Asking About Cultivating Immortality: Starting from Marrying Nie Xiaoqian

What the hell is this book about? No wonder there are so many books about it that haven't been put on the shelves. I just felt aggrieved in the dream at the beginning. After asking, I still feel aggrieved. My wife is dead and I am kidnapped and become a monk. I just have to endure the humiliation and bear the burden. I won't take revenge even if my mother dies. I think about running away first. What the hell are you doing as a time traveler? If you still want to practice, cultivating immortals is going against the will of heaven. If you practice like a coward, no wonder no one is watching. It's poisonous.

To be honest, this book is useless, the writing is too messy~

It's a complete mess. I've never seen anything worse than this.

I didn't want to say it at first, but the more I thought about it, the more angry I became. The protagonist is a loser when he has no skills, and he is also a loser when he has skills. I beg the author to stop writing and cut him off. Generally speaking, the protagonist in a book takes care of the author, and the author doesn't want to write a novel. The comment section is full of curses. If I don't scold, I feel uncomfortable, but if I scold the author, it makes me uncomfortable. The author is not poisonous. Hello everyone.

This female character is good and that female character is also good. It's hard to tell who is better. It's hard to beg the author to write a big letter. The female characters live a happy life with the male protagonist. Book friends who have the same hobbies as me like me and those who don't have the same hobbies as me just pretend they didn't see it. Don't curse. Last time someone scolded me and I was banned for a year.

Ghost controller? Snake repellent? Bug player?

The writing is all over the place, there is no main plot, and there are various branches. I just write whatever comes to my mind. After reading more than 40 chapters, I suddenly realized that I was reading a piece of shit.

Saw the 49th. It feels like the author doesn't have an outline. He doesn't even know what he wants to write. He writes whatever comes to mind. As a result, he writes in a mess.

Does the author feel disgusted? How old are you? Be realistic.

The title of the book is good, but the content makes no sense. After reading it for a long time, all I could think of was pain in my balls.

Wow I feel tired The writing techniques and style are acceptable But the plot is more realistic, or darker You can say that the protagonist is naive But I think the protagonist actually has the superiority of a time traveler But later the author did not hesitate to tear apart the protagonist's superiority and let him know that he is nothing but They are just ordinary people who have been spoon-fed for several years With that sense of superiority, how do you calculate over those people There is no heroism to save people alone There is also a sister I met in this chapter, who may die in the next chapter The reality is already so tiring Why is it still so depressing in the novel? The summary is that the writing style is acceptable, he may be a harem But I don't want to catch a cold

What is your protagonist's name? It's written in a mess. Lu Xiaofan starts out and becomes Lu Fan again. It feels like someone copied and pasted it wrongly on some unorthodox novel network.

What is it writing? It makes me feel aggrieved.

Let someone else write it. The more you write, the more confusing it becomes.

What does it mean and the title is wrong? The introduction does not match the content.

I like Xiaodie better than Nie Xiaoqian

Well written, can you support each other with comments?

What are you writing about? Did you change the outline after more than 40 chapters? The first part is like a normal novel, but what comes to mind later is what you write?

I don't know what to say about the writing, but I rarely see it written as messily as you wrote. I can only say that I read dozens of chapters, but I still don't understand what is written.

I would like to take my precious opportunity to recommend a new book of the same type, "Across the Heavens, Starting from Elopement with Bai Suzhen", thank you🙏