentence. This is the reason why I keep reading. The world view and setting design are quite complete, at least there is no problem with the self-consistency of the logic, but it has not been fully explained. There are many shortcomings. First of all, the atmosphere is very depressing and tense from the beginning. As we all know, a better arrangement is to raise and suppress. However, the author has always made the plot design very heavy, and the parts that should be "raised" are often missing from the beginning. Male The protagonist is about to run away in a hurry like a rat crossing the street. The most uncomfortable thing is that no matter how much the hero's strength is improved, there is not much difference. He is either suffering from depression or on the way to suffer from depression. I can accept that it is not a cool novel, but I can't stand the abuse of the protagonist. There is really no positive feedback at all. The author has always said that the Holy City chapter will be relaxing. In fact, I am not being hunted, but I can't read the relaxed atmosphere at all, because there are still enemies on all sides, and the male protagonist basically has no hiding, the disguise is too fake, and his behavior is very high-profile. Here I want to talk about the second shortcoming, which is the collapse of the character or the character design. It's very unpleasant, and the first one to bear the brunt is the male protagonist. If the inconsistency of the male protagonist's behavior is regarded as part of the character, then the male protagonist in my case is an idiot who acts without thinking at all. Sometimes he kills without blinking, and sometimes he lets his enemy go without any reason. He is moody and his actions are driven entirely by his mood. Not only did the author fail to reflect the personality charm of the male protagonist, but he made it very disgusting. If this was the original purpose, I can only say that it was a success. The male protagonist's handling of the emotional line is completely different from the same person. In the first part, he is obviously an innocent boy who also cares about his reputation, but in the second part, he turns into a stud who doesn't care. The same goes for Lin Xi. It was obvious that they liked each other before, and they were forced to leave. However, when they reunited, they didn't dare to say hello. Her fiancé didn't dare to say a word next to her. Uh-huh, it was obvious that her character was still too reckless before, and now she doesn't even dare to say a word secretly. It really lowers her IQ, or it seems that the male protagonist is a fool. The character design of the heroine is relatively better. Miss Gao's character design is probably my favorite because her change of attitude is in line with the direction of the plot, she has a very obvious character arc, and she uses both desire and restraint very well. To be honest, Lin Xi's character design is a bit of a vase. Apart from her face, she doesn't really have any character charm in the plot. Of course, the suspension bridge effect is acceptable, but it's really not likable. On the contrary, the female brother's writing is pretty good, maybe because there are more plots, and a lot of time is spent living and dying together, so the writing is still more interesting than Lin Xi's. Lao Yun feels like a bit of a passer-by (until Chapter 400). She has a strong presence at the beginning but has always been labeled as a witch, which is a bit boring. Other plots are relatively small or unimportant, such as Du Juan and the little girl. The writing feels not as good as Tutu. I don't quite understand why I keep staying around, which feels a bit tacky. The plot is a bit incomprehensible. Many character events are deus ex machina without any foreshadowing. The combat power system is also very messy. The meaning of several levels is not that great. It feels like having more people is sometimes useful and sometimes not, which is confusing. To sum up, my experience is actually quite Akaashi, but maybe I have a bit of M, but I have been watching it. Actually, I don't have any big requirements. The emotional scene with the heroine should be better. The one with Lin Xi is really stiff, which ruins such a good writing style. Also, either stop pretending. Pretending half and then being deflated is really more disgusting than being deflated all the time. There is a kind of finger-fingered beauty, I can't say. After scolding for a long time, I hope the author doesn't take it too seriously. These are all personal opinions. Just write at your own pace. Although I feel that this style has no hope of becoming popular, but after hearing the readers' feedback, I will continue to scold and read at the same time.

I came here from another source, and I really want to comment. The IQ of the protagonist in this book gave me the feeling of an unenlightened primitive (that's a bit serious, but the protagonist does seem to be mentally retarded). The love and romance in it are also clueless. The protagonist is a person without principles. What is it about him that makes so many women like him? This novel is not only weak in combat, but the plot is also written in a mess. It feels like you just write whatever comes to mind. There is no outline. Just like the cartoons you watched when you were a child, each episode is an independent plot.

One thing the writing is not very good is that the levels are upgraded too quickly due to the plot, and the early world view, such as the Star Academy, has already reached level 8 before it was written. Peach Blossom seemed to be at level 7 when she first appeared, and it was surpassed in just over 100 chapters. So I deduce that it is either because the length is short and there are too many holes to fill. Either there is a training system or world above tenth level behind, but the upgrade speed of the harem heroine and heroine cannot keep up.

A must-read sacred book after lunch break

So far, it's inexplicable. It's okay to treat the written rules as rules without thinking. The writing is very good. Buy 100 chapters first.

The story begins when Jiang Chen travels back in time due to a car accident and dreams of a game he played in his previous life. What happened in the dream seems to be consistent with reality. He asks the innkeeper, but it turns out that it was written but it turned out to be the truth, which attracts injustice and arrests. In order to get rid of suspicion, he has more and more contacts. It is confusing and the person in the dream has also been found. The story is not over yet, and I am still looking forward to the story!

"Dream Interaction" can be regarded as the beginning of Jiang Chen. Since what happened in the dream has been reflected in him, a murder has also occurred. Seeing that something is not right, he decisively takes action. With his bold and careful character, the subsequent interactions with the female supporting characters are also very exciting. I hope to continue to add more, and I am looking forward to the next plot!

The First Emperor was so right in unifying weights and measures. It is a headache to memorize thirty types of cultivation for the tenth level.

If I change it to a traditional three-character or four-five-character book title, please help me think about it.

After reading two hundred chapters, I was immediately persuaded to quit. I was being chased, injured, and fighting all the time, and I didn't even have time to breathe. I read novels to relieve stress. After reading what you wrote, I felt even more stressed. I suggest the author change the beginning quickly, otherwise no one will read it. Reading a novel makes me feel so uncomfortable.

Some immature comments (currently around Chapter 170) 1. The combat power collapses too quickly One time, the high-level players can kill the low-level players instantly without any pressure, and the other time, the high-level players can't defeat several low-level players who have joined forces (at least it's very laborious and costly to kill). The third one is that it's not clear which one is stronger or weaker in professional combat. There is no specific introduction to the different training systems. There is only a name for people to imagine. 2. Some of the characters are very strange It's not that certain characters are poorly portrayed, but that for almost every character, as soon as they get a role, you can tell whether the author has used it or not. When the number of appearances was small, it could be covered up with a more eye-catching writing style, but once there are more roles, it is easy to see. Once a problem appears repeatedly in a character that readers care about, it is easy to make people think about it. Why hasn't this person grown? It's always like this (for example, Miss Lin seems to be in control of the overall situation in the front, but she is like a novice in the back. Another example is that the protagonist is not close to Lin (later, Lin's life-saving grace in the Xue Mansion is not counted, and almost all counts are the protagonist saving Lin). Another example is that Lin Mingming has already fallen in love with the protagonist (if she doesn't like it, the divination predicts that the two of them will have a good relationship) should not blush), but in the end, under such circumstances, they were brought together even though their strength was clearly disadvantageous to the protagonist. At this time, the bet was > the protagonist's life. Later, when the Peach Blossom Assassin made it clear, he took a group of people to send it off. The bet > everyone's life. Later, he would rather die than obey the protagonist in his dream. The soul left the body in the city to explore the place where the Yin Qi gathers and was manipulated to touch it. The safety of ordinary people > I am innocent (because she was embarrassed when the protagonist put the beads earlier). This reads very strange. If you can't overcome this trivial matter, then the so-called Taoist perseverance in this world is all bullshit.) 3. The protagonist's purpose is unknown Although the bet between the two eldest ladies is outrageous, at least there is a reason, but the protagonist feels that he exists just to exist. In other novels, the protagonist is doing tasks and slowly establishing a character. Here it is like not knowing what to do, and doing things with a character (and some characters are really set up for a certain scene and thrown away after use) 4. Although it feels like the author is deliberately controlling the content, the content is still there. It started to gallop uncontrollably (regardless of the feelings of the women towards the protagonist, the realm of the protagonist, or the advancement of the plot, they encountered enemies from outside the territory in just over a hundred chapters, and they came with the purpose of destroying this world). It feels like the author wrote the plot just to make up a certain scene. The intermittent feeling is too uncomfortable 5. I can't see the character's mental growth Including the killing of Song Yiyi, it was just an improvement in strength and cultivation, but no improvement in character or state of mind. He even emphasized his fantasies when having an affair with Lin later. This performance was not even as good as the tease of the Peach Blossom Assassin in the early stage, and other characters could not see growth. Whether it was Miss Gao who had experienced the test of life and death or the villain Jing Feng, they had survived for so many years and ended up having to deal with a person who had only disadvantages after winning. That's all I thought about for the time being.

How many harems will be collected? This is not a Shura field? ?

Let me tell you something, the cover is very nice

The author is talented and can still write so many chapters even though his grades are not good.

Slightly mature girlish atmosphere

Sure enough, I still can't accept that Lin is the heroine. Although Gao's early performance is a bit lame, I still like Gao and I slipped away.

The protagonist of this book has been in a cycle of hunting-resistance-acquisition. The plot is driven entirely by the villain. The protagonist's own internal drive is insufficient? (Now there is an internal drive for revenge. After revenge, the whole book cannot be about revenge). The protagonists in other books either seek immortality, become the strongest, and then solve the ultimate problem. The good points are that the female character is okay, she has her own emotions and is not just there to satisfy the male character.

To be honest, after reading 500 chapters, I didn't understand the logic of the protagonist's behavior. His character is capricious. Sometimes he kills decisively, and sometimes he refuses to kill. I can't see much affection for Lin Fei. I want someone else's body but I'm still so unfamiliar with him. I don't explain the misunderstanding and I'm secretive. It's clear that there's nothing serious about it, but I feel like I'm having a ghost in my heart. Someone revealed earlier that he was romantically involved in order to leave an heir, a person who traveled through the past and reproduced such heavy offspring. Also, the main character is a bit too useless. A martial arts contestant has to go through the back door. If he is weak and refuses to listen to the arrangements, he still complains about it. This is embarrassing. The protagonist's childhood and parents were not able to travel through time at all. They were always about revenge and revenge. It was really tiring to watch. I originally thought that I could relax in the academy, but then I met the Blood Emperor and was half-dead, and it would take a long time to recover. This feeling is really uncomfortable. Xiao also made a scene about resurrection after death. I really can't stop it. Can't I arrange some daily emotional scenes? It's all jealousy and quarrels, can we put some heartwarming plot into it? The protagonist doesn't have a heart-to-heart relationship with anyone, and is too lazy to even do basic confessions and clarifications. Do I really doubt that there is love between the protagonist and the heroine? Another point, I am a defensive reader when reading serious online articles, and I really mind the heroine's flirting with others. I hope the author can pay attention to this aspect. For example, Lin is always being supported by others, and I am not sure whether the Zhou City Lord will accept it. I heard that he was also in love with others before. I really can't accept it. Doing a good job in this aspect can attract more people. Some of the things written by the author are too cryptic, and then unclear later. For example, there was a fight after receiving a letter, and it was not clear what was written, and why they got together to fight. If the author reveals it later, it is indeed a bit too late. This kind of writing will put the reader in a depressing environment throughout the article. There are too few plots to reveal the saint in front of others. He is still in a state of being suppressed even after reaching the ninth level. Ksitigarbha has already been killed. How can a Ming King track down and suppress the protagonist from such a distance? I don't understand. But one thing to say, the writing is still good, and the scene rendering and various fights are quite attractive. This is also the reason why I pursued this. It would be better if the character creation could be more likable.

Tsing Yi

Advantages: The writing style is very good, and the character creation also has its own ideas. It is relatively full-bodied and not a tool for facial makeup. Disadvantages: 1. The title is deceptive. I thought it was a romantic comedy at first, but I didn't expect it to be more of a passionate martial arts genre. 2. The necessary background was not clearly explained at the beginning, and it was difficult for me to take on the role of the protagonist and enter the plot. For example, the protagonist's jade pendant is obviously a key prop, but I know almost nothing about it; for example, the protagonist obviously has an awesome brother, so why does he go out alone? For example, at first it was said that the protagonist only practiced God, but later it was said that he had practiced all three systems, and it did not say what exercises the protagonist practiced or how he practiced them. 3. The protagonist's personality and behavioral motivations are slightly poor, resulting in confusing plot. There are two motivations and plots at the beginning, getting rid of the "empress" and the curse, and achieving the goal after completing two dungeons. We should have re-searched for motivations, but the protagonist inexplicably joined Chi Yang's team. He was obviously scared to death and weak and wanted to follow the group into the Nether Forest. He also inexplicably arranged Chi Yang's death. He clearly disliked Miss Gao but obeyed her words. 4. The plot is not exciting enough and the beginning is a bit depressing. The protagonist is extremely weak. He has no room or room for his own performance at the beginning. He is suppressed in various ways but cannot resist. He is afraid to use the space distortion move indiscriminately and is timid.

I've followed it from beginning to end and voted for several monthly votes. There are many female characters that are well created, so I must count them out.

After reading about 400 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. It lacks logic, and most of the characters are as stupid as pigs. Originally, the female characters were well-drawn and I could barely read it, but the leader of the Lingxiao Sect also wants to be better. It's too outrageous, just like a teddy. The protagonist is too loser, and I can't watch it at all.

I read about 300 chapters today. Personally, the writing is pretty good, a bit like a martial arts novel. The disadvantage is that this book is clearly a harem novel. The author's description of the heroine is too speechless. They all have personality problems, such as arrogant man-women. The author's writing is not enough to give you a disgusting feeling, but it does not make the characters feel full. Moreover, as soon as the male protagonist sees a woman trying to beautify him, his IQ directly becomes negative, and his words and deeds make people feel disgusted as if they were reading a stallion novel from ten years ago. Moreover, women who are often described in large sections initially give you a sense of the protagonist's camp, but they often reverse the direction and make the protagonist appear extremely mentally retarded. And if you keep watching it, you will feel that the plot is too rushed, and there is no chance to rest. You will feel very tired, and it will also give you a sudden feeling of confusion. You just don't know why the plot suddenly reaches this point. There are obviously other options. It advances too fast, too tiring, and has no routine at all. Just like hitting a involves b, then hit b immediately, and then involve c, and hit c to do d. The article is not good, but it is too tiring. Moreover, around 300 chapters in, the male protagonist is so romantic and has affairs with so many women because he is afraid of losing his bloodline, and there is also a plot that is too close to the wall. . . . I don't know why the author wrote this in the harem article. . . If you can tolerate these points, the writing is really good. The plot is average and makes me feel an inexplicable love and an inexplicable hatred. It is about average, just to pass the time. The plot is too fast, and you will not understand what it means at a glance.

After listening to the 300 chapters, I complained about it, it was a bit holy, it was also very verbose, and there were very few chapter comments. I don't know if other book lovers are also a little bit pained by reading this. I hope the plot will get better in the future.

I want to apply to become an operating officer, but why do I need 500 contribution points from the book club? How can I do this? I have already posted a lot about this chapter.

The plot is very good, and the main character is also very likable with a decisive and decisive character, but I feel that the fault lies with the female character. So far, all the frustrations are basically due to the female character. Gao's character was not good at first, but it got better later. Now it is Lin who feels more caodan. If the female character can be written better, this book should be popular (the above is purely a personal opinion)

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Good news: The author's writing has a bit of a cologne flavor, and it feels very quaint. Bad news: The author's beginning is a bit clueless like many of Gu Long's beginnings. To be honest, this kind of beginning is not suitable for the current environment that focuses on the golden three chapters. Gu Long was able to become popular with this kind of beginning because his subsequent writing was interesting enough, and the other is that at that time, there were not so many books for readers to choose from like online books now. Also, what are the book friends talking about? Why are there so many names of people I haven't seen before...

The author can be considered a character for being able to write for so long.

I read almost the first 200 chapters and didn't understand it at all. It feels like the protagonist has been running away, but I don't know why he is running. What kind of Buddha and evil gods are chasing the protagonist and trying to kill him for some unknown reason? What are they talking about?