Immortality Martial Arts: I Have a Golden Cicada Clone

What I wrote before was okay, the villain was pretty intelligent, but when I saw RuV, I ordered all of them, and then I ended up complaining about all the things I wanted to say this year. Is there a standard for measuring genius in this world? By age, the protagonist is probably less than 20, maybe around 20 at most, and if someone in their twenties has less resources than you at the same age and level, and is more powerful than you, you call them trash. It's great, everyone has a pair of sharp eyes, and it can be seen at a glance that there is no useless character like the protagonist Jin Chan. Whether the world in this book is of a lower level than myself, no matter whether the other person is young or not, he is a waste. And every time the villain loses in a fight, the first reaction is not that he is so terrifying that he cannot be kept, but that I am very embarrassed if I lose? Is it possible that all the high-level officials here came here as talents of heaven and have never met anyone who is more talented than themselves? There were people who said that strong martial arts can break through the ten realms before, but there is no trace of this at all later. There are only two martial arts in a small town. Logically speaking, this kind of ladder should not be rare. At least everyone knows about it. Is it true that the average person in martial arts is illiterate? As for the talisman in the front, it is clearly written that the protagonist has talents that can assist learning, but it is not mentioned at all later. There are resources and tutorials, but the protagonist has not used them at all, even if he has learned to earn resources? The same goes for Xuanmen, just pretend that this thing doesn't exist. Moving back to the Hades Temple, has the protagonist killed all the villains he encountered, or is he hiding them all? No one knows that the protagonist can cross levels to defeat monsters, and the tactics are just like sending people to deliver food. The last few chapters have been better, at least I know that someone stronger from the Tenth Realm is coming. But I am curious, does the strong person not exist or what? Every time the villain appears is only a little stronger than the protagonist, he can be beaten to death with a single blow, or he can be beaten to death by force. Anyone with a discerning eye can calculate that it takes less than a year for the protagonist to go from the Seventh Realm to the Ninth Realm. Why shouldn't such a genius be killed and left to wait for others to kill him? Are you really going to treat someone as someone who practices evil skills and achieves quick breakthroughs? Well, although it looks like the protagonist is enslaving ghosts, let's just say that the protagonist is practicing evil skills, but you want to steal people's things and just take it for granted without checking the information? Or is the status of martial arts practitioners in this world generally low? Obviously, I just said that the first five realms are low but not weak in the back. Did Xuan Xiu and Xuan Xiu take medicine? They were all stupid, obviously they were on the front line of the battlefield, and their various displays of intelligence made me wonder why the Great Wall was not broken. My entire booking was in vain.

This book is inconsistent. (The protagonist's strength is level 3, King Kong is indestructible at level 1) Kaijin Shen can fight against an expert at level 5. (The protagonist's level is level 4, King Kong is indestructible at level 2). The hand crossbow can break defenses. 5 Masters are worse than hand crossbows.

It jumped right after that Bai Mang was killed, and the whole story began to become strange and strange. The combat effectiveness also fluctuated, and the realm became more and more like a decoration.

If you don't know how to take a nickname, don't write it! All the protagonists are either Mang King Kong or Bloody Man Killer. Isn't it funny!

The previous version of Jin Chan had 150,000 words of eunuch. How many words are planned for this book?

So poisonous! Just go hunting with an unfamiliar person just for the corpse of a monster! And this was when I just got 1,000 taels of silver!

Pan World Invasion Company is recruiting 3,000 world pioneers online. Wholesale system, after completing the world reclamation, 90% of the world origin will be reclaimed by the Shanghai Stock Exchange. Interested parties will reply "I voluntarily sign the contract!"

I haven't thought about the talent in the future yet. If you have any suggestions, please leave them here~

Did the AI ​​write the chapters one or two hundred later? What the hell are they? The opponents are all idiots. The protagonist has killed so many people in the 8th and 9th realms, but he still wastes time with the 7th realm. The other side also arranges for garbage to be sent non-stop. This is awesome.

There are so many typos and omissions, the sentences are broken randomly, and the punctuation is used randomly. This kind of writing attitude will never have a chance to become famous in my next life.

There are so many clones of little insects lately.

The subsequent realm comparison and battle scene design are a mess, and the descriptions are repetitive. The two sentences "seeking death", "go to hell" and "why are you so strong" are repeated over and over again, just like teasing. Without wasting points, this book is discarded.

After reading three chapters, I felt that it was unremarkable. Not attractive at all. Weeds

Why bother when anti-theft is so good? I can guarantee that it will be fully booked, can you guarantee that it will not be unfinished? Goodbye to you

If you don't just make a dead hand, you can still chat and wait for others to turn over your cards

Whatever is written at the end, I doubt it was written in IA.

Why do you feel that after going to the Yuanyang Gang, Pig's Feet has been in a state of confusion all day long? The most important thing is the Yuanyang Gang's exercises and feeding the golden cicada, but they are not there. Didn't the previous article say that the Qi beads inhale the qi and blood to feed the golden cicada? Why did he start selling Qi and blood-filled Qi beads later?

This book was supposed to be a god, but after the 150th chapter, it was full of murder, chaos, aesthetic fatigue, and no life at all. For example, if you are asked to eat and work 24 hours a day, do you think it is good? . . I hope this can change in the next book

Even if you are Gou, you can't have a clone or a vest! There are plug-ins, let alone clones! If you enable plug-ins, you must act like you have plug-ins enabled! The most annoying ones say that plug-ins are enabled and you have to rely on yourself to upgrade. It is recommended to watch game videos to see what plug-ins are, or use them to gain inspiration.

You even got the main character's name wrong in the introduction, how can I trust you to write it seriously? ?

With more than 4 million words, the author level is still Level 2. Is it purely for love?

The early plot is okay, but the later plot is too confusing.